[WEEK 5][Championship Match]1. MetaSin 4-0 vs E Tha Real 4-0

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  1. xX_NASTY_Xx

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  2. MetaSin

    MetaSin I Don't Believe In You...

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    24. Any issues, hit me via PM.
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  3. E Tha Real

    E Tha Real Real Life

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  4. TorrMup

    TorrMup New Member

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    ???????why would you wait

    Post the shit........I wanna read it before I leave. one
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  5. sfsportsfan

    sfsportsfan New Member

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    im scared your sayiin your verse is ready.. isnt the whole point of battling and freestyling to be coming off the dome? damn. maybe i should write my shit and wait until the last day.
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  6. E Tha Real

    E Tha Real Real Life

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    ^^^ old concept originated 30 years ago, fags reckless & what's worse man?
    Revanon used it in RM's 3rd historical text battle vs. headlessversemen.
    only HA! member still active... I'm savoring that last laugh; christ this mans a loser.
    & if you Met a sin... it's no big deal, I'll let you shake hands with lucifer.
    3 man love triangle crew Precision with an eye for talent? ya gots that wrong yo'.
    crew of idiots, c'mon Barons 'lets bite Epi as AlamoVI' tried vouchin for John Dough.
    dramaqueen is creating nonsense about mag & mods which your making discontent.
    this section8 alumni's wallet holds more singles then speed dating events.
    faggots last hit will be the wall like Pink Floyd & Dale Earnhart, he'll quickly quit.
    cause if anyone watches you WALL*E, it's in the first row of a Disney flick.
    slam ya head against the wall & re-create Jackson Pollock art till he's brutally dead.
    word is you carry guns? headlines are 'I do carey cannons' as celebrity newly weds.
    SuperNova merked his reputation years ago with Mary Poppins lyrics & a lazy shit.
    yet queers still so self-centered he should be connected to a diameter & radius.
    begged to wear air refreshners as a fashion trend; what they'll tell smelly next.
    hog-tied in a basement, I'm infamous for taping opponents ask Bill Belicheck.
    with a face made for radio, a voice for mimes & asshole for colon care.
    geez your slutty bitch is useless without her legs open like a folding chair.
    voters see no drop off with me like sunday postal services; I'm godly sport.
    Cries his eyes out after losing? leave that search for the autopsy report.
    let's apply the facts bitch, you're RM's arithmetic man- no need to try or practice.
    moron adds played lines, subtracts set-ups, divides crews & multiplies whackness.
    newbies referring to battlers as camps now? RM we sure have lost it.
    & If we paid your camp a visit after this,it would rehash a tour to aushwitz.
    this whores obnoxious, pffffft. I'll swallow you hole, try to stop me.
    now your careers going down the tubes? shit, now I'll need a colonoscopy.
    seriously ask to bang his girl, he'll say "brochure" more then tourists do.
    shitface has the drive of repo victims in another words your borish dude.
    you're the 'laughing stock of the league' nothing I'm about to question.
    investing in you- Obama, Clinton & Mccain could get us out a recession.
    I'm on a roll & viscious; your feeling XX Nasty? please control your bitches.
    in prison if you got a window of opportunity; warden gave me conjugal visits.
    next week add one to this match & one to your loss column, I'm impatient bitch.
    I valet... while your a known fucking parker like Eva Longoria's relationship.
    yeah my girl does wants you... to do her eyebrows & prepare her friends.
    crybaby leave cause I'm ready to gear up and moccaSin as Native Americans.
    starts threads like "Unbelievable, I'm not swaying but.." voters see the bull.
    when I leave bird brain tagged, I'm not the department of motor vehicles.
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  7. Revanon

    Revanon Comeback of the Year.

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    lmao! you wrong for that one E....hahahhahha!!
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  8. MetaSin

    MetaSin I Don't Believe In You...

