[Week 7] 17. billy nomates(0-0) vs 18. Got Life?(0-0)

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  1. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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  2. Got Life?

    Got Life? Resident Megalomaniac

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    Let's do this thing hombre.
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  3. billy nomates.

    billy nomates. rain cancels play.

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    i'm going to need an extension babes.
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  4. Got Life?

    Got Life? Resident Megalomaniac

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    no doubt, extension it is.

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  5. billy nomates.

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    Simon said use simple words to summarise the game plan
    I said simple, Simon, but suppose that I’m a changed man?
    He said, nonsense, besides I don’t believe that phrase and
    I’ve told you before that you remind me of a strained dam
    Or a stage hand, but please just let me handle the props
    As you might know what you’re doing but you panic a lot
    And as always we need anything but for the standard to drop
    You get nervous then you’ll sweat, then you’ll damage the lock
    And damn it I’m not saying that I’m the be all and end all
    But I’ve got steady hands that are needed for the send off

    Simon said please light the match then run for the hills
    Watch as the light gain weight and the summer stays still
    But what Simon didn’t say was that this slumber was real
    And the only dreams that I’ve had, a hunger would steal

    I said to Simon how the air always felt so dead in my flat
    Lethargic on the bed in the back, another pedant in black
    Singing words to sever the facts, too much pressure to act
    With a wry smile stuck to my teeth with a president’s tact
    Testing the facts and re-arranging words until the plan fits
    Breathing second hand smoke until nobody could stand it
    Watching as my hands split the work, Simons gaze stalled
    Cut the dead weight in the room, preparing for a great fall
    A vision who straight talks, with precision and plate thoughts
    Let the whole world see how this pigeon’s a hawk

    I said to Simon that I thought that the matches were damp
    And that the sulphur kept aggravating a scratch on my hand
    This passion was planned, and every night light stalked me
    My own work guided me, but another’s hands caught me

    Simon said the trick was always to make it seem an accident
    To keep pushing at the ground until you feel your traction slip
    To fly your flag without attaching it to any form of significance
    To keep your eye on the horizon, for that’s where the mission is
    How this prism tips the balance from haunting to a rose garden
    How the roads here all seem to want to show a slow pardon
    Watch a ghost closing in, suddenly Simon’s words seem shallow
    Watch the water wrap your ankles, cast belief in as you paddle
    A thief is just a shadow as the light still builds to blinding
    Finding spots to hide in trying to live the life assigned him

    Simon said to let them know that we were coming to town
    Once the locks broken they’ll hear how punishment sounds
    Salvation is just one click away with a gun in your mouth
    And that the moon won’t rise with the sun on the ground

    Myself and Simon walked slowly with the wind at our backs
    Carrying the sorts of people that our sins would attract
    Still we binged on the fat of the land, watch as the sky falls
    Ready to give back all the earth that’s left to the shy sorts
    My minds curt and whispers words about opening a box
    But once it has opened there is no hoping it’ll stop
    So we walked mountain ranges, the world in our scope
    Watching hands reach heavenward, absurd in their hope
    We were a serpent that showed its hand in the garden before
    And man showed once again that he shouldn’t have started a war

    So me and Simon walked home across this blitzed ground
    Knowing full well that we shouldn’t have let the gift out
    But the grits ground down and we can build from the dirt up
    And wash our new found sins in the water that it stirs up.


    You're an angel of god..and judgment day is today. U are sent to earth to destroy all of humanity with a massive army. What do u do?
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  6. Got Life?

    Got Life? Resident Megalomaniac

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    I screwed the pooch on this one nom, just got back from a night of drinking in Atlantic City.

    my bad bruh.

    guys keep me signed in, i'll vote on the necessary and show next week.
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  7. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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  8. ShogunCrosse

    ShogunCrosse The Fuckin' Good Guy...

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    dang...I was really lookin forward to this one actually. Nom came sick, and I know Got could bring some fire. Woulda been good
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  9. Scrolls-Oracle of Omen

    Scrolls-Oracle of Omen *DBS*--*A.B.C*

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    Woulda been dope.
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  10. NOBLE SOLDIER

    NOBLE SOLDIER Fireball Kid

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    damn.. noms verse was pretty nice.. it was so much like a riddle in parts i had to reread a line or two.. but the content was so sick.. im kinda pissed GL didnt show.. but it was worth coming in here just for the read.. It sucks that you wrote it for a no show..
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  11. DannyC

    DannyC Stay golden, pony boy.

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    very good read nom... very good.
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  12. Cigma

    Cigma Maxwell's Demon

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    Vote - B-Nom

    This was many skills on display. Flow was easy but not simple.

    The way you use words together, so it progresses the story but it also works on a witty level and gives imagery.

    Clever writing with wordplay and showing a story with strong use of vocabulary.

    You have a lot of flavor man. Nice flip on the topic.

    I see a lot of people that operate with a few tools... but instead of just using one or 2 colors, you have a palette.


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  13. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    nom wins by no-show
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