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Discussion in 'Rapmusic.com Battle League' started by Riot, Mar 14, 2011.

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  1. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    bro gnome and oh ten don't rhyme so stop tryna be technical and claim since i wrote metro gnome for one bar
    that makes it my end rhyme. no, and it's obvious that it isn't you read, u connect, u relate,

    your reading, your connecting, but ur not relating because your lookin at my bar structure like a data sheet

    when FLOW is alive and its not DATA based.. it's not a STRUCTURE WITH A BOX IN IT, it is something that any one that can read, would pick up

    just because i wrote

    a,b,a,b
    a
    a,b,a,b

    doesnt mean that the line where A is is supposed to be considered the END RHYME PATTERN, it's to emphasize the RHYME and where to rhyme.. it's like i took a bar and halfed it, so tha structure wouldn't confuse some one.

    other wise ida have had written it like this.


    My Blizzardous Punchlines bout 2 Collaps His Dome IN
    this Retro-gnome..bout to get his Roof Snowed In
    like the metro-Dome did.back in 0'10(oh-ten)

    but then it'd be considered 3 bars and i wanted it to be 2 bars.
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  2. Riot

    Riot The Dark Hero.

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    Lol @ Tac.


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  3. Mrjdm998

    Mrjdm998 New Member

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    It should have been structured as three lines then.
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  4. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    since you're hell bent on keeping this retro-gnome shit why not say:

    Deja vu, I'm deflating this retro-gnome
    Keeping Minnesota caving in like the metrodome

    i came up with that in 10 seconds and it is much better.
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  5. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    too you.. text is something along the lines of what u have bordered it with


    too me, im here to RAP battle. in text form.. I RAP

    thus my music page

    I DON'T WRITE DR. ZUESS POEM's and claim them to be text

    but some people do.. eh-hem.

    i know this isn't audio but it doesnt change the fact

    RHYME MANIPULATION IS A TACTIC applied by elite writers

    just because no one here can step they game up doesnt mean, that it isn't a credible, commonly used RHYME tactic.

    ya it's not a perfect rhyme.. it's a super perfected rhyme.
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  6. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    when you said tactics my eyes instantly went to that word...im a true egomaniac
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  7. Riot

    Riot The Dark Hero.

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    This is exactly why we have lines and line counts and structuring. Cause I can structure a verse to be counted as 30 lines but really it's 50, that's cheating and horrible to follow.

    Stop being difficult, you're signed out now go away and stay away.


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  8. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    bc it wouldnt connect the blizzerdous punchlines that collapse his dome

    like the same way the metro dome did because of snow

    its connective description, used in writing they teach u this, it's like

    i walked up to sally said hi!
    she returned the greeting and kept walking by..

    when writing u should use descriptions that are connected and similar but altered completely to elaborate and more illustrate via words.
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  9. Konflikt

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    iah, i had better rhymin than u this week lp. my punches were weak tho
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  10. Slim Calhoun

    Slim Calhoun Perfected Hustle

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    i smell a MRJ vs LP grudge match coming..hardcore style!
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  11. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    uhm now because that bar should be structure like this


    My Blizzardous Punchlines bout 2 Collaps His Dome IN this Retro-gnome..
    bout to get his Roof Snowed In like the metro-Dome did.back in 0'10(oh-ten)

    but i knew people would look at retro-gnome and 0'10 same way ur looking at it..

    just because the structure doesnt fit ur mold, doesnt make it a less clever or illustrious line
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  12. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    my blizzardous punches deflating this retro-gnome
    Once again a Minnesota fixture will be collapsing, call him the metrodome
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  13. Riot

    Riot The Dark Hero.

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    You're a fucking idiot, that's not stepping up your game, that's going backwards. When text battling first started how you currently structure your verses is how we did in then. Then we evolved, you're not. Now go away you are not as smart or as good as you think you are. You know how I know? Because you think you're good.

    Bye Smitty Jr.


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  14. Slim Calhoun

    Slim Calhoun Perfected Hustle

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    LP you got aim ??
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  15. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    or

    my blizzard raining down, deflating this retro gnome
    This Minnesotaian wont be able to take the pressure, like the metrodome
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  16. Riot

    Riot The Dark Hero.

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    Did you see how many punches he landed this week? No he has no AIM.


    :)


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  17. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    Sorry everyone. I'm PMSing.


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    this nigga gonna take what i said, erase it because it kills everything everyone is sayin
    u weak weeeaeaaak old man..

    the lounge is ment for this

    u just mad bc i'm voicing how i feel

    but i ain't callin u all kind of names or bashing on u at all u fuckin taking this wrong way

    I NEVER SAID ANYTHING BAD OR DEROGATORY about u tac.. wacc ass venom, KON should know i don't got problems with him

    u over here erasing my comment's because u lost the argument..

    but I KNOW U CAN WIN THE BATTLE

    all u gotta do is go ham on a nigga..

    but i didn't do anything to deserve a ham ban.. or a reply change.. isnt' that the point of the garbage thread

    are u just harassing the users' on the site abusing ur mod powers to look like u hold more relevance in this discussion?
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  18. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    Sorry and I haven't had dick in days.

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  19. Extreme Venom

    Extreme Venom Well-Known Member

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    No doubt.. I'mma drop that thing in the pit too..


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  20. Mrjdm998

    Mrjdm998 New Member

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    Already beat him.

    Then beat him in the RSTL.

    Then got more votes vs him in a three person battle.
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