[Week XII]45. Blackanese -vs- 46. Taylormade'

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  1. King Grimet

    King Grimet King Grimet

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    II. Rules
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  2. Taylormade`

    Taylormade` New Member

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  3. Blackanese

    Blackanese BlackaneseCantRap.com

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  4. Taylormade`

    Taylormade` New Member

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    smh

    your mixtapes not selling and it's not cos of your boring diction
    its cos no ones willing to spend money on fueling your porn addiction
    I looked thru his recent posts to find some ammunition to battle him
    and it didn't take until the FIRST PAGE to find something embarrassing
    your tracks are wack, and the way you spittin is a NO
    and to top that
    you'll need more than water to cure the hiccups in ur flow
    take a break from the rap game and develop ya damn skill
    cos it's lookin Freeze Tag the way your careers at a stand still
    they say blacks got big meats, and the white women lust it
    but ur Black AND Asian ... bahaha... myth busted
    quite clear my rhymes superb and im flowing like a river
    crowd'll be begging for an encore after I close the curtains on this nigga
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  5. Blackanese

    Blackanese BlackaneseCantRap.com

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    week one? and im battlin a weak one//
    you weak fuck ur no street thug, just a cheap slut//
    taylor made is just a raging gay at a gay parade//
    place ya best so i can take ya checks and make you say my name//(you whore)
    behind ya screen you can try to talk slick//
    but im gonna "finish made" like i just won prom king//
    i was stompin nonstop, so fuck it ill run later//
    my old converse? i had to trash em and then i chucked taylor//
    ima slut raper the type to bash ya brains//
    get ya daughter smash her frame and give her a nut tasting/
    then slam ya face and try to move to the next spot//
    he's a hustler (i know) pushing mad keys from his desktop//
    i know u checked the mypace my music is fresh//
    he just has no chance like community chest//
    and i know he got shook when he had to battle me//
    cuz he's nothing to nese (knees) like a leg amputee//


    sorry about the spellin been drinkin but g/l to taylor made

    oh yeah :) happy valentines to mr grimet (i posted this time :) :) :) :) :) )
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  6. Accoustics

    Accoustics New Member

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    blacks flow was amazing. but he had no punches. taylormade was solid.couple fo played line but i liked his first page and hiccup lines.

    vote taylormade
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  7. Everest

    Everest E=MC Eat my Shorts

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    well.. my vote feels pretty clear to me.. however Taylor, your verse would not have beat most of the people I've read this week, but I get the sense your on the right track,

    Vote=Taylor
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  8. King Grimet

    King Grimet King Grimet

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    Vote - Taylormade.

    they say blacks got big meats, and the white women lust it
    but ur Black AND Asian ... bahaha... myth busted
    quite clear my rhymes superb and im flowing like a river
    crowd'll be begging for an encore after I close the curtains on this nigga
    Dope - won it for you.

    The opener was aiight too

    Blackanese, not bad just seemed a little too basic. Nothing creative, more just flow & multi's.. Try to use some deeper concepts next week.

    Good battle tho.
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  9. Mister Mxyzptlk

    Mister Mxyzptlk pronounce my name

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    I looked thru his recent posts to find some ammunition to battle him
    and it didn't take until the FIRST PAGE to find something embarrassing
    they say blacks got big meats, and the white women lust it
    but ur Black AND Asian ... bahaha... myth busted


    that was comedy from taylormade


    blackanese flow was fucking ridiculous

    but none of his lines really had any battle substance

    i did like this though


    i was stompin nonstop, so fuck it ill run later//
    my old converse? i had to trash em and then i chucked taylor//



    Vote Taylormade'
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  10. .JackCottey.

    .JackCottey. El Bee See Veteran

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    V./ Taylormade


    This battle was really kinda weak. Both battlers came with nearly nothing to offer. So what it came down to for me was who came with worse. That obviously was Blackenese. No punches and some bars not even resembling a battle line. Taylormade takes it easily.
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  11. Resilient.

    Resilient. .. . ..

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    Taylor - Pretty solid verse here man..

    your mixtapes not selling and it's not cos of your boring diction
    its cos no ones willing to spend money on fueling your porn addiction
    lmfao - cool personal, nice opener too.

    I looked thru his recent posts to find some ammunition to battle him
    and it didn't take until the FIRST PAGE to find something embarrassing
    okay.. not bad.

    your tracks are wack, and the way you spittin is a NO
    and to top that
    you'll need more than water to cure the hiccups in ur flow
    I liked this line - good concept and executed nicely.

    take a break from the rap game and develop ya damn skill
    cos it's lookin Freeze Tag the way your careers at a stand still
    Another concept that wasnt bad - executed nicely again.

    they say blacks got big meats, and the white women lust it
    but ur Black AND Asian ... bahaha... myth busted
    this was humerous - And a good personal on his name.. I didn't understand at first until I realized what his username was.. good shit.

    quite clear my rhymes superb and im flowing like a river
    crowd'll be begging for an encore after I close the curtains on this nigga
    didn't like this closer.

