[Week 49] 13. nom is dull(1-1) vs 14. Got Life?(4-1)

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T.a.C- thedude8125
ShadowWarriorfs- ShadowWarriorfs​

yeah, i won't be participating. close this.

a boy in a bubble,
told me nom was in trouble,
that boy in the bubble,
was actually nomsy in rubble.

heuheuheu.

good match mate, our best yet.

what the fuck happened here.

yesterday gotlife was champ, and nom had a loss.

now gotlife is not a champ, and both these cats have a loss to their name?

nom snitched on me after he got dicked over by the rat ship that runs this league.

haha, yeah i figured as much after reading the other thread.

i say you just troll the fuck out of this thread.

i would, but i'd get bored quick.

i've been doing nothing but trolling the rstl for the last 2 years or so.

a boy in a bubble,
told me gl was in trouble,
that boy in the bubble,
was actually gotty in rubble.

heuheuheu.

good match mate, our best yet.

agreed.

an epic showdown.

Vote - Tie

I really can't decide both verses were really good. sorry.

Nom - Delivery was there. I felt, though, that in this piece you concentrated too much on content and storyline, and took away from the flow. last week your flow was your best area. It was flawless, and t his week.. I don't know.. Here's what I'm saying.. This part of your verse had great delivery, but I think the flow could have been made a bit smoother..
"a boy in a bubble,
told me gl was in trouble,
that boy in the bubble,
was actually gotty in rubble."

Now, this next section of your verse, flowed great! And it had all the tools. Use of vocabulary was better in this section as well.
"a boy in a bubble,
told me gl was in trouble,
that boy in the bubble,
was actually gotty in rubble."
If you wrote the whole verse like that, You would've had some ill shit, but I felt that the first part of your verse kind of stole away from the whole piece.

Got Life? - SOLID. Every week man, you come out and give %110. Your flow was onpint throughout, and the story was so easy to follow. My favorite part was this..
"a boy in a bubble,
told me nom was in trouble,
that boy in the bubble,
was actually nomsy in rubble."
I've never seen such a complex rhymescheme. sometimes I steer away from voting for people that have that complex of a rhymescheme because I feel it takes away from the verse as a Story/Topical, but you managed to keep it at a level that was sheer perfection, in my eyes.

vote - GL? because he's a hotty.

pretty sure i've read that verse of yours before, or part thereof.

i will be telling shadow and tee via pm, and linking them.

sorry nom, it has to be done.

V/ Nom because of his passion. I could tell he took this seriously

hickory dickory dock,
the mods can blow my cock.

Gotta give it to GL? for his obvious originality.

my no-show verse for this week:

eenie
meenie
minie
moe
fairy
dance
is
quite
a hoe
she gets mad
and I just go
trololololol
you know
in the end
she's still a ho
so doe see do.

doesn't count bro, you're not even signed in.

neener neener neener.

youre both fags