[Week XII]7. Magus via The Dark -vs- 8. BoogaTheGreat

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  1. King Grimet

    King Grimet King Grimet

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  2. -=Blazin-Armor=-

    -=Blazin-Armor=- New Member

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    30 as usual, Probably post tomorrow it's pretty late.
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  3. -=Blazin-Armor=-

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    You like using my 3 bar style? i'll show you how it's done.




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    I'm a pioneer to this battle thing, i'll smash this wack geek.
    You looked up 2 Magus verses, and flipped em to win last week.
    that verse was bad, even I couldn't work with that.
    Your name is false.
    Cuz 'thegreat' is just another 8 spot you dont deserve to have.
    Who hooked you up?..who're you a favorite to?
    anybody that picks booga....

    on second thought i'll save it, it's almost as played as you.
    that's the end, this one is finish. they'll give me the mentions.
    you only LOOK at text pro's, like optimists in data entry positions.
    you've dug your own grave. cant believe this bitch won.
    it's ok..it'll take more than fingers to dig booga outta this one.
    ive fucked beautiful, broads. Magus gets laid with huns.
    only models in his case.
    ...............come with instructions, and miniature laser guns.
    your lines are all forced, control your textin.
    the best set up you had is the "ayyyy" you stole from resin.
    plus he's a flamers, addicted to them boys fa real.
    he'll dew can, til pepsi contacts him with an endorsement deal.
    when i dropped this verse, this thread wont be open tonight.
    your best line last week, was the one you quoted from MIC.
    you'd better wait..and vote before your verse gets read foo.
    cuz the best metaphor u'll post are the ones that beat deadpool.
    better yet still..just no show..youre so awful it hurts.
    think week 7 is good..wait four the week 30 that follow this verse.


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    HAHAHAHA..Match me? nope..there's nothing that's worse.
    you'll be deducted votes, JUST for postin that crummy ass verse.
    and youre not a ladies man, all flossing aside
    chicks that dig booga...take one look, before they toss him aside.
    see..he comes from a chunky family.. really poor people.
    i'd bury your fam...
    but i'd have to plot holes big enough to demand 4 sequels.
    figure it out..i'll say it plainly you suck.
    your verse must be smoking..cuz it's only made for 18 and up.
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  4. BoogaTheGreat

    BoogaTheGreat yuuule!

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  5. BoogaTheGreat

    BoogaTheGreat yuuule!

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    so this is what you IM'd me a million times about?
    that hot ass garbage?
    wtf

    ayyyyy
    Mods tired of you winnin...went and got you ether
    "Best RBL Champ...not Aura"...
    ..Nigga it's not you either
    sit down, you the student nigga, ill play teacher
    need a haircut?
    I'll go brutus on ya bitch ass caesar
    plus ya punches never land, n i hope that ya jokin
    If this nigga's AIM is off, its cuz he aint beggin for votes at the moment
    ya text is wack, but it's worse when you spittin..dude
    saves his audio's as .wav's
    cuz it sound like somethin a surfer would listen to
    hos know im bout mine..they all wanna see me tonight
    if he tell a bitch to swallow
    ....it's cuz his dog hasnt been eating right
    Aint it time to retire nigga? i mean, i already said
    that he so over the hill
    jack n jill should tell him to get the water instead
    this nigga ugly as shit...you think im lyin? how?
    Magus via the dark..?
    cuz the doctor wouldnt birth you unless the lights were out
    hit me up about the battle, i told him he was lame n borin
    said i didnt give a fuck..
    he said "that's ok, Im already used to paying for it"
    fuckin fag...i heard a faggot was a bundle of sticks
    then saw you..
    now im convinced it's one stick that look like it's been smothered in shit
    ya mother's a bitch, ya dad's a monkey, ya brother's a pit
    you look like a rottweiler, if it's face got pummeled with bricks
    this nigga's a virgin...i aint wanna bomb on him
    last time he held a ho...was doin yardwork in his mom's garden
    old guy still in the game...magus is brett farvre'in
    seekin a title...but nigga, you see how far that shit got him
    i know you love rapmusic and be logged on here for hours
    heard valentines day was comin and emailed janitor some flowers
    he soft as shit, this guy's not a thug
    what goes around comes around...n slaps him everytime that it does
    this punk is passed weak..& there's no help for this herb
    If u threw that verse in the garbage it'd prolly roll itself to the curb
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  6. Prodigal_Son

    Prodigal_Son FlObama

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    As much as I hate to say...

