[Week 7] [Contender] 3. Breathless(3-3) vs 4. J. Keeper(1-0)

Discussion in 'The Rapmusic Storytelling/Topical League' started by Tacky Jones, Feb 28, 2012.

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  1. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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  2. breathlesss

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    ain't got much time this week, did a nostradamus thing

    I've seen it all, I've saw it all
    I've even seen when I'd saw that I've seen it all

    Seesawed in between small and large spots
    Scenes scrawled across walls as the start stops
    From a dark pot of hot toxins,
    producing a beautifully putrid mist

    Long healed scars pop open anew again
    Then close lonesome, no one ever knew they exist
    Id and ego froth, slowly growing forward
    Frigid three toed sloth, knowing only order

    A movement along a long movement
    The music of song, a strong nuisance
    It's the wrong time to be sick of the muse's sonnet
    A loose knit in the thread of humanity, but a noose is not it


    braaahhh.... this is useless! nonsense!
    screw this stupid prophecy, i can not see the future through all this...
    this, what... this, randomosity...
    just, ambling along lost when i want to cross...

    Over and again back middle to front
    lines locked in anger with the riddle of trust
    ranges widen while rising not, the spittle of dust
    three grains of truth a day for a brittle to bust

    Come hither with luck, heather meadows will not wave
    mud slithers amongst better ghettos, still hot days
    filled, washed, a way through the trough caught a ray
    of shine, sun is faded, but the blue, the blue cough and spray

    a bruise ought to stay, but doesn't when lifted
    skyward eyes burst in defiance of my earth blistered
    this is what I learn with a wyvern wind driven
    by the turbines turned, dying in whining nervous rhythm
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  3. patrown

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    I have to say, this is one of the most well done pieces that dedicated most bars to strong word play. favorite bars..
    A movement along a long movement
    The music of song, a strong nuisance
    It's the wrong time to be sick of the muse's sonnet
    A loose knit in the thread of humanity, but a noose is not it


    but the word play you began with , really got me.
    if it wasn't practically your signature, I'd bite that approach shamelessly.

    nice job.. especially for one you said time was an issue.
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  4. breathlesss

    breathlesss Registered Sex Offender

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    thanks man, i was surprised at how this turned out too really, spent maybe an hour on and off, but yea, it was one of those good hours that i wish would come more often
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  5. SplitInfinity00

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    Last half of the final paragraph
    sprints to a finish
    leaving you... a bit breatheless
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  6. Tacky Jones

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    Breath wins by no show
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