[Week 6] 11. Dex Caesar(0-0) vs 12. J. Keeper(0-0)

Discussion in 'The Rapmusic Storytelling/Topical League' started by Tacky Jones, Feb 20, 2012.

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  1. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

    Feb 25, 2008


    VERSUS DUE: Every Friday @ 11:59 PM PST
    LINE LIMIT: Minimum of 16 lines, Maximum of 64
    •Recycling is the equivalent to that of a no-show and will be treated as such, thus resulting in a loss in favor of the participant whom chose to recycle and a win in favor of his/her opponent
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    •If granted, the extension will override deadline for both participants extending it for no more than 24 hours
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    •Verses MUST incorporate AT LEAST 1 of the provided topics or pictures
    •A failure to show will result in a loss and a sign out by default. A no show in the tourney will result in elimination.
    •If your opponent fails to show, you MUST STILL post AT LEAST 4 lines (4-15) AND 3 voting links in order to claim victory. A failure to post voting links will result in a loss.
    •A Championship Title WILL NOT be decided by way of no-show!!!
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  2. J Keeper

    J Keeper Super Jesus

    Jun 3, 2010
    Fuccckkkk will post a REAL verse in about a half hour.

    I already wrote it I forgot to type it.
  3. J Keeper

    J Keeper Super Jesus

    Jun 3, 2010

    What mask should I wear today,
    I have peace,
    But grins are often scared away,
    I have grief,
    But that's something I'm prepared to take,
    I can't see what purpose I might share with fate...

    ...Contradicted, confused, no pot to piss in, imbued,
    With the complications of life, constant dissonant views,
    I see fear in the eyes of those that peer in the skies,
    I can't blame 'em when Satan has appeared to reach flight,
    The terror bears a different seer to decide
    the fate of those blind to the clearest of lies,
    The depressive setting's getting too blue to decode,
    The hues and the mode of the music of old,
    Bards weave tales of pain and deceit,
    And the poverty for greed everyday of the weak,
    Some sit furious, yet pay for the seat,
    Marveling in fury at the play and the scene,
    No quarter given to the artists in chains,
    When the man pulling strings avoids the targeting aim,
    They lust for the blood of the party to blame,
    Yet they all anted up at the start of the game,
    As want and desire throw palms on the fire,
    They reach,
    Hands closed to the stars they're beneath,
    But nothing ever comes from the thunder in their lungs,
    As we struggle to become a bigger thread in the sheet,
    So stumbling to love feels clumsy to the young,
    Uncomfortably, we're numb, among the rest of the sheep,
    The discomfort we feel spits thorns,
    The apathy concealed hits shore,
    Then the passion of the wheel to keep traction with what's real
    falls tragically to kneel to shit storms,
    But the weather does change, yet remember glum days,
    Because an angel would tell you that the heavens love rain,
    So I smile, or try to, through the prism of pride, view
    life as a lesson, the professor, the tide's moves,
    As the water hits shore, the sand washing away,
    I know that new castles are possible today...

    ...What mask should I use to hold?
    I'll use all,
    I play life on the human mode,
    I do fall,
    That's one thing I truly know,
    Despite what life brings, I can choose my own...

    ...Mask, that is,
    I can wear one, but get passed it quick,
    Masks change, along with the gasps and grins,
    So cheers to life for the fashion tip...​
  4. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

    Apr 12, 2000
    :eek: bravo J.keeper this is my favorite verse this week so far, you really hit it good with the control of flow multi's imagery narration i loved the anecdote lol this was like a hallmark rstl verse real talk. no wonder that girly nigga dex didn't show up lilke a pussy..:funny:
  5. Morbidiction

    Morbidiction New Member

    Sep 24, 2010
    I liked this, and at times was very impressed with the wordplay, but I could not determine from your, I'm assuming to be deliberately, enigmatic text what you were actually talking about. I'm a pretty educated fella and even studied quite a bit of philosophy so I know how to read "chinese-english" lol, but this, this had me guessing just what in the hell you were going on about.

    Flow was on point for the most part but I honestly can't judge more because I'm apparently too dumb to understand this piece.
  6. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

    Feb 25, 2008
    Keeper wins
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