[Week 9] [Champ] C. Menso(6-2) vs 2. coil grimley(1-0)

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  1. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    VERSES DUE THURSDAY @ 11:59 PST
    Line Limit: Minimum 8 lines, Maximum 40 (If opponent agrees, you may go over the line limit)
    NO BITING OR RECYCLING
    Biting/Recycling is the equivalent of a no show
    Extensions must be requested in your battle thread before the Thursday evening deadline. It is the opponents choice whether to allow the extension or not. Failure to accept/deny the request prior to the first vote being cast will result in the extension being allowed.
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  2. Menso

    Menso Go Lakers!

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  3. coil grimely

    coil grimely Tears textcees to tidbits

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  4. Menso

    Menso Go Lakers!

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    I'm a gym rat, matter of fact... I train people,
    But I got Bent out of shape... as a warm-up to beat you,
    You can't write... how y'all say my mans tight?
    When you're style is setup, sleep...
    .... like arriving late to a campsite,
    Dirty fuck and a faggot... look all oiled up,
    So I cleaned out grime,
    But even the 'hose' still can't get coil up,
    Yeah, I called you a limp dick queer,
    Openly throatin at that,
    Dude gives more head than drinking a beer
    With a shitty pour from the draft,
    Coil get hammered, not even close to one of my tougher duels,
    And if you ask Nvidia... CG is just another tool,
    I'm never gon' rest, I'm rising to a better success,
    While you're in a bigger decline than a benchpress contest,
    You should change ya name like OchoCinco or Artest,
    But... if you're keeping it grimey...
    ... then I'm just here to clean up the mess,

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  5. coil grimely

    coil grimely Tears textcees to tidbits

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    16 ~

    You're deemed as weak. Petite. Hunger to win proves your way, beneath
    Since you like to feed on punches this thanksgiving you'll be eating teeth
    Face's greet the streets. Any gender. My Sneakers and ya cheeks'll meet
    Like it's spiritual when it's said they can c.men sole's underneath my feet
    What a fuckin' geek. Get up. Talkin' shit like ya Ass is to Mouth my friend?
    ......I'll put my fuckin' Foot in it to prove that you can meet 'defeat' again
    Then, you, & ya entire crew started hatin'...
    Instigatin' tha devestation of this ass whoopin' situation..
    Like Pilgrims built thier own plantations, raded and invaded..
    Then after this war, what they saw? See men so discombobulated..
    Call it filler, but it rhymes well. Hell. I'll send you there in an instant bitch!
    You c.menso horny and when you walk you display it wit a hint of switch
    Get dissed by chicks now you pissed off. You peon. Wouldn't wanna be ya
    New England broads look at you and say "I wouldn't let'em buy me a be-ah"
    Fuckin' quee-ah.. Pictures of NBA players you'll sit and beat your cock to
    Your parents are shocked too...
    ........Having realized you fantasize of Kobe Bryant handling your rock too

    :nono:
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  6. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    Voted=C.menso

    Menso:
    I liked ur simple set up's and punchline delivery I enjoyed these lines the most:

    I'm a gym rat, matter of fact... I train people,
    But I got Bent out of shape... as a warm-up to beat you,
    You can't write... how y'all say my mans tight?
    When you're style is setup, sleep...
    .... like arriving late to a campsite

    &

    But even the 'hose' still can't get coil up,
    Yeah, I called you a limp dick queer,
    Openly throatin at that,
    Dude gives more head than drinking a beer
    With a shitty pour from the draft,

    Coil:
    Dude you tried really hard to out shine Menso with intricate wording and rhyme scheme but it made it choppy and came off as forced imo.

    both dude's came with it. but ima have to say menso edged it with a more smoother read

    Coil u had a few lines i enjoyed:

    Since you like to feed on punches this thanksgiving you'll be eating teeth

    &

    but for the most part. i think u should look @ that verse and not do those thing's again..

    "quee'ah" "Be-ah" :nono:
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  7. breathlesss

    breathlesss Registered Sex Offender

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    well, this was hard to judge, on one hand, i liked coil's verse more, but, on the othernad, menso had the more battletastic verse, little filler, very direct set up and deliver. If this wasn't a battle league i'd have voted for coil, but

    vote = menso
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  8. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    Menso:

    I'm a gym rat, matter of fact... I train people,
    But I got Bent out of shape... as a warm-up to beat you,

    You can't write... how y'all say my mans tight?
    When you're style is setup, sleep...
    .... like arriving late to a campsite,

    You should change ya name like OchoCinco or Artest,
    But... if you're keeping it grimey...
    ... then I'm just here to clean up the mess,



    Coil:

    You're deemed as weak. Petite. Hunger to win proves your way, beneath
    Since you like to feed on punches this thanksgiving you'll be eating teeth

    What a fuckin' geek. Get up. Talkin' shit like ya Ass is to Mouth my friend?
    ......I'll put my fuckin' Foot in it to prove that you can meet 'defeat' again



    Coil's coming along. He's gotta work on shortening up his lines a bit. I'm also not a fan of putting .'s in the middle of your lines. but either way, i got Menso edging it out. good battle guys.

    vote- menso
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  9. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    menso wins 3-0
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