    Vote=Magus

    I was feelin' Bogga's punches more, but Mag had the flow on lock. And to me in the end that's what it's all about. Which is also why Jay-Z > Nas.

    Mag: "ive fucked beautiful, broads. Magus gets laid with huns.
    only models in his case.
    ...............come with instructions, and miniature laser guns."

    "better yet still..just no show..youre so awful it hurts.
    think week 7 is good..wait four the week 30 that follow this verse."

    "see..he comes from a chunky family.. really poor people.
    i'd bury your fam...
    but i'd have to plot holes big enough to demand 4 sequels.
    figure it out..i'll say it plainly you suck.
    your verse must be smoking..cuz it's only made for 18 and up."

    All of those lines were straight crack.

    Bogga: "Mods tired of you winnin...went and got you ether
    "Best RBL Champ...not Aura"...
    ..Nigga it's not you either
    sit down, you the student nigga, ill play teacher
    need a haircut?
    I'll go brutus on ya bitch ass caesar"

    "hos know im bout mine..they all wanna see me tonight
    if he tell a bitch to swallow
    ....it's cuz his dog hasnt been eating right"

    "hit me up about the battle, i told him he was lame n borin
    said i didnt give a fuck..
    he said "that's ok, Im already used to paying for it"
    fuckin fag...i heard a faggot was a bundle of sticks
    then saw you..
    now im convinced it's one stick that look like it's been smothered in shit"

    Dope ass verse in general.
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  7. Everest

    Everest E=MC Eat my Shorts

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    Vote magus..

    Booga-- just didn't feel it..wasn't bad.. just wasn't feeling it...

    Magus.. long verse and you stayed pretty consitent..some personals, clever concepts,, some booger plays which are always fun..good work
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  8. MIC'ed Up

    MIC'ed Up Don't talk Just Spit

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    This was an entertaining enough both battlers brought a wide variety of good and played shit. Flow wise it was near neck and neck but Magus had a slightly better rhyme scheme. Personals and Funny lines really wasn't done well outside the box on both sides so that was a stale mate. Magus gets punches and consistency not true haymakers but creative enough. Good effort Booga in the middle of the verse those played lines costed you a bit.

    Vote: Magus
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  9. -=Blazin-Armor=-

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    maybe i shouldve wrote that line metafour
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  10. Stars€reen

    Stars€reen forever

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    vote - Magus

    clearly harder hittin lines, better concept

    this was a go battle
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  11. Out Write

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    Magus:

    you've dug your own grave. cant believe this bitch won.
    it's ok..it'll take more than fingers to dig booga outta this one.


    ive fucked beautiful, broads. Magus gets laid with huns.
    only models in his case.
    ...............come with instructions, and miniature laser guns.

    see..he comes from a chunky family.. really poor people.
    i'd bury your fam...
    but i'd have to plot holes big enough to demand 4 sequels.

    ^nice lines.. Plot holes line was pretty ill




    Booga:

    hos know im bout mine..they all wanna see me tonight
    if he tell a bitch to swallow
    ....it's cuz his dog hasnt been eating right

    this nigga ugly as shit...you think im lyin? how?
    Magus via the dark..?
    cuz the doctor wouldnt birth you unless the lights were out

    hit me up about the battle, i told him he was lame n borin
    said i didnt give a fuck..
    he said "that's ok, Im already used to paying for it"

    ya mother's a bitch, ya dad's a monkey, ya brother's a pit
    you look like a rottweiler, if it's face got pummeled with bricks

    he soft as shit, this guy's not a thug
    what goes around comes around...n slaps him everytime that it does

    ^Haha.. Some of those lines were pretty funny yo.. Im actually gonna have to go with Booga on this one, I was feelin his style/punches more. Less forced.

    THat Plot holes line was dope tho still

    v/Booga
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  12. Yung Troy

    Yung Troy The Lyrical King

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    vote=Magus

    Had some pretty good punches and the flow was consistent...................
    Boog had some good punches too but sometime in the middle of reading it, I started getting bored
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  13. MetaSin

    MetaSin I Don't Believe In You...

