[Week 48] [Contender] 3. Ski Mask(2-0) vs 4. ThisisDAM(1-0)

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  1. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    RULES & REGULATIONS

    DEADLINES

    [01] - The deadline for verses is Thursday @ 11:59pm EST.
    [02] - The deadline for extensions is 24 hours ONLY, making it Friday @ 11:59pm EST.
    [03] - The deadline for voting is Sunday @ 11:59am EST.​

    VOTING

    [04] - You must post at least 5 valid voting links within your match.
    [05] - Within those 5 links, you must be sure to vote on both the Championship and Contender matches.
    [06] - Votes must be at least 2 full lines of feedback per competitor followed by the competitor's name in which you choose to vote for.
    [07] - Voting a tie result is deemed a failure to vote.
    [08] - Voting links must be posted in your battle thread with the Champ and Contender matches labeled clearly.
    [09] - Votes changed after 1 hour of posting will be deemed a failure to vote.
    [10] - Voting is open to current participants, past champions, and active RBL moderators ONLY.​

    VERSES

    [11] - All verses are to remain within the limits of 8 to 40 lines. Any breach of line limit must be agreed upon by both competitors prior to a verse being posted. Failure to comply will result in an automatic forfeit by all failing parties.
    [12] - An agreement of a line limit will serve as the maximum allowed; competitors are allowed to post under an agreed limit, but never over. An agreement is not required. Upon failure to agree to a line limit, the second competitor is thereby required to meet the limit set by the first competitor to post.
    [13] - You must not edit your verse once your opponent has posted, who in turn must not edit their verse after the first vote is cast.​
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  2. ThisisDAM

    ThisisDAM Turn The Pages

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  3. ski mask

    ski mask The Don

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  4. ThisisDAM

    ThisisDAM Turn The Pages

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    Prolly tomorrow night
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  5. ski mask

    ski mask The Don

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    Ayo,

    U'd be an odd champ.. U seek worship, but U're just a flawed sham
    It's funny, U're using all of them expletives and ya still no God, Dam
    Ya style's weak.. with Played Bars that don't strike how are U a serpent?
    It's pretty ironic ya name's DAM, 'cause U can't keep up with the Current
    Scar me? That's bizarre see, I gotchu on edge and U seem crushed
    This battle's a short par 3 the way I'm driving a wedge between us
    My verse threatens ya life & it brings the pain with a persistence
    Just call me Chris Nolan how I put U in the Bane of ya existence
    Bitch, I gotta .45 with a laser just for if U try to be sly
    & I'll fucking put a dot on ya lid like U have a stye on ya eye
    Anyway let's talk about ya hoes breast, just imagine that scene
    But they aren’t the big picture.. they’re more like a flat screen
    U're ranked 4th? I would check ya history but I'm more drawn
    Against it, cuz I don't have to live in the past to leave fore-gone
    Speaking of the ranks, when U seen 'em U were scared with pretense
    This shit's a 3-4 situation U didn't wanna see like the Steelers defense

    & it's like that
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  6. ThisisDAM

    ThisisDAM Turn The Pages

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    No effort, look..

    I laughed at your drop last week, with ease I'll slaughter this fag
    Only thing I Rave about that verse was you should've LOST to his ass
    I got bitches wearing me on they face, eating the dick
    Only time chicks wearing Mask is so they don't get seen wit this kid
    This league isn't big, but you couldn't champ wit your drops, No
    You got Elementary bars but me winning is a Sherlock, Holmes
    The site as an audience for you only brings the sound of crickets
    If your verse flows like water-ski, I hope it stops & drowns you with it
    Why you bother to even show when your head'll get truly fractured
    The second we face-mask, you'll need one to cover the bruises after
    Cue the laughter, how could I even lose to this weakened dude?
    I didn't battle patrown but your Parents have since conceiving you
    Got a chick sucking me off, she likes the dark
    My balls Duncan her mouth, while your sharing a grave with Michael Clarke
    Have this kid kissing the concrete, punching his face
    Hell know how the florist tasting while his fam calls one for his wake
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  7. BarZ.

