Week 6 RBL Rankings And Lounge

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  1. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    thank's for what u did there in my battle thread raz..

    that's the correct structure..
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  2. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    poor guy. hes gonna get curb stomped and kicked in the nuts then.
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  3. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    though i think youd lose your dick in that. he'd prolly chomp
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  4. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    Jai-z is a virgin, why would i be suckin her dick? she's afraid of men's!
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  5. Mrjdm998

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    Literaly a rock hard erection?
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  6. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    ...why would a man be sucking her dick?
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  7. Mista FREEZE 2001

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    *FREEZE ROTFL @ JAI AND LP*

    Y'all R silly...

    Now LP I listened 2 your tracks and EH....

    I dont think they were as BAD as everyone else is saying but I do think U could work a bit on your delivery. I think one of the ways U can do it is by just practicing spitting your flows over and over again on a track until it becomes 2nd Nature. I think U also may want 2 let someone else do your production. I think that will make a HUGE DIFFERENCE. Seriously. If someone else is doing your tracks then U will always have another pair of ears to give their opinion on things. They will help tell U where U sound hurried and when U should breathe. I also dont really like the style U kick but that is a personal preference. That has nothing 2 do with your tracks or lyrics. Just the style. From listening 2 your tracks though I can understand your rhyme scheme more. I am not gonna bash U like everyone else but I do think U could try 2 just tighten somethings up and the best way 2 do that is by having someone WHO IS NOT YOUR CREW OR FRIENDS LISTEN 2 YOUR MUSIC... Most times COMPLETELY UNBIASED CRITICISM IS THE BEST THING POSSIBLE....

    Just a THOUGHT....

    Feel the FREEZE!!!
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  8. Mista FREEZE 2001

    Mista FREEZE 2001 Member

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    Oh another thing....

    @ VENNY.... Yo Kid I had NEVER read the MAGAZINE until today and I must say I WAS QUITE IMPRESSED... REAL TALK... It was NICE and FUNNY... Oh and I saw U even gave me a QUOTEABLE.... THANX.... But 4 real I think that U do a GREAT JOB...

    U have gained a FAITHFUL READER...
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  9. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    did it just get cold in here? :funny:

    thanks freeze fa'real, shoot im open to that critism PM or respnde here, some of ur thought's pic out a song and use it as en example etc.. i'll appreciate ur time and advice sincerely.
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  10. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    Fuck that fagot extreme venom!
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  11. Mista FREEZE 2001

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    Yeah do U have an E MAIL... If U do I will send U a couple of my next mixtape tracks as well so U can give me your opinion...

    I like criticism...

    Oh and U will see how I sound actually spitting my verse
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  12. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    i actually wanna hear some of your shit. got anything online?
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  13. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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  14. Tacky Jones

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  15. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    that email got hacked and all my gay nudes got released

    like ya right!
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  16. Jai-Z

    Jai-Z Bangem, Jai

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    LPz a big baby and my dickz a pacifier. He cant sleep wthout it.

    Tac, u break my dick, I'll buy me another 1. Stomp The Yard homie. Lol
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  17. Mista FREEZE 2001

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    Sorry I dont...

    But if U give me your e mail... I will forward U a couple tracks now
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  18. Mista FREEZE 2001

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    Yo LP I just sent them.... Let me know what U think... Oh and once U hear how I spit U will see that I can actually spit the lyrics I write... I can now more with U after hearing your songs
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  19. Jai-Z

    Jai-Z Bangem, Jai

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    I got LPz breath smellng like burnt rubber and battery acid, frm suckng my dick. Lol at him sayng, Im scared of "men's" arent u scared of "men's"?? Guess not, since ur gvng my dick a long kiss goodbye. I'll tell ur ass nto a giraffe keep chuggng.. and ur girl will poach and spear u for ur skin. Lol
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  20. Tacky Jones

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    ronnie8125@yahoo.com
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