West: 5. Aven Brooks vs 12. Pav

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  1. TRAP.

    TRAP. i'm soo old school.

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  2. Pav_

    Pav_ New Member

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    Im down for anything under 16
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  3. Aven Brooks

    Aven Brooks .. bladerunner ..

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    .. in .. 16-20 .. early ..
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  4. Pav_

    Pav_ New Member

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    Aven Brooks?

    Washed up and talking shit, thats what this fags about.
    Aven's alot like storm g, but has nothing in the past to brag about.
    So listen brook, your not a thug!! so why you talking that crap?.
    When you prolly.
    Have glasses so thick, you could see people walking on maps!!.
    How could you even pretend to be like that?? you should be strangled.
    Rockin jeans so tight, that even your farts'll come out ya ankles.
    Im guessing your tired of tryna to get hoes, you seem stressed dude.
    So now your on ya knees prayin for loads, like you had a fucked up ps2.
    & me winning this match is a given, without that bull or doubt.
    Cuz ill stay stompin a mudhole in your ass till it resembles your house.
    & voters dont like rookies or noobs, so there isnt no hope for you.
    Unless you make a name for yourself.. then use it to vote for you.
    The rbl tourny is for the best of the best & your trash kid.
    & If I was formal, I'd transfer your wack ass to the halloween havoc.

    Mawfucka..
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  5. Oliver_Thenet

    Oliver_Thenet New Member

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    bravo at the map line pav
    nice shit
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  6. Pav_

    Pav_ New Member

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    Thanks duke
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  7. Aven Brooks

    Aven Brooks .. bladerunner ..

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    who says fart in a battle?


    it's like ..
    ..when i get wyle ur style gets ended..
    if ur Pa, consider this the re-enactment of Eric & Kyle Menendez
    ..look at Oliver.. that fake hurrah shows
    There's Starz, HBO, Showtime & all he gave u was a Bravo
    ..u whack ho.. i aint like other sound vets,
    ostriches prefer decapitation ever since u became an underground head
    ..surround lead.. no one knows or wants to have u..
    What, Why & When feel left out since it's always Pav Who?
    ..outrap u.. a deaf crooks runnin..
    he too busy fightin fo Women's Rights to see a left hook comin'
    ..u look sonned n .. just quit fag..
    fuck studios, animal cruelty can't even motivate u to hit Labs
    ..stick tags, ya gear's ugh.. the seams with dirt..
    he prayed for Hurricane Charlie to cause a Tide that'd clean his shirt
    ..get creamed n hurt.. u cant see me, g..
    abusin ya powers will only scratch ya Goldmember DVD
    ..after this I'll be in CB3.. but the God's calm..
    ur sexlife has a Beverly Hills background.. n!gga it involves Palms
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  8. Super.

    Super. New Member

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    HOLY SHIT ON
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  9. Mr. Skull

    Mr. Skull G.T.P.

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    Vote - Aven Brooks

    Pav - the walking on maps line was the only line you had

    Aven - Menendez bros. bravo (good way of flipping that.), lab and tide lines
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  10. Mr.Perfect

    Mr.Perfect New Member

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  11. -Oz-

    -Oz- ^^^^^

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    Good battle.

    Pav

    So listen brook, your not a thug!! so why you talking that crap?.
    When you prolly.
    Have glasses so thick, you could see people walking on maps!!.

    Im guessing your tired of tryna to get hoes, you seem stressed dude.
    So now your on ya knees prayin for loads, like you had a fucked up ps2.

    These were dope

    Washed up and talking shit, thats what this fags about.
    Aven's alot like storm g, but has nothing in the past to brag about.

    This was aight

    But lines like these were just awful man.

    Rockin jeans so tight, that even your farts'll come out ya ankles.
    Im guessing your tired of tryna to get hoes, you seem stressed dude.

    & voters dont like rookies or noobs, so there isnt no hope for you.
    Unless you make a name for yourself.. then use it to vote for you.

