Week 7 RBL Rankings & Lounge

Discussion in 'Rapmusic.com Battle League' started by Riot, Mar 14, 2011.

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  1. Mista FREEZE 2001

    Mista FREEZE 2001 Member

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    Oh and ION U should vote on my and JAI's battle
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  2. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    lmao it doesnt flow better then mine mrjdm

    he has about half as many rhymes-strung together verses mine

    and word a freexe that really helped open my eyes on how a punch can be delivered

    unfortunatly some one will chime in and discredit what u said as well.. bc in the end, it's all personal preference.

    can some one tell me how kon's verse had better flow with this example:

    You should stop postin, ya shameful weekly and I’m not jokin
    LP couldn’t have a strong showin fuckin bodybuilders n getting caught blowin
    this bar’s closin n you’re the stupid cunt in the corner sloshed dozin
    You couldn’t slide a win in the league, if you were a prize winning trombonist
    Verb’s internet is not glowin, u been cryin since cuz the bond’s broken
    man, ya shame is ongoin like re-enacting the failed stunt of Hart, Owen

    Konflikt look like he gotta "chin disordah" his writtens get torn up!!
    Leif Erickson 'incarnate' lives in minnesota!!! why hasn't this been discovered!!??
    My Blizzardous Punchlines bout 2 Collaps His Dome IN
    this Retro-gnome..
    bout to get his Roof Snowed In like the metro-Dome did.back in 0'10(oh-ten)
    Hey "Kon" Look, you been here for eleven years.
    you got like 11 alias's.. that just makes u eleven queer's

    any ways.. ya u get the point

    same bar count i think, i out did him with twice as much rhyme scheme.

    so, TO ME, FLOW, is rhyme scheme. you can't have a rhyme scheme with out a flow

    but u can FLOW with out a rhyme scheme.
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  3. Mrjdm998

    Mrjdm998 New Member

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    Rhming more isn't better flow.
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  4. Riot

    Riot The Dark Hero.

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    Gnome oh ten?

    Torn up discovered?

    Bet disrespect then like 17 words then wet.

    Yes you had some inner bar rhyming but overall with end bar rhyming and structure it wasn't fluid.

    As far as punches, the the dome in yet played you flipped well, lake punch decent concept but wording was off.

    The viking concept is indirect and weak, like me calling you a sea hawk or star bucks.

    Your closer was trash.


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  5. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    umm actually, RHYMING MORE would indicate MORE FLOW

    so ur theory like usual, is a 15 year olds concept on rap, coming from a white, english chap..

    u don't think that maybe u should keep ur comment's to ur self? i mean, u jus look horrible every time u try to argue lil boy.
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  6. Ion Metatron

    Ion Metatron I Punch Faces 4 Fun

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    ok.. i'm bored here any way.. but before I Leave, again FUCK YOU RIOT!!





    yo, yo, yo, yo, yo
    Riots a Seahawk! He think he fly I'll fuckin' rip his Beak off
    Weekly Fish on his breath, His spits stink whenever he talk


    :FU:


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  7. Extreme Venom

    Extreme Venom Well-Known Member

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    This line wasn't that bad acctually.. but its not a good line to use in a Battle when your opponent is calling you all kinds of names & insulting YOU every line.. your talking about making PEOPLE(or suckas) Leave when you step in the room


    your Bigging yourself up, not dissing your opponent... It's a good line tho, but not for a battle, dig?
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  8. Slim Calhoun

    Slim Calhoun Perfected Hustle

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    saying im worthy of HW is an honor Jai..thanks
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  9. Slim Calhoun

    Slim Calhoun Perfected Hustle

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    by the way Riot and Gsus..hell of a battle this week..i was pretty confident..but both of you came with fire power!! props to both of ya
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  10. Riot

    Riot The Dark Hero.

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    Venny, are you able to create a poll thread?

    If so, can you make one for battle of the week and verse of the week.

    This next week we will be changing from people picking their own weight class to their 1st battle being an intro battle and when voters vote they can suggest where each battler should be placed.

    a few other things too which ill advise you of tomorrow.


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  11. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    I DONT MIND LOSING AGAINST KON

    it pisses me off that some one could say he had better flow then me

    better punchlines is UNDERSTANDABLE, bc since every trashes my punches i have no confidence in them.