    BarZ. Over Everything

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    vote: hard to call.. it's very close - depends on who you thought had the harder punchlines cuz the style seems pretty punch the same.... HAVING to choose i think DAM started n ended strong w/ 1 pretty good bar btw that... SKI - you started n ended good/second bar was strong and had decent one w/ the flat screen in there.. it's hard cuz i think DAM had the harder hitting lines but SKI had 1 more better line in his verse... tie take it or leave it this is a close one too call
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  8. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    ski:

    U'd be an odd champ.. U seek worship, but U're just a flawed sham
    It's funny, U're using all of them expletives and ya still no God, Dam

    Ya style's weak.. with Played Bars that don't strike how are U a serpent?
    It's pretty ironic ya name's DAM, 'cause U can't keep up with the Current

    Anyway let's talk about ya hoes breast, just imagine that scene
    But they aren’t the big picture.. they’re more like a flat screen

    Speaking of the ranks, when U seen 'em U were scared with pretense
    This shit's a 3-4 situation U didn't wanna see like the Steelers defense

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    Dam:

    I got bitches wearing me on they face, eating the dick
    Only time chicks wearing Mask is so they don't get seen wit this kid

    This league isn't big, but you couldn't champ wit your drops, No
    You got Elementary bars but me winning is a Sherlock, Holmes

    Cue the laughter, how could I even lose to this weakened dude?
    I didn't battle patrown but your Parents have since conceiving you


    close battle, but I got Ski
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  9. EKGenius

    EKGenius New Member

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    is it ok for me to vote? i know i have only one post and it's a sign in to the league. If not, it's cool.
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  10. eggo

    eggo gg

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    Ya style's weak.. with Played Bars that don't strike how are U a serpent?
    It's pretty ironic ya name's DAM, 'cause U can't keep up with the Current
    Anyway let's talk about ya hoes breast, just imagine that scene
    But they aren’t the big picture.. they’re more like a flat screen

    vs

    I laughed at your drop last week, with ease I'll slaughter this fag
    Only thing I Rave about that verse was you should've LOST to his ass
    I got bitches wearing me on they face, eating the dick
    Only time chicks wearing Mask is so they don't get seen wit this kid
    The site as an audience for you only brings the sound of crickets
    If your verse flows like water-ski, I hope it stops & drowns you with it
    Cue the laughter, how could I even lose to this weakened dude?
    I didn't battle patrown but your Parents have since conceiving you



    dam had a more polished verse, better wording, had some fresher concepts. some of his lines coulda been pretty sick with a lil better wording. the water-ski line woulda been nice if you dind't put the dash in it.. when you put dash in wordplays it takes away fromt he punch cause it queues the reader your going to flip it. better to try to word it so you don't have to announce wordplays with -'s.. aside from that this has been one of the better battles i've read. good stuff

    v/dam
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  11. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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    Ski

    PC, that vote doesn't count.

    U'd be an odd champ.. U seek worship, but U're just a flawed sham
    It's funny, U're using all of them expletives and ya still no God, Dam

    ok nameplay

    Ya style's weak.. with Played Bars that don't strike how are U a serpent?
    It's pretty ironic ya name's DAM, 'cause U can't keep up with the Current

    Ok

    Scar me? That's bizarre see, I gotchu on edge and U seem crushed
    This battle's a short par 3 the way I'm driving a wedge between us

    Seen this concept before but you did it nice.

    My verse threatens ya life & it brings the pain with a persistence
    Just call me Chris Nolan how I put U in the Bane of ya existence

    nah

    Bitch, I gotta .45 with a laser just for if U try to be sly
    & I'll fucking put a dot on ya lid like U have a stye on ya eye

    nah

    Anyway let's talk about ya hoes breast, just imagine that scene
    But they aren’t the big picture.. they’re more like a flat screen

    haha this was cool

    U're ranked 4th? I would check ya history but I'm more drawn
    Against it, cuz I don't have to live in the past to leave fore-gone

    This was cool

    Speaking of the ranks, when U seen 'em U were scared with pretense
    This shit's a 3-4 situation U didn't wanna see like the Steelers defense

    more 3-4, this probably should've hit the cutting block. I liked the verse, though; it started slow, but it definitely picked up.

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    Dam

    I laughed at your drop last week, with ease I'll slaughter this fag
    Only thing I Rave about that verse was you should've LOST to his ass

    haha Rave is the punchline of the week this week, I guess. This was ok.

    I got bitches wearing me on they face, eating the dick
    Only time chicks wearing Mask is so they don't get seen wit this kid

    Like this

    This league isn't big, but you couldn't champ wit your drops, No
    You got Elementary bars but me winning is a Sherlock, Holmes

    ok, not hard hitting.

    The site as an audience for you only brings the sound of crickets
    If your verse flows like water-ski, I hope it stops & drowns you with it

    eh, seemed forced.

    Why you bother to even show when your head'll get truly fractured
    The second we face-mask, you'll need one to cover the bruises after
    ok

    Cue the laughter, how could I even lose to this weakened dude?
    I didn't battle patrown but your Parents have since conceiving you

    haha

    Got a chick sucking me off, she likes the dark
    My balls Duncan her mouth, while your sharing a grave with Michael Clarke

    blah

    Have this kid kissing the concrete, punching his face
    Hell know how the florist tasting while his fam calls one for his wake

    ok

    Not the best closer. I liked this verse, too. I think you edged this with consistency. If SKi's first halk was as good as the second...

    vote: Dam
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