    Overall - decent verse man. Some nice/funny concepts with good wording. Flow was pretty on point as well. Good shit.

    Blackanese - I honestly didn'tl ike much of your verse. I did however liked your 'rhyme scheme' you had going, but you didn't type it like you should have so people would understand it.

    week one? and im battlin a weak one//
    you weak fuck ur no street thug, just a cheap slut//
    no good. not for an opener.

    taylor made is just a raging gay at a gay parade//
    place ya best so i can take ya checks and make you say my name//(you whore)
    again.. no.

    behind ya screen you can try to talk slick//
    but im gonna "finish made" like i just won prom king//
    noooooooope!

    i was stompin nonstop, so fuck it ill run later//
    my old converse? i had to trash em and then i chucked taylor//
    no good.. tried to diss his name and failed..

    ima slut raper the type to bash ya brains//
    get ya daughter smash her frame and give her a nut tasting/
    nope.. but i liked the flow.

    then slam ya face and try to move to the next spot//
    he's a hustler (i know) pushing mad keys from his desktop//
    ehh... okay I see what you tried here.

    i know u checked the mypace my music is fresh//
    he just has no chance like community chest//
    this was funny..

    and i know he got shook when he had to battle me//
    cuz he's nothing to nese (knees) like a leg amputee//
    okay closer.. nothing special.

    Overall - Verse wasn't strong at all..

    Vote - Taylormade

    pz.
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  12. Linesman

    Linesman New Member

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    Blackanese was ok..but Taylor got this with an overall personal feel and more hard hittin stuff.
    Like people said here, Blacks flow was cool..but he was very vanilla with the ideas and whatnot. Wasn't fresh much at all.

    Just an ok battle..but couple of taylors funniest lines were enough to seal it.

    Vote - Taylor
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  13. Minfinity

    Minfinity aka bobbyfischerman

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    taylormade

    your mixtapes not selling and it's not cos of your boring diction
    its cos no ones willing to spend money on fueling your porn addiction
    kinda funny personal
    I looked thru his recent posts to find some ammunition to battle him
    and it didn't take until the FIRST PAGE to find something embarrassing
    no
    your tracks are wack, and the way you spittin is a NO
    and to top that
    you'll need more than water to cure the hiccups in ur flow
    nope
    take a break from the rap game and develop ya damn skill
    cos it's lookin Freeze Tag the way your careers at a stand still
    no
    they say blacks got big meats, and the white women lust it
    but ur Black AND Asian ... bahaha... myth busted
    haha
    quite clear my rhymes superb and im flowing like a river
    crowd'll be begging for an encore after I close the curtains on this nigga
    ok. don't use "like a river" thought like everyone else said

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    blackanese

    week one? and im battlin a weak one//
    you weak fuck ur no street thug, just a cheap slut//
    nope
    taylor made is just a raging gay at a gay parade//
    place ya best so i can take ya checks and make you say my name//(you whore)
    no
    behind ya screen you can try to talk slick//
    but im gonna "finish made" like i just won prom king//
    huh?
    i was stompin nonstop, so fuck it ill run later//
    my old converse? i had to trash em and then i chucked taylor//
    ok i guess
    ima slut raper the type to bash ya brains//
    get ya daughter smash her frame and give her a nut tasting/
    stretched
    then slam ya face and try to move to the next spot//
    he's a hustler (i know) pushing mad keys from his desktop//
    eh, ok
    i know u checked the mypace my music is fresh//
    he just has no chance like community chest//
    i liked the concept, just have the 1st bar be a setup
    and i know he got shook when he had to battle me//
    cuz he's nothing to nese (knees) like a leg amputee//
    forced

    vote- taylormade
    i liked black he just gotta elevate and get his setup lines 'up and not force his wordplay
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  14. BoogaTheGreat

    BoogaTheGreat yuuule!

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    vote: taylormade

    his verse wasnt nothin special
    he just got a really easy one this week

    blackanese just had a verse with multi's but..wtf anybody can do senseless multi's over and over
    that shit aint special
    requires no skill at all

    and the only funny part of his verse
    was how he wrote "you whore" at the end of one line for no reason at all
    lol
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  15. 4Matt

    4Matt On the money

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    Both verse were bland to me.

    Taylor wins it though.

    Black, nice flow, you just needed more punchlines.

    vote goes to Taylor
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  16. Veeyo

    Veeyo V for Vendetta

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    they say blacks got big meats, and the white women lust it
    but ur Black AND Asian ... bahaha... myth busted

    got my vote wit this line

    Vote:Taylormade
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