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    you guys are both dudes that should be around top 10 in this league, if not top 5.

    mag i didn't like how u started off not using "pick booga" lines with the played line, but then had like 2 others in the verse... kinda weak, cuz the first line was actually effective.

    the 8 spot was actually an aite line. the models line was ok. the setup shit was funny to me. the data entry position line was worded funny to me... could've been way better... the dew line was cool, but again your wording isn't quite effective. the quoted from mic line was cool, especially cuz it was fluid. the weak 30 line was good. the plot holes line is dope, plain and simple. good concept...

    if your wording was better you'd be a beast...

    good verse tho.

    Booga

    good opener... caesar line was nice. hmm... some played concepts here. I like the jack n jill line cuz it was executed well, but still kinda old. give a fuck line was cool.

    fuckin fag...i heard a faggot was a bundle of sticks
    then saw you..
    now im convinced it's one stick that look like it's been smothered in shit
    ya mother's a bitch, ya dad's a monkey, ya brother's a pit
    you look like a rottweiler, if it's face got pummeled with bricks


    best sequnece... nothin witty, but lmao... it just flowed well and came off funny... then you just came with aite shit for the rest of the verse... i did like the trash line, funny...

    this was a very close battle...

    Magus Had the Best Punch with the plot holes line... And then A bunch of Good to OK lines, tho the booger lines were eeeeh. plus ur rhyming wasn't that good. aside with aside?

    Booga Made me laugh out loud with the rottie line... I liked the opener, and the caesar lines. The flow was better, but you had more played lines, and a few questionable rhyme-word choices as well.

    i read both verses again and my vote is for Booga...

    Magus had some better concepts, but the execution on most of them wasn't that good to me... It was a far cry from a bad verse, but Booga's made me laugh out loud, and after reading them, his just left a stronger impression.
    very evenly matched; good job guys.
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  14. Memorie

    Memorie Of The Long Term Breed

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    Alright ...

    that verse was bad, even I couldn't work with that.
    Your name is false.
    Cuz 'thegreat' is just another 8 spot you dont deserve to have.
    Who hooked you up?..who're you a favorite to?
    anybody that picks booga....
    on second thought i'll save it, it's almost as played as you.
    Nice personal, nice play
    that's the end, this one is finish. they'll give me the mentions.
    you only LOOK at text pro's, like optimists in data entry positions.
    A little awkward written, but effective nonetheless
    you've dug your own grave. cant believe this bitch won.
    it's ok..it'll take more than fingers to dig booga outta this one.
    Ok ...
    ive fucked beautiful, broads. Magus gets laid with huns.
    only models in his case.
    ...............come with instructions, and miniature laser guns.
    Lmfao!
    plus he's a flamers, addicted to them boys fa real.
    he'll dew can, til pepsi contacts him with an endorsement deal.
    Nice!
    when i dropped this verse, this thread wont be open tonight.
    your best line last week, was the one you quoted from MIC.
    Oooof!
    you'd better wait..and vote before your verse gets read foo.
    cuz the best metaphor u'll post are the ones that beat deadpool.
    Again ... Personals > Reg. Punches ... Nice Pun too
    better yet still..just no show..youre so awful it hurts.
    think week 7 is good..wait four the week 30 that follow this verse.
    Gfg. Should've been closer, smoking line was ehhhhh
    see..he comes from a chunky family.. really poor people.
    i'd bury your fam...
    but i'd have to plot holes big enough to demand 4 sequels.
    Geeeez

    Vs.

    Mods tired of you winnin...went and got you ether
    "Best RBL Champ...not Aura"...
    ..Nigga it's not you either
    Strong opener ... And for the record, Ether > Jay-z
    sit down, you the student nigga, ill play teacher
    need a haircut?
    I'll go brutus on ya bitch ass caesar
    Punch out-did the set-up, but it still did the job
    hos know im bout mine..they all wanna see me tonight
    if he tell a bitch to swallow
    ....it's cuz his dog hasnt been eating right
    Made me laugh ...
    Aint it time to retire nigga? i mean, i already said
    that he so over the hill
    jack n jill should tell him to get the water instead
    Nice
    this nigga ugly as shit...you think im lyin? how?
    Magus via the dark..?
    cuz the doctor wouldnt birth you unless the lights were out
    Nice
    hit me up about the battle, i told him he was lame n borin
    said i didnt give a fuck..
    he said "that's ok, Im already used to paying for it"
    Lol
    fuckin fag...i heard a faggot was a bundle of sticks
    then saw you..
    now im convinced it's one stick that look like it's been smothered in shit
    ya mother's a bitch, ya dad's a monkey, ya brother's a pit
    you look like a rottweiler, if it's face got pummeled with bricks
    Lmfao!! Line of the battle^