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    You sound cocky as fuck, so there must be somethin I don’t kno
    Cuz how impressive do u think u are with wack punches n no flow?
    U front like u dope tho; predictions constantly show your not
    If someone thought u’d win, that pic must’ve been doctored in photoshop
    U probably hope I’ll stop; I got memory loss, it’s true
    Cuz ya last dope verse escapes me; too bad u won’t follow suit
    This is the end of ya run; you’re lame and you’re wack to me
    If ya bars were as short as ya win streak, they might be able to catch a beat
    Girls say that you’re lackin meat, so when you’re givin it to hoes
    They’re like ya loss column in this match, they never finish with an O
    So they fuck me before u, asking to get my cock raw
    You’re just the reup man; they call u after they get their rocks off
    I’m givin bitches lock jaw, while this faggot is a mess;
    callin a maid-in, but couldn’t pull a damzel in distress
    I get the baddest n the best; he’s never tappin the hottest
    Call his bitches frodo… cuz the only one he’s baggin’s a hobbit
    Makin excuses; placin blame is somethin that u do
    But when u won’t even get a vote, it’s no Oneduh why you lose
    And if Demik hadn’t recycled, u would’ve lost n it was blatant
    That held you up in the ranks; You’re just a victim of a hostage situation
    They should’ve changed the challenger; people must feel you’re strong
    this is Chappell’s show; u get fucked up when keepin it Real goes wrong
    U lack clout; you should watch what you say from ya wack mouth,
    N close ya Trap, like Atlanta cops raiding a crack house…
    Ya face’ll get smacked now; you’ll try to win with errors,
    And lash out to the point, you’re reapplying your mascarra
    Usin my old concepts, but you lack the votes;
    Ironically, ya verse will make or break you , n I’ve had a hand in both
    I’m smackin folk, so u’ll see a hearse for free
    Your not hot…. so I don’t even need a thermometer when I merk-u-Re’
    Fuck natural barriers; an air strike’ll come to make u drop
    Cuz that attack that you’re mountain ain’t enough terrain on top
    It’s time to humble ya ass, cuz you’re just the wackest clone
    Now getting boulder just has u runnin scared like Indiana Jones
    N since I’m smashin holmes, this homo’s rennovatin
    He got a handy man usin calk to fill the hole in his foundation
    Don’t get ahead of yaself, trynna win, cuz you’ve never been felt
    n since you never buckled down,of course you’re not getting the belt
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  9. Yung Troy

    Yung Troy The Lyrical King

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    Close Close Close one......

    Okay,

    E,

    SuperNova merked his reputation years ago with Mary Poppins lyrics & a lazy shit.
    yet queers still so self-centered he should be connected to a diameter & radius.
    Haha.....


    dramaqueen is creating nonsense about mag & mods which your making discontent.
    this section8 alumni's wallet holds more singles then speed dating events.
    Haha

    you're the 'laughing stock of the league' nothing I'm about to question.
    investing in you- Obama, Clinton & Mccain could get us out a recession.
    this was okay...whole verse was pretty much cool

    Met,

    I get the baddest n the best; he’s never tappin the hottest
    Call his bitches frodo… cuz the only one he’s baggin’s a hobbit
    Lol....

    Ya face’ll get smacked now; you’ll try to win with errors,
    And lash out to the point, you’re reapplying your mascarra
    nice concept, Lol....

    Don’t get ahead of yaself, trynna win, cuz you’ve never been felt
    n since you never buckled down,of course you’re not getting the belt

    Nice closer....

    this was a close battle guys...both had continuous punches but when it all boils down I was feelin Mets a little more....

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  10. The Purifier

    The Purifier cleansin text of wackness

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    only HA! member still active... I'm savoring that last laugh; christ this mans a loser.
    & if you Met a sin... it's no big deal, I'll let you shake hands with lucifer.
    --aight
    SuperNova merked his reputation years ago with Mary Poppins lyrics & a lazy shit.
    yet queers still so self-centered he should be connected to a diameter & radius.
    with a face made for radio, a voice for mimes & asshole for colon care.
    geez your slutty bitch is useless without her legs open like a folding chair.
    --heh
    let's apply the facts bitch, you're RM's arithmetic man- no need to try or practice.
    moron adds played lines, subtracts set-ups, divides crews & multiplies whackness.
    ---heh, ok
    seriously ask to bang his girl, he'll say "brochure" more then tourists do.
    shitface has the drive of repo victims in another words your borish dude.
    --eh first line was better than the 2nd, lol, interestin order
    you're the 'laughing stock of the league' nothing I'm about to question.
    investing in you- Obama, Clinton & Mccain could get us out a recession.
    --not quoting this, but wtf, you didnt just use a laughing stock/stock line did you? thought you were a vet dude...
    yeah my girl does wants you... to do her eyebrows & prepare her friends.
    crybaby leave cause I'm ready to gear up and moccaSin as Native Americans.
    --aight, didnt need to capitalise it

    couple not bad hits, a lot of awkwardly worded lines too though, not too bad though...

