[Week XII] 1. Servical -vs- 2. CzarKastRophee **Title Match**

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  1. King Grimet

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  2. Rated-Are

    Rated-Are New Member

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  3. Servical

    Servical S on my chest.

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    Here, going 20.
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  4. Servical

    Servical S on my chest.

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    ok...

    some will say "Serv won cause the lack of voters"
    i've beaten some talent...
    your only hear to fill up my slots for wack oponents
    i should thank this fag for showing, but sadly for him
    only thing more suspect then his sexuality is his actual wins
    what oponents you stopped ? i pick up hoes and get twat
    while he's on hooker highway claiming its a lonely road to the top
    so stop, you gay and i'd make you a target for fighting ...
    but when i said 'this battle gonn leave you butthurt', czar got excited
    you far from the nicest, and haven't gain'd respect or honor
    you wont get archived, but i got something else that'll help you catch a Lama
    and stop the concept flips about the Hilary/Obama shit
    your last oponent stood you up, so what the fuck you know about politics ?
    see this is the champ match noones looking foward to
    cause we both lack big names...
    but yours is stretched like the metaphors you use
    you feather weight, i could swing and make you levitate
    one body blow, your chest'll quake and 'Sting' with every breath you take
    lets get personal, my moms a dyke who likes tranny's, there
    so chances are if czar's in 'Yamomsroom', he left his panties there
    we know how females are, and the time they take to prepare
    so i'll just strike while the iron is hot, and your straightning your hair
    when i said 'Here, going 20', i bet it shook him to death
    czar's like a nike commercial, sweating cause of the check
    think your writings the best ? we'll find out if its true
    you wanna be like the vets... just sign out when you lose

    bye.
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  5. Rated-Are

    Rated-Are New Member

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    serv .. ice with a smile.

    Ur textings generic, I doubt u’ll rain fists, its just about the same shit.
    but watch as unlike u, I’ll create a whole verse without a name diss.
    Lame bitch changed ya sexual preference, Might seem, shorty u wonderin.
    It’s a few loving him in the top 20 .. with 19 horny dudes under him.
    U struggling do something then, I flame text it’ll get this lame stretched.
    & reason u snuck past doc is because he had the results for ur aids test
    Leave u with a strange vex, ur a lonely bastard & really its sad dunny.
    Ya chick left u, & u Haven’t had a pet since u sodomized ur last bunny.
    U look like a fag monkey, girls like, the simple facts ya member lacks..
    .. U’s a tender cat, & all I can renders that, ur genders that ---> ?
    This wiggers wack & u skating on thin ice, slap shots hit ur head bitch.
    Slit his neck quick & put my blade at ya throat like Richard Zednik.
    Im on the road to victory, fuck my wheels they can tear into chunks.
    Its cool cause ya shits so tired .. I always kept it as a spare in the trunk.
    In this .. After the votes r in, no bitches, but a man is to be elected.
    As i shut out this pussy, like gays, & obama’s candidacy projection.
    for ur net steez, its wrecked geek, let see? .. I’ll just beat u to death
    fuck the gays, we gon need a trans later if u let ur text speak for itself
    cease with the mess .. look at ur verse ? isnt he a goof? dosent see the truth..
    ..that ur already wack serv, i dont need to read for proof.
    I have to give u props, tho what u spew is so tired, Dude ur no biter.
    Im speechless & dumb founded, come on …. whose ur ghostwriter?
    <-- proven dope, fire, whatever u can name, still ya ass is raped.
    Kill the damn erase, Ya lines r so tearable .. here’s some masking tape.
    Passion mate? I hear ya wrist cracking .. & I bet ya hands is achin
    That text is ass u making .. stick to porn & aggressive masturbation.
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  6. King Grimet

    King Grimet King Grimet

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    Vote - Servical

    Servical - The flow was on point the whole verse, the concepts were fresh, original, well worded, real smooth, hard hitting, funny..

    CZar - Tried to use some good personals, most of em didnt connect very strongly for me personally.. the sneakin past the doc line was straight. but not much originality here for me.

    Quotables.

    some will say "Serv won cause the lack of voters"
    i've beaten some talent...
    your only hear to fill up my slots for wack oponents
    i should thank this fag for showing, but sadly for him
    only thing more suspect then his sexuality is his actual wins
    what oponents you stopped ? i pick up hoes and get twat
    while he's on hooker highway claiming its a lonely road to the top

    see this is the champ match noones looking foward to
    cause we both lack big names...
    but yours is stretched like the metaphors you use

    lets get personal, my moms a dyke who likes tranny's, there
    so chances are if czar's in 'Yamomsroom', he left his panties there
    we know how females are, and the time they take to prepare
    so i'll just strike while the iron is hot, and your straightning your hair
    when i said 'Here, going 20', i bet it shook him to death
    czar's like a nike commercial, sweating cause of the check
    think your writings the best ? we'll find out if its true
    you wanna be like the vets... just sign out when you lose

    LOL funny last part of the verse and the closer..