    @ riot

    retro-gnome metro dome.. PERFECT RHYMEs! some of my slant rhymes i knew would get over looked like the CHIN disordah writTINS get TORN UP MINNESOTA, BEEN DISCOVERED

    i knew some one would try to say they don't rhyme and shit, but come on, let's be honest they do rhyme and i'd rather read rhymes that are manipulated and unnatural uncommon over reading BLOWING GLOWING SHOWING rhymes COME ON

    at least my rhymes are proof that im not using a rhyme assistant, not claiming kon used rhyme dictionaries im just saying.

    i said

    NO DISRESPRECT.. BUT THERE IS 10 THOUSAND LAKES WHERE YAWL LIVE
    JUST STILL COULDN'T get it wet..

    i mean ya it's wordy, but in an audio battle that shit would be golden here on text, it's to wordy stretched and ignored.. doesnt mean it isn't good bar, just means' people are predisposed to disapprove bc it doesnt fit the confines we are taught to accept.

    as far as the end rhymes i only had like ONE end rhyme that was a slant rhyme.. the minnesotta been discovered string..

    other then that, my flow was pretty solid and more level of difficulty was displayed.

    so u may say, that 50cent is better, but we all know TECH 9 is MUCH better.
    but 50 cents structure is WAAAAAAAAAAAY more similar to the structure implemented in this league as acceptable

    tech 9 structure would be hated on.. but we all know who the better writer truthfully is


    i don't mind losing, i just mind hypocritical votes. that is all and i can't get better because each week i feel discouraged because it's like nothing i attempt is noticed, and people like MRJDM feel better then me, when COME ON

    THAT IS NOT TRUE

    but i lost to MRJDM

    but i beat RIOT

    but riot has beat MRJM.. i mean come on what is really going on here?

    how do i get better when all i hear is what i do suck's, not how i could change it to make it better.. so what's the point to be a fucking punching bag so trash can some how get the win and put it in my face..

    MRJDM ur not a better rapper then me, i dk how u even ever beat me.

    i respect u as a writer, but as far as ur opinion's and the way u think, u r not even close to my intellectual level. so u beat me.., ur still not better then me fuck
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  12. Mista FREEZE 2001

    Mista FREEZE 2001 Member

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    *FREEZE laughing*

    NOT SAYING I AM A HEAVYWEIGHT IS AN INSULT... Its cool tho...
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  13. Mrjdm998

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    Just because you try to be black, doesn't make you black. Does this have good flow?

    You're not black you talk smack like your on crack and your wack
    I'm going to put a crack in your back for thinking your more than that

    No, it's got fucking terrible flow.

    Also, learn to type English. Like, just try it one day.
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  14. Riot

    Riot The Dark Hero.

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    LP this is TEXT battling, not AUDIO.

    In texting there is NO manipulating words to make them rhyme.

    Readers are not all going to read it the same way, thus it won't rhyme.

    Torn up and Discovered DON'T rhyme and just because you have inner bar rhyming you cannot neglect end bar rhyming which is MORE important.

    Gnome and OH Ten Don't rhyme and just because you add Snowed in, in doesn't meran it will work.

    11 aliases ok 6 I bet, WTF? Come on.

    That's like me saying you're a fag well at least by I bet
    1000000 lakes and you still can't get wet.

    Come on.


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  15. Mrjdm998

    Mrjdm998 New Member

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    Thing is, you're not. I don't even have to argue my point, because you're not.
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  16. Riot

    Riot The Dark Hero.

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    You didn't beat me LP, I gave you the win cause I didn't drop vote links lol.


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  17. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    every one here covets punchlines here so much

    and it's understandable

    but just remeber, w.out flow there wouldnt be RAP

    so to hate on a spitter for havin strong flow's and claiming it lessen's the impact of his punches is as retarded as saying, the harlem globe trotters would STOMP the lakers because they have flashier dunks dribbles and passes *punches*

    where as the skilled NBA professional would obviously win the battle because he has better practical skills EI: dribbling, defense, tripple threat etc..

    i mean ya harlem globe trotter can thro some coo as punchline in there with some fancy foot work

    but in the end, the disciplined artist *nba player* won't travel, miss shot's, miss dunks, throw bad passes bc he is focused on his rhyme structure and his *basics*
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  18. Mrjdm998

    Mrjdm998 New Member

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    You don't have good flow, you rhyme the same word loads. There's a difference.
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  19. Riot

    Riot The Dark Hero.

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    WTF?

    Wow, you are delusion al.


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