    Nice battle, probably battle of the week, but we'll see ... Magus' "Week 30" line was crazy, and Booga's shit was funny as fuck ... Hard decision but I think Booga's humor left a bigger impression, that and the fact I think he used the 3-line style to mock Magus so extra points ... Close as fuck battle, good job to the both of ya'll

    Vote = BoogaTheGreat
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  15. Schadenfreude

    Schadenfreude da nigga, Sha-Fue-Diggidy

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    Mag had some shit for that ass, no question line of the battle was the 'plot holes' concept, but I was just feelin Booga's verse more. Felt smoother and actually, it overall hit harder than Mag's, I would break this down, but 60 fucking lines is too much and I'm too lazy, Vote - BoogaTheGreat.
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    Lines of the battle



    that's the end, this one is finish. they'll give me the mentions.
    you only LOOK at text pro's, like optimists in data entry positions.


    you've dug your own grave. cant believe this bitch won.
    it's ok..it'll take more than fingers to dig booga outta this one.


    and youre not a ladies man, all flossing aside
    chicks that dig booga...take one look, before they toss him aside.


    see..he comes from a chunky family.. really poor people.
    i'd bury your fam...
    but i'd have to plot holes big enough to demand 4 sequels.







    ya mother's a bitch, ya dad's a monkey, ya brother's a pit
    you look like a rottweiler, if it's face got pummeled with bricks

    this nigga ugly as shit...you think im lyin? how?
    Magus via the dark..?
    cuz the doctor wouldnt birth you unless the lights were out




    Vote = Magus
    He had more funny lines, more quoteables. Both verses were good. I thought Magus edged this one out.
    Data entry positions was my favorite line.
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  17. Linesman

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    Damn I hate readin battles this long..lol

    This was a close one.
    Both cats came with cool jokes and cool lines here and there.

    The decider for me is, I didn't feel Magus' first 6 lines.
    Had he set it off harder, he woulda got this in my eyes..but Booga came out the gate on some humor shit. So Im givin him the slight edge.

    Vote - Booga
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  18. King Grimet

    King Grimet King Grimet

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    6-5 Magus is Winning.

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    its stickied on the main page of the league!!!

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  19. Name play.

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    your lines are all forced, control your textin.
    the best set up you had is the "ayyyy" you stole from resin.

    see..he comes from a chunky family.. really poor people.
    i'd bury your fam...
    but i'd have to plot holes big enough to demand 4 sequels.



    i honestly expected better from magus. rhyme schemes were non existent, no complexity, i mean, it was aight on the ideas, but nowhere near flawless.



    Mods tired of you winnin...went and got you ether
    "Best RBL Champ...not Aura"...
    ..Nigga it's not you either

    fuckin fag...i heard a faggot was a bundle of sticks
    then saw you..
    now im convinced it's one stick that look like it's been smothered in shit
    ya mother's a bitch, ya dad's a monkey, ya brother's a pit
    you look like a rottweiler, if it's face got pummeled with bricks
    *crack*

    i know you love rapmusic and be logged on here for hours
    heard valentines day was comin and emailed janitor some flowers



    booga surprised the shit outta me.

    fa real, dudes nice, i thought i was gonna HAVE to vote for magus after i saw his verse, didnt think booga could match, but he did and then some, blew dog right out the fuckin water.


    vote = BOOGA
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  20. GooseMan

    GooseMan Naptown's Finest

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    This was a good battle here. Magus came with some hard hitting punches and the flow was spotless. booga had some really good concepts and punches. The flow was off in some spots, but good overall verse. When it comes down to it I think Mag won this battle though, but it is a tough decision.

    Vote=Magus
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