[Week 52] 7. Eyeurn Mic(1-3) vs 8. Brown Jesus(0-3)

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  1. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    RULES & REGULATIONS

    DEADLINES

    [01] - The deadline for verses is Thursday @ 11:59pm EST.
    [02] - The deadline for extensions is 24 hours ONLY, making it Friday @ 11:59pm EST.
    [03] - The deadline for voting is Sunday @ 11:59am EST.​

    VOTING

    [04] - You must post at least 5 valid voting links within your match.
    [05] - Within those 5 links, you must be sure to vote on both the Championship and Contender matches.
    [06] - Votes must be at least 2 full lines of feedback per competitor followed by the competitor's name in which you choose to vote for.
    [07] - Voting a tie result is deemed a failure to vote.
    [08] - Voting links must be posted in your battle thread with the Champ and Contender matches labeled clearly.
    [09] - Votes changed after 1 hour of posting will be deemed a failure to vote.
    [10] - Voting is open to current participants, past champions, and active RBL moderators ONLY.​

    VERSES

    [11] - All verses are to remain within the limits of 8 to 40 lines. Any breach of line limit must be agreed upon by both competitors prior to a verse being posted. Failure to comply will result in an automatic forfeit by all failing parties.
    [12] - An agreement of a line limit will serve as the maximum allowed; competitors are allowed to post under an agreed limit, but never over. An agreement is not required. Upon failure to agree to a line limit, the second competitor is thereby required to meet the limit set by the first competitor to post.
    [13] - You must not edit your verse once your opponent has posted, who in turn must not edit their verse after the first vote is cast.​
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  2. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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    check.. however many lines you want.
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  3. EyeurnMic

    EyeurnMic New Member

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    What do we got? A former top dog who lost his spot
    Back stab Jesus with my knife nicknamed Iscariot
    The thick of the plot, pull a gat from my nap sack to give him a shiver
    Then proceed to wet up Jesus like the Jordan River
    Jesus will got beat with a Passion, and succumb to the Pain
    I'll air the Ratchet out - and let it Clank
    When he die, they'll be no form of vigil
    The piece'll spray till it starts to click like a turn signal
    Fuck this clown, he beats bitches and expects us to relate
    Put a gash on Brown's chin like an encounter with Drake
    But wait, to pay the price he'll be nailed to the cross
    Put them hammers to his wrists so he doesn't fall off
    Poke a hole in his stomach and let the sweat and blood waste
    Jesus will die on this day, get ready for an earthquake
    Bury him in a cave on the eve of my win
    And on the seventh day he'll be back to an L again.
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  4. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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    As I lay me down to sleep...

    What else do you expect after reading that tripe,
    You gotta get up..
    But, that shit was so down, the Dow Jones was feeling aright,
    This is not a setup, but you should try one against me,
    Fuck the past, let's see...
    I shoulda won three... kinda like my record next week,
    I'm nasty when I battle, if it's war then you're fucked,
    I even said you'd win..
    But you miss directions like game planning for the Oregon Ducks,


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  5. Split Eight

    Split Eight evilest of 9's

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    Jesus, you do that last minute? Sure seems like it. No punches, lame closer, didn't rhyme. C'mon dude.


    Eyeurn. You do topical? Your verse was technically very good, flow, flips, cool references. But, you know, battling is all about the punches. You gotta sacrifice style to make that motherfucker bleed haha, I found that out the hard way when I got blown out in my first battle.. So I'm gonna sum it up: Flow was great, well made verse, but if you want to keep winning you need personals, even if you gotta make em blunt.

    Vote Eyeurn
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  6. EKGenius

    EKGenius New Member

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    Quick vote on this since Jesus obviously didnt try

    Brown Jesus..
    i like the miss direction concept not really feeling your first two bars.

    EyeurnMic..
    probably your best verse thus far.. those jesus lines are pretty sure played on him but points on attempt.. Jordan river wasnt too bad.. Ratchet and Clank line was your best line.. the turn signal was eh.. ok on the Drake line.. the last 3 bars were again more topical/imagery feel than actual punchlines. but foreal it is improving the beginning was cool cus its actually stingers against the opponent.. like what split eight said it seems your style but its more like imagery/topical than directed to the opponent.. just turn the focus to the opponent and add creativity to it.

    v/EyeurnMic
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  7. Smashal0t

    Smashal0t Member

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    When he die, they'll be no form of vigil
    The piece'll spray till it starts to click like a turn signal

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    nothing

    Eyeurn's verse wasn't very good. nothing too hard hitting that one bar was the one that stood out. brown obviously just showed for showing....so yea

    VOTE/Eyeurn
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  8. Storyteller

    Storyteller .:Your Fav. Mc's Idol:.

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    Mvgt eye

    he came with bar.for bar.punches some really weak ones but it was punches none thw less brown yiu just dropped so yiu woukdnt no show... i props to you on that man.... thanks for at lrast showing but some nice cocepts if thought out could have been bangers...
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  9. coil grimely

    coil grimely Tears textcees to tidbits

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    brown didn't appear to have put forth his best or most complete effort. the miss direction like oregon ducks line had a cool flow to it. mic, glad to see some formulated disses this week. lotb, shiver / wet like jordan river line, for sure. or maybe the gash on brown's face line. either way, some pretty decent jabs tho.

    vote - eyerun mic
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  10. Slugger K

    Slugger K load the yoppa...

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    When he die, they'll be no form of vigil
    The piece'll spray till it starts to click like a turn signal
    Fuck this clown, he beats bitches and expects us to relate
    Put a gash on Brown's chin like an encounter with Drake

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    idk whats going on

    Iits obvious there was little effort from BJ. Eye takes this with more quotables for sure. Those punches i liked the most.
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  11. ski mask

    ski mask The Don

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    Fuck this clown, he beats bitches and expects us to relate
    Put a gash on Brown's chin like an encounter with Drake

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    Nothing

    Vote: EyeurnMic

    He had the punch I quoted above that stood out. It was obvious Brown didn't put any effort in his verse. I didn't like any of the lines he posted.
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  12. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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    Eyeurn Mic wins.
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