    Still, your getting better. This is the first time Ive seen a verse from you with original ideas in a while. Keep on truckin mufucka.

    Aven Brooks

    ..u whack ho.. i aint like other sound vets,
    ostriches prefer decapitation ever since u became an underground head'

    ..stick tags, ya gear's ugh.. the seams with dirt..
    he prayed for Hurricane Charlie to cause a Tide that'd clean his shirt

    These were dope, altho both of the second lines suffer from bad wording. Try taking out some of the unecessary words.

    ..get creamed n hurt.. u cant see me, g..
    abusin ya powers will only scratch ya Goldmember DVD

    This was good

    ..u look sonned n .. just quit fag..
    fuck studios, animal cruelty can't even motivate u to hit Labs

    This is horribly played, cant believe skull liked it lol

    In the end you both had about the same amount of lines I liked. I would say Aven had my fav line, being the Ostriche one. But what really fucked Pav was a terrible fart line, never use one again, they ruin verses man. Especially in a battle THIS close, it was sadly a deciding factor in my vote for

    Aven Brooks

    Good battle tho.
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  12. Sonz1

    Sonz1 Registration Please

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    Aven won....

    I pretty much agreed with everything OZ said except for the Tide line...because I flipped that one before...so it didn't seem as fresh to me.

    Pav....you had some good shit too, but I think you just underestimated your opponent.
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  13. Savir

    Savir ...

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    maps line was ass, some kid sold me that joke on a paper
    for 5 cents when I was in the 3rd grade.


    anyway..

    Pav.

    No quotable lines. Mudhole I seen done a couple of time, and both
    were better than yours. 'vote for you' type of shit is boring. And I don't
    really care if he farts in tight pants.


    Aven Brooks


    ..look at Oliver.. that fake hurrah shows
    There's Starz, HBO, Showtime & all he gave u was a Bravo

    ^^^
    Nice, now Pav knows how dickriders work against you.

    Ostrich line was a bit of a stretch, not bad concept though...

    ..surround lead.. no one knows or wants to have u..
    What, Why & When feel left out since it's always Pav Who?
    ..outrap u.. a deaf crooks runnin..
    he too busy fightin fo Women's Rights to see a left hook comin'

    ^^^^^
    Owned.

    ..stick tags, ya gear's ugh.. the seams with dirt..
    he prayed for Hurricane Charlie to cause a Tide that'd clean his shirt
    ^^^^
    good

    palms wasn't good, and lab was meh as well..but you won this


    vote/ Aven Brooks
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  14. Oliver_Thenet

    Oliver_Thenet New Member

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    geez
    pav u got kinda merked here dunny

    the mendez and bravo lines did you in

    all i liked was the map line

    vote aven
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  15. That Nucca

    That Nucca run it

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    lmao...first decent battle ive seen in the tourney...

    pav came decent...after the first half of his verse he started doin good...

    but

    aven brooks really killed him, i admit i didnt understand the first line, but after that everything else was good...the tide line was sick...and his personals were nice...

    vote Aven
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  16. Blessense

    Blessense a Kilo is 1,000 grams..

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    v- Aven

    first dude was iight, but wholly outshined tho'..
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  17. Oliver_Thenet

    Oliver_Thenet New Member

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    i just peeped this..im the LAST nig you will ever see dickryde
    i dont even like pav...thus the bravo...cuz usually i cant stand his shit
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  18. J Dot C

    J Dot C 1x RBL Champion

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    overall
    ab won...more dope lines...only like 2 from pav...and wtf at everyone sayin that map line is dope...shit's an old ass momma joke from like 12 years ago...


    vote=aven

    1Ne
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  19. DiViNeHaTrEd

    DiViNeHaTrEd aka ResiduaL

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    who is Aven?
    I like dude's creative lines, the Pa and Bravo lines were on some witty shit.
    Pretty good, reminds me of a few people with a different, watered down style.
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  20. EYE-Z

    EYE-Z rote my vrse playing Bout

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    aven raped the kid
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