West - 1. Charles vs 4. Courtesy

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  1. 6th_plague

    6th_plague More then meets the eye

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    Rules:
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    -4 Lines for a no show.
    -Max 14 Lines
    -Min 10 Lines
    -You dont have to agree on lines though.

    Before The Battle
    -You must check into your battle thread atleast 6 hours before the verse is due.
    -No biting obviously.
    -No Swaying. (Ill make the prediction thread)
    -Extensions will be granted as long as you ask me 6 hours in advance.
    -Both people are allowed a check in post, any others a vote will be deucted.
    -Same applies to people in the tourny going into another persons thread.

    During & After The Battle
    -You must vote on 3 battles & post links in the your thread, but your incourged to vote on more.
    -If it comes down to a tie my fellow helpers will do the deciding votes.
    -You may up as many times as you want, but there is no swaying, and arguing in the thread. For every time I see either two, I will deduct one vote. Same applies to people outside of the battle if your in the tourny.

    Due Date
    -Ill be getting the threads up after everyone checks in. Ill give them until Sunday. After that Ill find replacements. But threads will up by Monday morning, & verses will be due the next Saturday. You'll have plenty of time to write, because Ill have the brackets up.
    -Verses due Saturday 1:59am Eastern Time/9:59pm Pacific Time

    If you need to talk to someone get at: Formal Logic (Aim: MrWriteswell, Email: InvisionTheEnd@hotmail.com), rapter2k(aim: askkaboutme, email: askkaboutme@aol.com), Courtesy or Yo momma 2nd. Ill get their aim's and email soon.
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  2. Courtesy

    Courtesy Level With Me

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    Charrrrlessss..

    ..should be fun, i'll throw 14 at cha

    :]
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  3. Charles

    Charles Kwelity

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    Itll be fun,yes,destroying you

    14ns fine
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  4. Charles

    Charles Kwelity

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    Accidental post ya'l,my bad
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  5. Courtesy

    Courtesy Level With Me

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    Screw it, i really have no time once again..

    ..so yeah i'm gonna key somethin

    Charles,

    It's apparent you think your good, an it's to bad your clarified as a loser..
    ..america onlines #1 user,
    chances of charles winning a battle are more 'less proof' than wine coolers..
    charles=wackness it's a fact kid, he wont drop an his tracks wont sell..
    ..actually, I QUIT
    ^^ but thats what you should've said 2 years ago in the RBL..
    dont take it personal, but your meta's an punches are corny,
    ..cuz charles shits packed tight
    an come to think of it, his verses are about as 'solid' as richard coreys..
    so step back dipshit, before i start cippin bitches dude..
    ..cuz i'll 'kick in' your knees
    hard enough for the fbi an SWAT to run through..

    just to even it up..

    Cut this fag up in pieces, C do it like 99' an still squeezes..
    ..while you spit i'll check off the facts,
    CHECK your wack CHECK your rhymes are weakness..
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  6. Charles

    Charles Kwelity

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    Punchlines,this is how to use em..

    Resin style..

    Aiyyo..

    I don't give a fuck about ur revenge,im raw and lethal
    But I hear u do always have the last laugh..
    .. Cuz u think slower than most normal people
    Im hood, nicca, many bullets spray when i shoot at u
    So after..the only organs near ya body...
    .. Will be the ones that play at ya funeral
    I hate people with dumbass names,im grinin' these herbs
    If u had any courtesy uda never tried fuckin typin a verse..
    Each bar u drop makes u look worse,so class this opinion,
    The last 2 lines didnt 'even it up'..
    .. It just further improved my muhfuckin chances of winnin
    People flip my name,my pba ego, n any other fillerish cuss'
    But your suck a dumbfuck..
    .. In your verse u wernt clever enough,to use unorigional stuff!
    You're number FOUR in a tourney,this is gotten dirty..
    I faced iller in the rbl that can't make it out the bottom thirty
    With the girls,this fucking faggot just sucks truly
    Cuz only bitch near Court i ever seen was fuckin judge Judy!!!

    Sleep,Faggot
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  7. aGiLity Starr*

    aGiLity Starr* Live Broadcast.

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    alright check this out ..

    both of you tried to use unique styles with your verses.. both did it pretty well actually..

    Courtesy- You had some pretty good lines, and alot of personals towards Charles..

    Cut this fag up in pieces, C do it like 99' an still squeezes..
    ..while you spit i'll check off the facts,
    CHECK your wack CHECK your rhymes are weakness..


    dope trio of lines to close out your verse. I like that. hmm.. 8/10


    Charles- your verse was flames, absolute flames.. the style you used was off the chains .. alot of quotable lines in your verse.

    I don't give a fuck about ur revenge,im raw and lethal
    But I hear u do always have the last laugh..
    .. Cuz u think slower than most normal people

    ---- dooooooope.

    Each bar u drop makes u look worse,so class this opinion,
    The last 2 lines didnt 'even it up'..
    .. It just further improved my muhfuckin chances of winnin

    --- best 3 lines in your verse. 9/10


    Both verses were dope. But Im gonna give my vote to Charles.. nice job guys.. return the summerlsam favor and peep LiQ vs. Vern Acular.
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  8. Imperial

    Imperial Lex

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    Courtesy was ok. The fbi SWAT line was coo. But overall, he wasnt too clever. Charles had nice punches the whole way through. Closer was nice, opener was a little played. Organ line was a little played, but flipped nicely. Personals were better. Overall, his verse was jus harder and more witty.

    Vote: Charles
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  9. FaceLess

    FaceLess jook is my dad..

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    vote-Charlie..he was better with the concepts he had the better flow and just the better overall verse
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  10. NoShit Sherlock

    NoShit Sherlock Damn Homie

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    vote - Charles, in a massacre

    he played off his verse a lil, but i';ll have to pick out certain lines i like from courtesy, just to say this was decent, etc.

    but i can qoute charles shit in sections, good battle, but court said he was rushed, so be it
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  11. FórmÅl LôGíc

    FórmÅl LôGíc Black Listed

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