[Week 50] 7. IAmBent(4-3) vs 8. ShadowWarriorfs(31-17)

Discussion in 'The Rapmusic Storytelling/Topical League' started by Tacky Jones, Aug 8, 2011.

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  1. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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  2. IAmBenT

    IAmBenT Eat a dick, faggot

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    Chec in. this week Im battling two mods, wtf.

    I will drop my RBL verse then come in here, prolly early again to give people a chance to vote more.

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  3. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

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  4. IAmBenT

    IAmBenT Eat a dick, faggot

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    "Genetics"

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    [coming soon]
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  5. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

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    well migraine again so here



    All I could do was endure the pain
    As it intensifies the torment in my brain
    Occurring in an instant, my body warming
    “I feel sick” as I heave without warning
    I scurry to the bathroom, knees crushing tile
    Face in the toilet, vomiting nothing but bile
    I was left with only the tension and strain
    So I watched as the relief flushed down the drain
    I stumbled to the couch hoping rest would help
    Taking Advil with hot tea hoping my head would melt
    Closing my eyes, I felt someone pounding on me
    But I was alone perhaps God was being ornery
    My vision began to blur the more I focused
    Wanting something strong but growing hopeless
    Eventually the migraine left after two days
    Still weak but now I could enjoy the sun rays
    Recovering quickly, body feeling strong
    However, that didn’t last long…


    The migraine seemed to return by the weekend
    Always on Saturday and while I was sleeping
    I knew something was wrong with me
    Examined by doctors hoping results would come swiftly
    But they were stumped and prescribed me drugs
    Vicodin worked at first but lost its effect
    Becoming convinced my mind had a defect
    Years had passed as I learned to cope
    No one had answers so it was pointless to hope
    I just managed the pain until it went it away
    But there was something different about today…



    The day began normally and I was traveling home
    I had received a raise, I felt like a King on his throne
    Things were looking better as I felt at peace
    Driving down the road with excitement to release
    Thinking of my son and what to buy him
    The air felt calm, no problems, no sin
    I was pain free with no migraine attacks
    Then in an instant, everything went black…




    Topic: Aneurism
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  6. Resilient.

    Resilient. .. . ..

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    Will edit vote here.

    Shadow, stop swaying with those "migraine" comments. For real dog.
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  7. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

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  8. Cigma

    Cigma Maxwell's Demon

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    Vote - SW



    Oh shit that was a pretty sick verse for being simple Shadow!


    I mean you gave a story easily and succintly and still had impact.

    Your bar usage is strong, i mean you can advance a story and maintain cadence and rhymes.

    Even details of specific events in the character is what made the impact.

    It was a surprise to me the ending.

    AND you describe the headaches you well it sounds like your migraines are truth


    Bent -

    Teased us

    Picture and topic

    Had me wondering what you would come up with I enjoy your writing.
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  9. Cereal_Killer

    Cereal_Killer no ESCAPE

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    yeh dude like cigma said thats a pretty dope verse, you definitely captured everything in your head.. Nice drop
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  10. Coup d'état

    Coup d'état Don't believe the hype

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    Shad - I really enjoy your simplicity straight forward story approach. You always cut the bull carp and get to exactly to what you want us to know. I am aware, at least I think, that your style is becoming leaner, trim and more efficient in a progressive way. Keep adding in some flair and crazy images to chew on.

    Dope drop due. Too bad bent had troubles this week. I suspect he would have really challenged you. Good show.

    One thing, add some abstractions in your verse because as it stands, there is almost none, thus it alluding to why I say it's a straight shot way. Like all of us here do, keep working and getting it right.

    So what I mean is what is the character really feeeling about the things you are writing him to do. What does he think ? you leave out that often. I want to know who you write about, not just what he does and whay symptoms of his actions are...what his reaction in tought ?
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  11. fairydance2000

    fairydance2000 don't wait, Procrastinate

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    Shadow
    Can you hear me clapping? You should, loved it. Again 7 years of spine damage and I know those migraines. Loved the ending
    The rhymes where spot on
    The flow was smooth from start to finish.
    The imagery was there and I was there with it.
    Very nicely done

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  12. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    shadow wins by no show
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