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    U probably hope I’ll stop; I got memory loss, it’s true
    Cuz ya last dope verse escapes me; too bad u won’t follow suit
    --heh
    This is the end of ya run; you’re lame and you’re wack to me
    If ya bars were as short as ya win streak, they might be able to catch a beat
    --word they were pretty wordy
    Girls say that you’re lackin meat, so when you’re givin it to hoes
    They’re like ya loss column in this match, they never finish with an O
    --aight
    I get the baddest n the best; he’s never tappin the hottest
    Call his bitches frodo… cuz the only one he’s baggin’s a hobbit
    --heh aight but coulda worded it nicer
    They should’ve changed the challenger; people must feel you’re strong
    this is Chappell’s show; u get fucked up when keepin it Real goes wrong
    --heh
    U lack clout; you should watch what you say from ya wack mouth,
    N close ya Trap, like Atlanta cops raiding a crack house…
    --aight
    Ya face’ll get smacked now; you’ll try to win with errors,
    And lash out to the point, you’re reapplying your mascarra
    --lol
    Usin my old concepts, but you lack the votes;
    Ironically, ya verse will make or break you , n I’ve had a hand in both
    --aha
    I’m smackin folk, so u’ll see a hearse for free
    Your not hot…. so I don’t even need a thermometer when I merk-u-Re’
    --ugh, you really hadda force this one, s'aight tho
    Fuck natural barriers; an air strike’ll come to make u drop
    Cuz that attack that you’re mountain ain’t enough terrain on top
    --mountain/mountin wp is mad old as I'm sure you know but this aint a bad flip mixed with the terrain flip
    N since I’m smashin holmes, this homo’s rennovatin
    He got a handy man usin calk to fill the hole in his foundation
    --aight


    seen the buckled/belt concept recently


    took out everything I didnt like at all for some reason, the rest is what's left. Yeah E's lines were pretty wordy, coulda flowed better (since this league loves talkin about flow), also had some not so hard wording, meta was more consistent and worded slightly better

    v/metasin
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  11. Revanon

    Revanon Comeback of the Year.

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    E's extremely long bars hurt him...good shit from both but....

    vote-Metasin...he fed a little after looking at E's verse..but he did his thing..his presentation was cleaner and had some really good stingers for e...that 'keeping it real' line was relevant and nice...
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  12. dizthachozen1

    dizthachozen1 ...free your mind...

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    i'ma just compare the best lines of each verse for 2 reasons.
    1) the verses are a lil too long for full breakdowns
    2)these are the only lines in that long ass verse from E that were really worth quoting.
    overall, the verse was choppy and all over the place. the lengthiness of the lines didn't really bother me as much as the bars that made no sense because the concepts/punches were forced.
    E THA REAL:
    that last bar was fire though...too bad the entire verse wasn't on that level.

    METASIN:
    nothin but flames in the above quote...i really don't feel i need to explain that any further. there were more ('indiana jones' line for one), but the dead horse didn't need beat. metasin worked E over from start to finish. solid verse, ill punches, clever wording, nice wordplay, it was all there. good work. nice read meta.
    VOTE=METASIN
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  13. don killa

    don killa New Member

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    I'll do like I did tha otha close batle an' jus give a 1 ta 5 vote on tha punches I liked based on punch effectiveness,wittiness,wordplay, an' my personal fav. comedy.


    E The Real
    ^^^ old concept originated 30 years ago, fags reckless & what's worse man?
    Revanon used it in RM's 3rd historical text battle vs. headlessversemen. 2.5

    only HA! member still active... I'm savoring that last laugh; christ this mans a loser.
    & if you Met a sin... it's no big deal, I'll let you shake hands with lucifer. 1.5

    3 man love triangle crew Precision with an eye for talent? ya gots that wrong yo'.
    crew of idiots, c'mon Barons 'lets bite Epi as AlamoVI' tried vouchin for John Dough. 5

    faggots last hit will be the wall like Pink Floyd & Dale Earnhart, he'll quickly quit.
    cause if anyone watches you WALL*E, it's in the first row of a Disney flick. 4

    SuperNova merked his reputation years ago with Mary Poppins lyrics & a lazy shit.
    yet queers still so self-centered he should be connected to a diameter & radius 5

    voters see no drop off with me like sunday postal services; I'm godly sport.
    Cries his eyes out after losing? leave that search for the autopsy report. 1.5

    let's apply the facts bitch, you're RM's arithmetic man- no need to try or practice.
    moron adds played lines, subtracts set-ups, divides crews & multiplies whackness. 5

    newbies referring to battlers as camps now? RM we sure have lost it.
    & If we paid your camp a visit after this,it would rehash a tour to aushwitz. 3

