[Week 49] 7. Lyricalpriest(1-2) vs 8. Cereal_Killer(0-0)

Discussion in 'The Rapmusic Storytelling/Topical League' started by Tacky Jones, Aug 2, 2011.

Thread Status:
Not open for further replies.
  1. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

    Joined:
    Feb 25, 2008
    Messages:
    76,208

    [​IMG]

    VERSES
    VERSUS DUE: Every Friday @ 11:59 PM PST
    LINE LIMIT: Minimum of 16 lines, Maximum of 64
    ** NO RECYCLING, NO EXCEPTIONS **
    •Recycling is the equivalent to that of a no-show and will be treated as such, thus resulting in a loss in favor of the participant whom chose to recycle and a win in favor of his/her opponent
    •Extensions may only be granted if a moderator has given consent prior to a verse being posted in the match OR your opponent gives his consent
    •If granted, the extension will override deadline for both participants extending it for no more than 24 hours
    •CHECK-INS are encouraged, but not required
    •Verses MUST incorporate AT LEAST 1 of the provided topics or pictures
    •A failure to show will result in a loss and a sign out by default
    •If your opponent fails to show, you MUST STILL post AT LEAST 5 lines (4-15) AND 3 voting links in order to claim victory
    •A Championship Title WILL NOT be decided by way of no-show!!!
    •If an opponent fails to show in a Championship match, the remaining participant will be ranked as the number 1 se
    ed, but will not be considered a Champion until a win by vote
    •Upon your second no show, you will be suspended for two weeks of competition. A third no show will result in a three week suspension and a fourth will result in a suspension for the remainder of the season. There is no suspension for first time no showers.
    • Competitors are limited to posting 3 times in their own match, which allows for checking in, posting votes, and posting a verse. For each post over 3 unless deemed necessary by the mods, the competitor will be docked one vote.
    • Each competitor may only post once in another competitors battle allowing for a vote and nothing more, if you would like an explanation or to explain as to why a vote was cast a certain way, you can pm them or point things out properly in the vote to begin with. Violating this will result in losing a vote in your match.
    • A verse can be edited if and only if it is the first verse to be posted and the other verse has yet to be posted or it is the second verse posted and a vote has yet to be received.
    • Members found constantly disruptive to the league will have their sign-in ignored.


    VOTING


    VOTES DUE: Every Sunday @ 11:59 PM PST

    •You MUST vote on AT LEAST 5 matches AND post links in your thread
    •EACH link NOT POSTED will result in a 1 vote DEDUCTION
    •Voting on the Championship and Contender matches is mandatory
    •Champ and Contender links MUST be labeled accordingly
    •Your votes MUST be AT LEAST 2 FULL lines in length per verse in order to be deemed valid (Discretion given on incomplete verses)
    •Failure to vote and/or post LABELED LINKS will result in vote deductions in your battle
    •If your opponent fails to show, you are still accountable for voting on 3 matches as well as posting those links in your match and labeling the CHAMP and CONTENDER respectively!!!
    •Votes posted AFTER DEADLINE will NOT COUNT!!!
    •Voting is open to PARTICIPANTS, RSTL MODERATORS, and PAST CHAMPIONS ONLY!!!
    •PAST CHAMPIONS MUST vote on a MINIMUM of 3 matches in order to be counted as a legitimate voter
    •Editing your vote for any reason must be done within the hour of the original post time. Otherwise, the vote will be null and void.

    ----------------------------------------------------------------

    Any changes must be agreed upon by both participants and cleared by a moderator

    MODERATORS ARE LAW OF THE LAND
    AIM NAMES
    T.a.C- thedude8125
    ShadowWarriorfs- ShadowWarriorfs
    test
  2. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

    Joined:
    Apr 12, 2000
    Messages:
    24,097
    this will be interesting.. hey Cereal how u been?
    test
  3. Cereal_Killer

    Cereal_Killer no ESCAPE

    Joined:
    Oct 25, 2002
    Messages:
    4,146
    test
  4. Cereal_Killer

    Cereal_Killer no ESCAPE

    Joined:
    Oct 25, 2002
    Messages:
    4,146

    Rodent Games
    ..
    Inside my mind lie two blind mice
    As a silent python defines my life
    Despite the shine the colt’s still in control
    One slug, one hole will unfold in my skull
    The rodents represent my thirst and content
    The first to descend
    Will indent the birth of its end
    So reverse is the way this verse shall begin

    ..
    [​IMG]
    ..
    12 hours
    I morn before an autopsy table
    As a corpse lie sawed from his jaw to his naval
    Brutally torn skin, a murder indeed
    An earnest face screened for a furnace of peace
    To burn and set free, through the hurt he did bleed
    As I purge at the thought immersed in dry heaves
    Why me I believe as one cop looks at the other
    Nods his head and asks “is this your brother”
    I shrug off the shock because Vets do not cry
    Do I sign YES when I place the pen to that line
    ..
    6 hours
    Within a police car a proposition is purposed
    With no notice prior I’m thrown through the ropes
    A liar, they want me to identify the expired
    How can I be bribed I’ve already seen hells fires
    They talk I listen as the reward now glistens
    In my iris, like pistons it pumps the blood of my vision
    I grunt through their wisdom but still undecided
    The car stops to the side and I still don’t buy it
    I’m fighting with my morals, the rodents in my head
    Is ok to pretend while my will plays Russian roulette
    ..
    Ground Zero
    I sit at a park with a sack of seeds and feed the birds
    When I pick up the local paper and read the words
    Front page, millionaire has gone without a sound
    His life insurance is unclaimed until his body gets found
    I am a homeless man and money just leads to trouble
    Addiction and doubt I have built up from the rubble
    Humble and pleasant I've never begged for some change
    I play music in the sun and I’m ahead of the game
    But what I wouldn’t do for a drop of this man’s elixir
    Just as I’m approach by two cops out of their police car
    ..
    test
  5. Coup d'état

    Coup d'état Don't believe the hype

    Joined:
    Jun 19, 2009
    Messages:
    4,096
    CK-

    Inside my mind lie two blind mice
    As a silent python defines my life


    Word. Amen. This whole stanza read smooth. And what is more, it all was pure consistency with top tier mechanics. Killer brother.

    The mechanics out did the story I felt. You left a lot of gaps that could have been touched upon...this would have hit harder. But as it stands, this story was still comprehensible and full of life...or lack there of.

    Great verse brother CK. I feel that your trademark play with time could have been scraped and set off in a straight way approach with more details added in, because TBH this was engaging and I wanted more. Nice.
    test
  6. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

    Joined:
    Feb 25, 2008
    Messages:
    76,208
    CK wins by no show
    test
Thread Status:
Not open for further replies.

Share This Page

Users Viewing Thread (Users: 0, Guests: 0)