West - 12. Sherlock vs 13. Insense

Discussion in 'the Onslaught' started by 6th_plague, Jun 1, 2004.

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  1. 6th_plague

    6th_plague More then meets the eye

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  2. Insense

    Insense take one...

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  3. NoShit Sherlock

    NoShit Sherlock Damn Homie

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  4. Insense

    Insense take one...

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    this guys type-happy; but he doesn't fall far from the rest
    cause you ain't gotta be a hippie to take a piece to the chest
    you can approach me from all angles, and still couldn't attack me
    cause i'll leave massive holes in ya face it'll look like you were shitted on by ACNE
    Prophet of the streets; when you hear a rucus you know I' am in town, watch ya back
    cause I leave bitches screaming in the background like a Kanye track
    last week was a gimme;this week he putting his true social skills to the test
    making senseless AIM's and phone calls, looking for ghostwritters, like tek does for AVS
    but through it all I got much love for you; but with love comes much pain
    so here's the nasty divorce from TEXT; leaving you bashing IT like Dain
    no longer do you have to worry about verses; your ride in this tourny is through
    peep the sig homie, I' am already looking past you
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  5. NoShit Sherlock

    NoShit Sherlock Damn Homie

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    what were you thinking???

    Ill kick an arabic saying, to show dat im better
    * *ohh Kitáb-i-Aqdas Lisán'ulláh mahdúd scibby scabber * *
    Translation: I CAN TYPE ANYTHING, AND WIN with no effort

    man the heck wit dis punk, even da best can get stomped
    see i can strecth my linnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnes too, and not connect wit a punch
    son is chest to chest wit da pump, da closer he'll ever be
    fuck it..... da guage have dis bitch
    go through shape forms, like hoes after a pregnacy
    someone correct me pleez, Who exactly is this dude????
    b'cuz we aint seeing eye to eye, more like conflicting views
    more like me just dissing you, In the cents ya could neva hurt me
    they say money da root of evil,
    and it explains why ya family tree & background is dirt cheap
    hands down, i give props when props due, Incense, is well metion
    told em i give two thumbs up, but he said hes more into fisting
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  6. A.V.S.

    A.V.S. Guest

    I get sick of lookin at shit like this....Sherlock shit was stretched in a few bars I rapped the words out loud and they were kinda flowing the dirt cheap line didnt like......Insense your shit was horrible I rapped it outloud it sounded like blah blah blah blah.....punches were ass I thought u put my name in there keep forgettin about that fuckin group.....uhhh...

    Vote=Sherlock by a mile
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  7. FaceLess

    FaceLess jook is my dad..

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    vote sherlock


    he was just better
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  8. MFB

    MFB Ciroc Boys

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    i honestly was not a real fan of this battle, both had stretched bars (insense's was worse) which led me to get bored easily. But there were a few good concepts and punches that were throw but they all were in the direction of insense. Sherklock did a good job going after insense which is why i think he took this one. goodluck next week.

    vote - sherlock
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  9. Imperial

    Imperial Lex

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    Both came clever. Insense had a few coo concepts. But he didnt connect that much. His wording was off on a few punches. And dont use piece/peace wordplay ever again. Sherlock was more creative. He was harder, more consistent. Good battle.

    Vote: Sherlock
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  10. FórmÅl LôGíc

    FórmÅl LôGíc Black Listed

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    Sherlock wins.
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