[Week 48] [Contender] 3. Coup d'etat(2-0) vs 4. T.a.C(10-6)

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  1. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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  2. Coup d'état

    Coup d'état Don't believe the hype

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    Checkers mother flower.
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  3. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    this is chess not checkers, these are warning shots
    after your next move i'll give you what i got
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  4. Coup d'état

    Coup d'état Don't believe the hype

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    This is what I'm Thinking

    a topical

    I like to offer different angles on important topics
    Twisting my mouth to strangle gossip on popular logic
    And so what ? It's my choice to spit against the wind
    To counter the claims deployed despite the friction it pins
    And I've always felt it a dangerous stance to simply agree
    What does this grant you ? If you ask me, its fleecing the free
    So lost with it all...at correcting a cause which corrodes
    Like iron on a tin can, paused to rust away old rail roads

    And if I may, allow me to be self-righteous, you ignorant kids
    For are we nimble saying that in intellect stands bliss ?
    I tell the truth, none may flip in another's mental gymnasium
    Ideas spring shut answers cremated in some skeletal stadium
    Once you leave this athletic chess you're a means to an end
    In a fashion sense, fitted fast without lock, fit to offend
    Then choke-slammed into the All Seeing Eye of Compliance
    That is, co-planned into a dying pen of no self reliance

    So, if nothing is as it seems and lies do exist
    Who's ready to wake up and stand up to this ?
    Listen to the quantifying reality hitting empirical bats
    Qualifying this genius virtuosity, wearing old harmonic hats

    That is to say,

    FOX, CNN, NBC. All assemble us in great flexibility
    An ensemble pridefully disguised behind wide vulnerabilities
    Divide and conquer, make no room for wrong answers
    To export lies and import big blooms of societal cancers
    So, you tickle your own Elmo. I Drop news anchor elbows
    Set truth to News by coring out real flavored apples

    Didn't I tell you ?

    I like to offer different angles on important topics
    Twisting my mouth to strangle gossip on popular logic
    If you think you are mentally smart, smooth and skilled
    Remember: shit is false if you are spoon fed this ooze as milk
    Because Pseudo Intellect bows to illuminated minds
    Find the time to insinuate this and please plot this find

    In the end,

    Timid is the blinded, though, superiority never minded
    National syndicated trauma shows us just who is binded
    This media culture, dizzies society like flying saucers
    Nitpicking the free fallen, thus sky diving like vultures



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  5. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    1, 2, 3, 4, i know im a dirty whore
    5,6,7,8, family came, they stayed late
    9,10, wont happen again
    11,12, vote for me or go to hell

    okay so i wont be posting this week. sorry. busy week. heres my no show verse. jus so you arent completely disappointed, heres a joke.

    this old couple is traveling through jeruselum. on the trip, the old lady falls sick and passes away. the man is at the funeral home where the funeral director explains either he can bury here there in the holy land for or ship her back to the U.S. but shipping her would cost more. he stops and thinks about it for a second before saying, "i think i'll ship her back". the funeral director is absolutely shocked and says "why would you want to ship her back when she could be buried here in the holy land for cheaper?" the man responds, "well, you see, i heard this story about a person being buried out here, and a few months later he came back to life. i dont think i can risk that."


    fuck it, heres another. this texan guys wife's giving birth and the man is sitting out in the waiting room. after a bit the nurse comes out, "sir, sir, your wife just gave birth to an 18 pound baby boy." the man just shrugs. the nurse is shocked as she goes back in. an hour later she runs out, "sir, sir, your wife just gave birth to a second 18 lb baby boy." the man shrugs again. the nurse asks "sir, what the hell is wrong with you. any man would be proud to have one 18 lb baby boy, but you have two." the man responds, "ma'am, im from Texas, and down here everythings bigger. take my cock for example. big as a stove pipe." the nurse says "we'll you better go blow the soot out of the stove pipe because the babies are black."




    sorry fellas, hope the jokes make up for me not having a verse.
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  7. IAmBenT

    IAmBenT Eat a dick, faggot

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    LMAO great jokes.

    a really fantastic topical from Coup. spot on analysis blended with poetic outrage. i like the play on intellect being bliss, rather than the old saw touting ignorance, i like that image too of dropping news anchor elbows, funny and evocative. solid verse, rhymes were a bit odd and forced at times but the message was strong
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  8. Got Life?

    Got Life? Resident Megalomaniac

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    Coup - this reminded me a bit of Uncle Sam Goddamn by Brother Ali. There were segments that I was truly really into especially your last 4 bars. Some of this got derailed a bit by you continuously beating home the same message without really expanding upon it and the flow suffered for content. While in most cases that's fine, when you're doing a topical like this it really needs to have a smooth flow so that the reader can stay into it otherwise it begins to feel preachy. This was one of the better verses I've seen from you though so keep at it.

    TaC - Son, I am disappoint. How're you gonna no-show after asking for an extension and not even post a 16 line no-show verse. Furious masturbation from years of virginity derail you this week?
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  9. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    Coup- last thing I said and first thing that came outta my mouth very moment I completed this verse was “oooooh daaaaaamn” yo bro u went zack de la rocha on it with this real talk.. you brought power and fierceness with bomb imagery about a topical of ur own approach and personally unique angle. Loved the whole verse thru.. no need to quote.. see verse.

    T.A.C. I seriously think im going to vote for you bro. I mean who is this guy coup right? Always comin’ in here with these hot ass verses consistently and shit.. shittin’ on nigga’s like GL? and I heard he from GFU too so I don’t wanna crew vote.. u know I don’t want it to be obvious but I can’t help it.. but the jokes where funny especially if u made them up

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  10. nom is dull.

    nom is dull. but shines up pretty.

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    coup - some of the verse just felt a little bogged down in unneeded wording. also i'm pretty sure apples and elbows doesn't rhyme. bits of it felt like you were just flexing vocab without it needing to be flexed. not the best piece i've read from you but it was alright. i did really like 'so, you tickle your own elmo'. and the flow on 'If you think you are mentally smart, smooth and skilled
    Remember: shit is false if you are spoon fed this ooze as milk' was brilliant. smooth and skilled / ooze as milk was a brilliant little slant rhyme that i enjoyed very much.

    tac - shit jokes.

    vote - coup.
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  11. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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  12. Resilient.

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    I liked the 2nd joke.. lmfao
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  13. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

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    I thought was a nice read. The vocab was good and the rhymes were solid. I thought the story could have been more interesting. Something to really get my mind going. i'm starting to feel sick so i don't really have the energy to go much more into this. Good verse here. Good luck in the champ match next week.


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  14. Coup d'état

    Coup d'état Don't believe the hype

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