[Week 6] 5. Lyricalpriest(3-2) vs 6. ShadowWarriorfs(3-2)

Discussion in 'The Rapmusic Storytelling/Topical League' started by Tacky Jones, Feb 20, 2012.

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  1. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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  2. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    extension...
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  3. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

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    never mind...extension for us :)


    The Lyrical Priest - The Real RM Experience


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    He used to stay up at night listening to the voices
    Remembering their actions, hating the choices
    Investing every hour into overcoming the fears
    Trembling under the sheets, too weak to weep the tears
    The creeps he hears fuels the paranoia, he shivers
    -and shakes as he prays that his lord delivers
    He begins speaking in smooth sentences
    Formulating a rhythm with groove, for instance
    Enunciating with base, flow and clever hooks
    Emphasizing to chase away the demonizing crooks
    He felt confident, ready to conqueror the night
    Saliva building ready, waiting for a fight

    His appearance was shunned by vicious words
    Watched like rotting flesh by suspicious birds
    He tried to fit in hoping they could accept him
    Laughing at their jokes, refusing to correct them


    Wanted to finish but figured LP wouldn't show up and this was suppose to be a nice one about him. Soooo yea
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  4. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    Thank you this week shad, and this is definitly rough draft just going to throw it up there...




    Life isn't written In stone
    like.....
    Livin is hieroglyphics and code
    Inside: Innocence turnz rigid and cold
    Growin Up in this prisoners home
    inquisitors groan as sinister thrones
    cover up the hidden unknown...
    Our Nature is to devide and conquer
    to supply the concious with enough lies and conjure
    the slickest disguise to hide our mindless monster
    which relies on hypnotizing minds of the watchers
    revolvers turning mothers into fathers
    homocide is it's sponsor!
    brothers and sister die as it's martyr
    bartering lifes to draw lines between borders too proctor
    the size of our glorious honor measured and defined by our dollar!
    cleansed by the warriors sqaulor identified by the aura of scholars
    justified by their valor encouraging mobsters to consort with the robbers
    leading us into war-n-to darkness where we are the historian authors
    Prayin to god for peace is obsolete so let's compare the facts
    americas public image being smear by the beaurocrats
    so it's only fair to add
    the slaves built this country on their backs
    so a real hero act is on their behalf!!!


    and Now.....

    A child becomes a victim of human trafficking
    assuming that the things we lack and need
    are more important then truth and the fact's we see
    as the hate we gave infants come back too feed
    on the very fruits of our labor attackin teens
    pastors exploiting african famine and disease
    while the rest of us sit back and dream
    about how our lives could be more significant.....
    if we only had a bigger stack of green
    victimized and desensitized we've become callous fiends
    were the only challenge
    is our appetite and how we supply it with a massive feast
    as a kid we would play in the park fall astray and apart
    there was a time when we were afraid of the dark.
    but then.....

    we've become corrupt all about blood shed
    just to extend our horizons.....
    we stopped checkin for monsters under our bed
    when we realized they were inside us.
    ...


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  5. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

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  6. Morbidiction

    Morbidiction New Member

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    Shadow: You know what your verse was. Which is unfortunate. I don't think the way you were taking that verse was enough to pull a W out in this one anyway. Was not easy following a flow in your piece and a majority of the wordplay just came off as simple and uninspiring.


    LP: I need to address something very important first.

    That is so obviously false that I don't believe I have to go any further on this matter.

    With that out of the way, nice verse. This ended on some seriously question mark type I really wanna know a little more about these folks now. Flow was mostly on point and usage of multi's was nice, as should be necessary in any modern hip hop verse. Swell offering.

    v/ Lyricalpriest
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  7. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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  8. breathlesss

    breathlesss Registered Sex Offender

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    yea shad, i coulda seen you winning if you completed it with fullness, but yea, even what was there was somewhat lacking, and i really didn't see a connection to the picture on top of that

    LP, lyrical wise, this was spectacular, but again, i didn't really get the tie to the picture, but in your defense, slaves pretty much did build this country labor wise, my only major problem was the stucture made the flow hard to follow, but after reading it without line denotation i got the audio feel of it, very nice

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  9. BarZ.

    BarZ. Over Everything

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    Shadow:
    decent verse.. i think ya flow coulda made it more interesting.. the content was decent but i dont' understand too much how the picture went w/ your peice.. it seems as if u didn't finish or something... too keep the readers head in it - u should've tried more multi's to give the flow some type of pizzazz to keep the reader going...


    lp
    wow... i underestimated and judged the book by it's cover.. ur piece was on point.. flow, content, delivery... the words just rolled off my tongue perfectly...
    this had to be my fav:
    ur Nature is to devide and conquer
    to supply the concious with enough lies and conjure
    the slickest disguise to hide our mindless monster
    which relies on hypnotizing minds of the watchers
    - CRAZY
    revolvers turning mothers into fathers
    homocide is it's sponsor!
    brothers and sister die as it's martyr
    bartering lifes to draw lines between borders too proctor
    the size of our glorious honor measured and defined by our dollar!
    cleansed by the warriors sqaulor identified by the aura of scholars
    justified by their valor encouraging mobsters to consort with the robbers
    leading us into war-n-to darkness where we are the historian authors

    V- LP
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  10. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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