Discussion in 'Rapmusic.com Battle League' started by Riot, Mar 7, 2011.
email@example.com i'd like to hear this shit as well
Man I am feeling so LOVED....
Actually I know y'all just want the chance to dis me but HEY THAT IS COOL....
I will send U a track tho....
Oh and y'all can tell me what y'all did or did not like...
I WANT REAL CRITICISM...
If all U are gonna say is U ARE WACK.... THEN EAT A DICK... But I want REAL FEEDBACK...
Why not just post it here man?
Just dont know how...
Some of the cats I sent it 2 are free 2 do it tho...
F. T. FREEZE
aye, the first one you sent me, "track two" was pretty nice. you have a good flow and some nice multis in it. wasnt a fan of the chorus. well, the sung part was cool but then the part where you jus say it sounded a bit off to me. as you said it wasnt finished so im assuming you still got some work to do on that. wasnt bad though.
track one, i read it was your into so i was expecting a freestyle type verse. after about 40 seconds i caught on though. but compared to track two it does sound a lot cleaner.
track three, this is the "hello" beat right? if not it sounds a lot like it. anyway, not bad. my favorite of all of them. the backwash line made me laugh. sounded the best. chorus was pretty cool. flow was on.
i think the reason have problems with your structure isnt so much the flow, tbh. obviously, thats the writing style that works for you. but compared to the style used by most people on here, and the style thats been used for 12+ years here alone, its different. its hard to keep up with and it just ends up looking mad stretched. LP has the same problem, in my opinion. it works for you guys, but its so different it makes it hard for everyone else to deal with.
though, i was disappointed that in the three songs you didnt once say this i command.
If you wanna send it to me.
For the record, I wouldn't mind Jai getting her dance on in my bedroom any night of the week. You keep doing your thang, lady.
ay tac hook it up with the hello one from Freeze
yeah im diggin this shit sounds like freestyle fellowship/ del
Raz, werent you champ last season?
Sorry nibo, I only dance for my lady, but if u wanna see some sexy shit.
A couple yrz ago ths stripper invited me to her birthday party. She use to b on 1 of my buddylist. OMG.... mmm Id pay her to dance at my club, her namez Apple.
Youtube ths "LA stripper name Apple". Man.. shez so hypnotic and sexy!
I champed for a couple of weeks...
signed in to middle wieght cuz i don't have a lot of time to write, in case you were wonderin
that was my next question. i know you'd whoop my ass. you should be up here man
btw, can i get some votes on this please? its been forever and i wanna get this over
A couple heavyweightz should b n either middle or light.
A couple middleweightz should b n either heavy or light.
RaZ should b middle or heavy.
fuck a championship, this is simply revenge for placing me in your weak division
line from battle with mk go vote on that ill peep the one with you and wordz
wouldn't be too sure about that one...your an unpredictable writer sometimes
'specially when Quriosity writes for you
all this talk and I feel like I'm the only one noticing that about 97% of the league no showed ... damn
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