    WAS DOPPPPPE

    definitley a line of the week.
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  7. Everest

    Everest E=MC Eat my Shorts

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    alright,,,i'ma read both twice so i can be certain..

    Serv---flow was a little all over the place... fairly clever concepts by comparison,, i.e hooker highway.. and the last 4 lines were real tight..made me double think about the check part.. but i got it ...


    Czar--- Aids test line was nice,,Zednik line,, i was at that game :( lol ,anyway.. alot of your lines seem to just be filler.. i.e dunny bunny lines,,truth proof, .. i dunno ..I wouldn't marry this stretched flow style either...

    Well truthfully after a third read.. I think feel there is a fairly clear cut winner. Both came well enough ,, but i think Serv came harder with wit, and punches that I liked.

    Vote=Serv
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  8. MetaSin

    MetaSin I Don't Believe In You...

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    decent battle... Serv wins tho. Better fluidity throughout his verse made it muuuuuch more effective. czar had decent concepts, but your lines are stretched especially in regards to flow. That makes it hard to enjoy the verse.

    Vote: Serv
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  9. Schadenfreude

    Schadenfreude da nigga, Sha-Fue-Diggidy

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    The first two shots you took were weak, but the 'Hooker Highway' play was pretty funny and the 'Butthurt' gay-play was gay in itself. The Lama flip was decent, you left the 'politics' idea undeveloped. With the exception of the 'Nike' line the rest of your verse was niceness though, so good shit.

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    Your opener didn't land well at all, the gay-play was decent, but the Doc flip was hilarious, eventhough they're redundant to a certain extent. Bad wording fucked up the 'Pets' concept, the question mark line was creative and the 'Richard Zednik' line was funny. I've seen the 'tire' play before, you didn't develop the 'Obama/Gay Issue' concept well enough, nor did you with the following line, plus your wording made it confusing. That 'ghostwriter' line was weak, wording was bad on the 'tearable' line, but I still liked it and your closer was wack.

    Overall I think Serv slid pass just barely, Czar obscure wording took away fron a whole lot of his bars/punches. Serv kept it simple and tossed in a couple well placed personals and preceeded to get on a roll. Czar got close, but no cigar, Vote - Servical.
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  10. Rated-Are

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    good shit serv ..

    my lines r long.
    & my wordings bad.

    i'll take that into consideration.
    see u in a couple weeks nigga.

    unless Metasin or Booga ousts u.

    Karma's a bitch.
    shut out everybody gettin here.
    now im gettin shut out.
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  11. Taylormade`

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    Servical:

    you feather weight, i could swing and make you levitate
    one body blow, your chest'll quake and 'Sting' with every breath you take
    we know how females are, and the time they take to prepare
    so i'll just strike while the iron is hot, and your straightning your hair

    the "while the iron is hot" punchline was bananas

    overall a lot of filler and not well put together bars

    Czar:

    cease with the mess .. look at ur verse ? isnt he a goof? dosent see the truth..
    ..that ur already wack serv, i dont need to read for proof.

    you had a lot of bad lines man, fresh ideas but not put together in a way where it could do damage and be effective

    v/ Servical
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  12. Me$$y One

    Me$$y One Cleanin Up

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    Serv, nice lines throughout... some funny shit with the hooker and vet shit which caught my attention. a few cool personals too so nice cool verse overall.

    yea Cz, ur lines were kinda long, but there was some cool shit in there. oh... u didn't shut me out btw.. lol... anyway tho, just seemed like a bunch of filler... still some cool lines, but not enough

    Vote Serv
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  13. ExodusIII

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    serv started off strong... and finished nicely... the middle was pretty much filler in my opinion

    czar took a while to get going... but only had nice lines every few bars...

    this battle was plagued with too many gay/ female lines...

    you guys didn't have the content to keep me entertained

    vote=serv
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  14. Linesman

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    Was a cool battle. Servicals verse was more enjoyable.
    The funniest shit in this was the aids test line. Shit made me laugh foreal.

    Serv was more consistent and the ender was real punctual..so Im gonna have to give the W to him.

    Vote - Servical
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  15. .JackCottey.

    .JackCottey. El Bee See Veteran

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    V./ Servical


    This was a good battle. Czar had some good lines and concepts, but Serv had the better verse. Better punches and concepts in my opinion.
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  16. i like dat doc line
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  17. King Grimet

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    9-0 Servical Wins.

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