    I'm on a roll & viscious; your feeling XX Nasty? please control your bitches.
    in prison if you got a window of opportunity; warden gave me conjugal visits. 4.5

    yeah my girl does wants you... to do her eyebrows & prepare her friends.
    crybaby leave cause I'm ready to gear up and moccaSin as Native Americans. 3

    TOTAL: 35



    Metasin
    U front like u dope tho; predictions constantly show your not
    If someone thought u’d win, that pic must’ve been doctored in photoshop 1.5

    U probably hope I’ll stop; I got memory loss, it’s true
    Cuz ya last dope verse escapes me; too bad u won’t follow suit 2

    This is the end of ya run; you’re lame and you’re wack to me
    If ya bars were as short as ya win streak, they might be able to catch a beat 4

    So they fuck me before u, asking to get my cock raw
    You’re just the reup man; they call u after they get their rocks off 5

    I’m givin bitches lock jaw, while this faggot is a mess;
    callin a maid-in, but couldn’t pull a damzel in distress 4

    I get the baddest n the best; he’s never tappin the hottest
    Call his bitches frodo… cuz the only one he’s baggin’s a hobbit 5

    They should’ve changed the challenger; people must feel you’re strong
    this is Chappell’s show; u get fucked up when keepin it Real goes wrong 2

    U lack clout; you should watch what you say from ya wack mouth,
    N close ya Trap, like Atlanta cops raiding a crack house… 1

    Ya face’ll get smacked now; you’ll try to win with errors,
    And lash out to the point, you’re reapplying your mascarra 3.5

    Usin my old concepts, but you lack the votes;
    Ironically, ya verse will make or break you , n I’ve had a hand in both 4

    I’m smackin folk, so u’ll see a hearse for free
    Your not hot…. so I don’t even need a thermometer when I merk-u-Re’ 5

    Fuck natural barriers; an air strike’ll come to make u drop
    Cuz that attack that you’re mountain ain’t enough terrain on top 5

    N since I’m smashin holmes, this homo’s rennovatin
    He got a handy man usin calk to fill the hole in his foundation 3.5

    Don’t get ahead of yaself, trynna win, cuz you’ve never been felt
    n since you never buckled down,of course you’re not getting the belt 3

    TOTAL: 48.5 Not as close as I'd originally thought.Both came wit hot personals, both had some dope lines but in tha end for me it was Mets ability ta really,really clown Real betta than than was able ta do ta Met.I honestly felt Metasin's wordplay was a level above E's an' that his complexity was also a cut above wit his creativity.I liked this battle though I thought it was good shit from both.

    VOTE: MetaSin

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  14. John_Dough

    John_Dough New Member

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    E

    ^^^ old concept originated 30 years ago, fags reckless & what's worse man?
    Revanon used it in RM's 3rd historical text battle vs. headlessversemen.
    decent
    only HA! member still active... I'm savoring that last laugh; christ this mans a loser.
    & if you Met a sin... it's no big deal, I'll let you shake hands with lucifer
    nice wordplay here
    3 man love triangle crew Precision with an eye for talent? ya gots that wrong yo'.
    crew of idiots, c'mon Barons 'lets bite Epi as AlamoVI' tried vouchin for John Dough.
    this was over my head, didn't get it
    dramaqueen is creating nonsense about mag & mods which your making discontent.
    this section8 alumni's wallet holds more singles then speed dating events.
    whoa that was a SICK line
    faggots last hit will be the wall like Pink Floyd & Dale Earnhart, he'll quickly quit.
    cause if anyone watches you WALL*E, it's in the first row of a Disney flick.
    ANOTHER SICK line, very mag worthy
    slam ya head against the wall & re-create Jackson Pollock art till he's brutally dead.
    word is you carry guns? headlines are 'I do carey cannons' as celebrity newly weds.
    naaah forced
    SuperNova merked his reputation years ago with Mary Poppins lyrics & a lazy shit.
    yet queers still so self-centered he should be connected to a diameter & radius.
    nice concept, pretty good wording
    begged to wear air refreshners as a fashion trend; what they'll tell smelly next.
    hog-tied in a basement, I'm infamous for taping opponents ask Bill Belicheck.
    not feeling this, seemed like the multi was forced also
    with a face made for radio, a voice for mimes & asshole for colon care.
    geez your slutty bitch is useless without her legs open like a folding chair.
    hahaha dope
    voters see no drop off with me like sunday postal services; I'm godly sport.
    Cries his eyes out after losing? leave that search for the autopsy report.
    good wording, clever
    let's apply the facts bitch, you're RM's arithmetic man- no need to try or practice.
    moron adds played lines, subtracts set-ups, divides crews & multiplies whackness.
    nice
    newbies referring to battlers as camps now? RM we sure have lost it.
    & If we paid your camp a visit after this,it would rehash a tour to aushwitz.
    ok
    this whores obnoxious, pffffft. I'll swallow you hole, try to stop me.
    now your careers going down the tubes? shit, now I'll need a colonoscopy.
    this was cool
    seriously ask to bang his girl, he'll say "brochure" more then tourists do.
    shitface has the drive of repo victims in another words your borish dude.
    this one didn't work for me
    you're the 'laughing stock of the league' nothing I'm about to question.
    investing in you- Obama, Clinton & Mccain could get us out a recession.
    another negative, didn't like it
    I'm on a roll & viscious; your feeling XX Nasty? please control your bitches.
    in prison if you got a window of opportunity; warden gave me conjugal visits.
    LMAO niiiiiiiiice
    next week add one to this match & one to your loss column, I'm impatient bitch.
    I valet... while your a known fucking parker like Eva Longoria's relationship.
    very clever, not really a hard diss tho
    yeah my girl does wants you... to do her eyebrows & prepare her friends.
    crybaby leave cause I'm ready to gear up and moccaSin as Native Americans.
    decent wordplay
    starts threads like "Unbelievable, I'm not swaying but.." voters see the bull.
    when I leave bird brain tagged, I'm not the department of motor vehicles.
    hard closer, I liked it

