Discussion in 'Rapmusic.com Battle League' started by Riot, Mar 7, 2011.
thank's for what u did there in my battle thread raz..
that's the correct structure..
poor guy. hes gonna get curb stomped and kicked in the nuts then.
though i think youd lose your dick in that. he'd prolly chomp
Jai-z is a virgin, why would i be suckin her dick? she's afraid of men's!
Literaly a rock hard erection?
...why would a man be sucking her dick?
*FREEZE ROTFL @ JAI AND LP*
Y'all R silly...
Now LP I listened 2 your tracks and EH....
I dont think they were as BAD as everyone else is saying but I do think U could work a bit on your delivery. I think one of the ways U can do it is by just practicing spitting your flows over and over again on a track until it becomes 2nd Nature. I think U also may want 2 let someone else do your production. I think that will make a HUGE DIFFERENCE. Seriously. If someone else is doing your tracks then U will always have another pair of ears to give their opinion on things. They will help tell U where U sound hurried and when U should breathe. I also dont really like the style U kick but that is a personal preference. That has nothing 2 do with your tracks or lyrics. Just the style. From listening 2 your tracks though I can understand your rhyme scheme more. I am not gonna bash U like everyone else but I do think U could try 2 just tighten somethings up and the best way 2 do that is by having someone WHO IS NOT YOUR CREW OR FRIENDS LISTEN 2 YOUR MUSIC... Most times COMPLETELY UNBIASED CRITICISM IS THE BEST THING POSSIBLE....
Just a THOUGHT....
Feel the FREEZE!!!
Oh another thing....
@ VENNY.... Yo Kid I had NEVER read the MAGAZINE until today and I must say I WAS QUITE IMPRESSED... REAL TALK... It was NICE and FUNNY... Oh and I saw U even gave me a QUOTEABLE.... THANX.... But 4 real I think that U do a GREAT JOB...
U have gained a FAITHFUL READER...
did it just get cold in here?
thanks freeze fa'real, shoot im open to that critism PM or respnde here, some of ur thought's pic out a song and use it as en example etc.. i'll appreciate ur time and advice sincerely.
Fuck that fagot extreme venom!
Yeah do U have an E MAIL... If U do I will send U a couple of my next mixtape tracks as well so U can give me your opinion...
I like criticism...
Oh and U will see how I sound actually spitting my verse
i actually wanna hear some of your shit. got anything online?
LP, you made a new email addy? i still have your firstname.lastname@example.org
that email got hacked and all my gay nudes got released
like ya right!
LPz a big baby and my dickz a pacifier. He cant sleep wthout it.
Tac, u break my dick, I'll buy me another 1. Stomp The Yard homie. Lol
Sorry I dont...
But if U give me your e mail... I will forward U a couple tracks now
Yo LP I just sent them.... Let me know what U think... Oh and once U hear how I spit U will see that I can actually spit the lyrics I write... I can now more with U after hearing your songs
I got LPz breath smellng like burnt rubber and battery acid, frm suckng my dick. Lol at him sayng, Im scared of "men's" arent u scared of "men's"?? Guess not, since ur gvng my dick a long kiss goodbye. I'll tell ur ass nto a giraffe keep chuggng.. and ur girl will poach and spear u for ur skin. Lol
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