West - 11. FYIFB vs 3. Demik

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  1. 6th_plague

    6th_plague More then meets the eye

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  2. Dark-Vybe

    Dark-Vybe Active Member

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  3. Torch1

    Torch1 Speak Pimp Fluently

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    Hahahahahahahahahaahahhaha


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  4. Dark-Vybe

    Dark-Vybe Active Member

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    i dont get it..
    these RM kids gassin this bitch- Demik!
    its no wonder Fuels 2bucks a gallon- is it???//
    ya needa permit..
    aint even gotta liscense ta 'fish'-
    so ya rhymes 'come off the lips'- like ya stole 'em from Ken Kanish//
    kid wit 25hundrend alias's..
    5,000 post on all but 9, why rhyme- n!gga getta real job
    ill fill ya wit holes & leave ya under the sea like spongebob//
    & so sucka- i Torch2..
    in life i met my Goals at age 15- like Freddy Ado
    you jus idol "Verb".."need something ta do"//

    AkA DeMiK 416: dude, i work at mickey ds

    if thats not a misprint..
    im sure the only reason you applied is ta battle that Donald MC kid
    tha's why Vybe keeps ya wages at a minimum- like ya place of employment//
    boy get-back
    dude stays on the net longer clumsy acrobats
    he needs ta jis "tint" his monitor & live in that//




    word 'em up..
    i rushed my shit, id expect you not to take all week too..
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  5. DemiK

    DemiK does his own stunts

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    The nerds lost the battle, so allow me to steal
    A fag lookin like a mix between Jack Sparrow and Ally McBeal
    But really dude, your chances are gone yo
    When you took a pic lookin like the homeless John Leguizamo
    A chance in hell is what you really gon need
    Cause by the looks of it, you roughed up in that Iraqi video feed
    Your punches are weak and the shit doesnt flow
    With a structure that mirrors the complexity of morris code
    Vybe winnin the battle, shit....no
    The same dude that had the worst record in the RBL...4 times in a row
    to even fase me, you gon be payin loans at best
    We MADE bootcamp for you, like teenage Jenny Jones guests
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  6. DemiK

    DemiK does his own stunts

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    once again, demik half asses and wins it

    ON TO ROUND 3


    good showin vybe, gluck'



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  7. FaceLess

    FaceLess jook is my dad..

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    vote-demik

    why? because he was better
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  8. MFB

    MFB Ciroc Boys

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    vote - demik

    he honestly bitched fyifb to the fullest, he had better personals and punches and making of of his pick made it all the better.
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  9. aGiLity Starr*

    aGiLity Starr* Live Broadcast.

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    vote= Demik .. first verse lacked, Demik's verse flowed nicer, though half assed.. and easily took this battle.
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  10. Dark-Vybe

    Dark-Vybe Active Member

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    Cause by the looks of it, you roughed up in that Iraqi video feed


    rotf..lmaoo, good shit yo
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  11. Imperial

    Imperial Lex

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    FYIFB had the spongebob line that was pretty good. Freddy Adu line was coo, but it didnt diss him. The rest was kinda blah. Demik had coo personals, overall a pretty solid verse, better flow.

    Vote: Demik
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  12. Mr.Perfect

    Mr.Perfect New Member

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    i gotta go against the grain here


    vybe- flowed nice, original shit
    demik- cragga you came wack, ya shit was garbage

    Vote= DAT CRUGGA VYBE
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  13. BLooDSHoTT

    BLooDSHoTT R.I.P. Point Game

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    .. demik

    His verse was more solid .. punches hit much harder .. had a much better ryme scheme in my opinion .. which made it flow togther great .. compared to FY

    Vote- Demik
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  14. Rosebud

    Rosebud New Member

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    Why'd this have to be the first text battle I viewed on rapmusic. Bad impression. Very bad impression.
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  15. TRiX

    TRiX ..

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    lmao@this kid



    im flattered you went out of your way to check me out
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  16. namix

    namix u flip shit, i refine it

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    FYIFB


    i dont get it..
    these RM kids gassin this bitch- Demik!
    its no wonder Fuels 2bucks a gallon- is it???//
    --pretty played concept, but decent flip in regards to current events

    ya needa permit..
    aint even gotta liscense ta 'fish'-
    so ya rhymes 'come off the lips'- like ya stole 'em from Ken Kanish//
    --hmm...iunno, seemed a bit of a forced concept to me, but not too bad

    kid wit 25hundrend alias's..
    5,000 post on all but 9, why rhyme- n!gga getta real job
    ill fill ya wit holes & leave ya under the sea like spongebob//
    --someone from gunit said 'leave u fulla holes like spongebob'.. under the sea was a decent touch to it, but not enough hommie

    & so sucka- i Torch2..
    in life i met my Goals at age 15- like Freddy Ado
    you jus idol "Verb".."need something ta do"//
    --actually this was my fav. line so far.. pretty creative flip.. i assume its a legit personal.. not too shabby.. working verb in that way was pretty smooth


    AkA DeMiK 416: dude, i work at mickey ds

    if thats not a misprint..
    im sure the only reason you applied is ta battle that Donald MC kid
    --heh..aiight aiight i see where your going but didnt deliver all the way with it.. iunno, maybe s'cuz mickey d dont deliver yuck yuck

    tha's why Vybe keeps ya wages at a minimum- like ya place of employment//
    --oh, there was more to that one, didnt quite catch the rhyme scheme at first.. aiight

    boy get-back
    dude stays on the net longer clumsy acrobats
    he needs ta jis "tint" his monitor & live in that//
    --longer *than* clumsy acrobats.. but these computer type - your life lines are sorta played, if thats even what you were indicating.. decent verse... aiight attempt, nothing too fancy, but a couple coo concepts


    DemiK

    The nerds lost the battle, so allow me to steal
    A fag lookin like a mix between Jack Sparrow and Ally McBeal
    --heh, personal.. aiight tho.. sorta bland.. but still funny

    But really dude, your chances are gone yo
    When you took a pic lookin like the homeless John Leguizamo
    --ehh two look alike lines in a row are sorta simple, still personal and pretty funny tho heh

    A chance in hell is what you really gon need
    Cause by the looks of it, you roughed up in that Iraqi video feed
    --haha, this was better worded than your previous 'look alike lines' still a look alike line, but funniest yet lol

    Your punches are weak and the shit doesnt flow
    With a structure that mirrors the complexity of morris code
    --ehh.... too simple for me.. not feeling dogg

    Vybe winnin the battle, shit....no
    the same dude that had the worst record in the RBL...4 times in a row
    --aiight personal..not really punch-like though..

    to even fase me, you gon be payin loans at best
    We MADE bootcamp for you, like teenage Jenny Jones guests
    --hah, that was prolly the second best line of the battle next to your iraq one.. other wise you been commin easier than normal, but still aiight.. this was funny shit here tho, decent ender..

    in all honesty, this is pretty close because fy seemed to put a little more effort into his, or thought at that.. and demik had a couple too many pic references 'you look likes' for me... but he nailed it with the iraq line, that shit was funny.. and bootcamp was pretty funny too.. vote-demik... honesty tho, not by too much..
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  17. FórmÅl LôGíc

    FórmÅl LôGíc Black Listed

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