    Metasin

    You sound cocky as fuck, so there must be somethin I don’t kno
    Cuz how impressive do u think u are with wack punches n no flow?
    solid opener
    U front like u dope tho; predictions constantly show your not
    If someone thought u’d win, that pic must’ve been doctored in photoshop
    nice concept
    U probably hope I’ll stop; I got memory loss, it’s true
    Cuz ya last dope verse escapes me; too bad u won’t follow suit
    this was hot
    This is the end of ya run; you’re lame and you’re wack to me
    If ya bars were as short as ya win streak, they might be able to catch a beat
    this was sick and hit hard
    Girls say that you’re lackin meat, so when you’re givin it to hoes
    They’re like ya loss column in this match, they never finish with an O
    decent
    So they fuck me before u, asking to get my cock raw
    You’re just the reup man; they call u after they get their rocks off
    this was a dope concept and worded well
    I’m givin bitches lock jaw, while this faggot is a mess;
    callin a maid-in, but couldn’t pull a damzel in distress
    pretty good
    I get the baddest n the best; he’s never tappin the hottest
    Call his bitches frodo… cuz the only one he’s baggin’s a hobbit
    nice again
    Makin excuses; placin blame is somethin that u do
    But when u won’t even get a vote, it’s no Oneduh why you lose
    good wordplay
    And if Demik hadn’t recycled, u would’ve lost n it was blatant
    That held you up in the ranks; You’re just a victim of a hostage situation
    hahaha nice concept/personal
    They should’ve changed the challenger; people must feel you’re strong
    this is Chappell’s show; u get fucked up when keepin it Real goes wrong
    pretty clever
    U lack clout; you should watch what you say from ya wack mouth,
    N close ya Trap, like Atlanta cops raiding a crack house…
    sick concept, I liked this alot
    Ya face’ll get smacked now; you’ll try to win with errors,
    And lash out to the point, you’re reapplying your mascarra
    One of the best lines I seen this week, sick
    Usin my old concepts, but you lack the votes;
    Ironically, ya verse will make or break you , n I’ve had a hand in both
    very nice, your verse has picked up steam the last 10 or so lines
    I’m smackin folk, so u’ll see a hearse for free
    Your not hot…. so I don’t even need a thermometer when I merk-u-Re’
    solid wordplay
    Fuck natural barriers; an air strike’ll come to make u drop
    Cuz that attack that you’re mountain ain’t enough terrain on top
    more good wordplay, didn't hit hard but clever
    It’s time to humble ya ass, cuz you’re just the wackest clone
    Now getting boulder just has u runnin scared like Indiana Jones
    clever wordplay, original and current
    N since I’m smashin holmes, this homo’s rennovatin
    He got a handy man usin calk to fill the hole in his foundation
    alright
    Don’t get ahead of yaself, trynna win, cuz you’ve never been felt
    n since you never buckled down,of course you’re not getting the belt
    Great closer


    Close battle, good champ match...Both had nice quotables throughout but I feel consistancy all the way through was the key to this win...

    Vote=Met in a real nice bout
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  15. John_Dough

    John_Dough New Member

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    Posting problems, my fault
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    sorry, site was acting up...
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    Same as above, sorry for fuckin up the thread
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  18. john hensley

    john hensley 7xRBL

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    dramaqueen is creating nonsense about mag & mods which your making discontent.
    this section8 alumni's wallet holds more singles then speed dating events.
    SuperNova merked his reputation years ago with Mary Poppins lyrics & a lazy shit.
    yet queers still so self-centered he should be connected to a diameter & radius.
    begged to wear air refreshners as a fashion trend; what they'll tell smelly next.
    hog-tied in a basement, I'm infamous for taping opponents ask Bill Belicheck.
    didnt like this wording though
    with a face made for radio, a voice for mimes & asshole for colon care.
    geez your slutty bitch is useless without her legs open like a folding chair.
    let's apply the facts bitch, you're RM's arithmetic man- no need to try or practice.
    moron adds played lines, subtracts set-ups, divides crews & multiplies whackness.
    you're the 'laughing stock of the league' nothing I'm about to question.
    investing in you- Obama, Clinton & Mccain could get us out a recession.
    yeah my girl does wants you... to do her eyebrows & prepare her friends.
    crybaby leave cause I'm ready to gear up and moccaSin as Native Americans.


    vs.


    U front like u dope tho; predictions constantly show your not
    If someone thought u’d win, that pic must’ve been doctored in photoshop
    U probably hope I’ll stop; I got memory loss, it’s true
    Cuz ya last dope verse escapes me; too bad u won’t follow suit
    This is the end of ya run; you’re lame and you’re wack to me
    If ya bars were as short as ya win streak, they might be able to catch a beat
    So they fuck me before u, asking to get my cock raw
    You’re just the reup man; they call u after they get their rocks off
    I get the baddest n the best; he’s never tappin the hottest
    Call his bitches frodo… cuz the only one he’s baggin’s a hobbit
    They should’ve changed the challenger; people must feel you’re strong
    this is Chappell’s show; u get fucked up when keepin it Real goes wrong
    Usin my old concepts, but you lack the votes;
    Ironically, ya verse will make or break you , n I’ve had a hand in both
    I’m smackin folk, so u’ll see a hearse for free
    Your not hot…. so I don’t even need a thermometer when I merk-u-Re’
    It’s time to humble ya ass, cuz you’re just the wackest clone
    Now getting boulder just has u runnin scared like Indiana Jones





    Yeah, on quotes I have Meta winning.


    Verse for verse, E, throughout your verse the wording seemed a bit stretched and hard to follow, you cleaned it up about midway through for a few lines, and I started to feel your lines a bit more. Your concepts were all pretty decent, I thought you had some creative lines. The self centered line was tight, bellichek i thought was worded poorly but a cool concept. moccasin was just a solid nameplay.


    Meta, you started with a nice flow, and you went at him pretty straight forward, but still managed to have some nice witty lines in there to add to the wordplay. The s cape line was pretty cool, pic line was a bit simple but i liked the execution on it. win streak line was a nice personal shot. you had some other nice lines in there, i liked that chapelle line, the mercury.. some nice ones. bolder line was pretty nice too.


    All in all I'd say the reason I think MetaSin won here is because his punchlines came off smoother, were executed better, and worded better as well. Creativity was about even throughout, E had some nice ideas, but I still think Meta wrote the better verse.

    vote- MetaSin
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  19. ExodusIII

    ExodusIII New Member

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    E... i felt like your stuff was too wordy...

    with a face made for radio, a voice for mimes & asshole for colon care.
    geez your slutty bitch is useless without her legs open like a folding chair.

    that line was nice... but you should cut down your word usage... it makes ur shit more effective

    meta...

    I’m smackin folk, so u’ll see a hearse for free
    Your not hot…. so I don’t even need a thermometer when I merk-u-Re’

    Fuck natural barriers; an air strike’ll come to make u drop
    Cuz that attack that you’re mountain ain’t enough terrain on top

    those 2 were hot... overall verse was consistant...

    vote=meta
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  20. Baron Mynd

    Baron Mynd Swaggersaurus Rex

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    I wont vote because of the crew thing, but this was TIGHT!

    Great battle both...
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