[Week 48] 9. PharCyzE(2-1) vs 10. Coil Grimley(1-1) vs 11. Sycamore(0-0)

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  1. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    [01] - The deadline for verses is Thursday @ 11:59pm EST.
    [02] - The deadline for extensions is 24 hours ONLY, making it Friday @ 11:59pm EST.
    [03] - The deadline for voting is Sunday @ 11:59am EST.​

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    VERSES

    [11] - All verses are to remain within the limits of 8 to 40 lines. Any breach of line limit must be agreed upon by both competitors prior to a verse being posted. Failure to comply will result in an automatic forfeit by all failing parties.
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  2. BarZ.

    BarZ. Over Everything

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    yo...
    ready



    my verse go'n up Wed night - 30 bars
    ______________________________________________________







    look,


    make this easy.....




    lemme show u how the fuck this gon work.. w/ every punch it gets worst
    hit with a cross from every angle... hell, u'll even think ur stuck n a church
    i rap tight around coil - construct'n a verse to boa construct on ya nerves
    any1 vote for Syc.... shit, there must be a lesson hidden under their verse
    need better aim w/ them shots - this milf hunter tryna fuck w/ my words (lol)
    u ain't come strap'd w/ a magnum.. now watch this mothafucker get burned
    Lesson.Learned-> the motto - come follow - text legends who'll take ya pride
    break this guy till he's left width-end tears like draw'n a map of Asian cries
    amaze'n heights, i take n display n fights when i turn the animated type
    haduken separates ya plates n breaks ya face til u need glasses to brace ya eyes
    change ya fate - cage n shape... energy blast - flash - brains get fried
    dnt ask for cash... leave a Penny for ya thoughts - Why? I Break, I Buy
    my shits fire - bars are equivalent to gadgets - when flame'n nines
    your shits fire - bars are equivalent to faggots....... the flame'n type
    they'll change ya life - drop'd early so they'll have to tag-team
    be hard n make the bitch move... it's a good look for you drag queens
    in this bad scene.. the monster in ya closet just infected ya bad dreams
    Grim, the messenger of death? but...... got shrills when he grab'd me
    man, please!! i'm in ya face like acne.. - the shit found on ya girl
    give u a couple paranormal punches.... literally, knock you outta this world
    See, i ain't take Syc serious... cuz i learned back thug'n in school
    that u can't take Syc serious.. based how many times i cut w/ the crew
    try n stunt like u cool.. get first aid how i do u the the worst way
    fuck around n plant Sycamore n the ground.. my early contribution for earth day
    my man say they hate'n.... so when u reenter make a statement
    but this here be easy sail'n.... you guys prolly tour guide great vacations
    Syc ain't shit - but they said coil ain't nothing to mess with
    so i encryted this verse w/ lead fist encoded w/ multiple chest hits
    roles reversed - tides turned soon as coil stepped in my presence
    now if my future looks Grim its cuz God chose me to handout YALL death wish

    ....... i'm the Best Bitch!!!!







    Lesson.Learned
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  3. coil grimely

    coil grimely Tears textcees to tidbits

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    I'm high to tha sky

    I'll drop a verse upon my return to Earth

    Iight,

    Battling the grimiest so now you're showered with hope?
    It still won't get you a clean win with those 30 bars.. of soap
    ^Just some filler to alleviate the pain of your sorrow,
    Like using your neighbors Wi-fi, I bet those bars are borrowed
    Sorry, but I promise tomorrow you're gonna thank me,
    Like..
    "Forgot to clean my room today Thank God my mom ain't spank me"
    Strapped when I dance but Syc knows the way I move quick,
    In battles I get a-head w/ two arms that raise your roof, slick

    I'll just call you "The Cat", so if curiosity doesn't kill it...
    I'm at a chinese food restaurant with Q to split the bill wit'
    You gon' pay for this later. Fuck it make you pay for this now!
    No Santa but I'll slay ya...
    I'm no Muslim when you're prey-ya put ya face on the ground!
    How that concrete tastes, as I stomp the back of ya necks,
    Pieces of ya grill cover the pavement like cars in a high speed wreck
    30 bars huh? If you're not spent.. all your lies are sold bruh,
    'Cos you've bitten more lines than a devious coke fiending cobra

    Got blades for the snake in the grass, lungs black like a hatian w/ hash
    Your materials recycled like I bottled that style and I'm takin' the trash
    I'll just call you "Landfill". They look at me like "Damn this man is ILL",
    Gun'll POP at your face and I guarantee it'll make that soda can spill
    I'll call you Ginger Ale, frail, with thoughts slower than a snail's rate,
    Your moms an open cereal box 'cos if you check her pussy's stale, mate
    You'd rhyme oh shit with ocean, nope bitch. I got that potion...
    homos you won't win..
    I plan on beating you, you're hoping w/ your dicks & some lotion

    I'm number one prospect yall should leave me the fuck alone!
    'Cos that rough draft isn't gonna get you far with Luck alone
    Pharnyce? - must be smokin' tar, ice.. thinkin' that your bars' tight?!
    Beat you to death with a stool 'cos you wanted to get ina bar fight!
    Swingin' atcha jaw, right, 'til you ain't got no teeth left,
    Say outcha lights & goodnite but after reading your verse, WE slept
    ............I'll travel back in time, Syc, I'm tearing you whore,
    Torture your pregnant moms 'til she couldn't bear any more
    test
  4. BarZ.

    BarZ. Over Everything

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  5. ski mask

    ski mask The Don

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    PharCyzE:

    lemme show u how the fuck this gon work.. w/ every punch it gets worst
    hit with a cross from every angle... hell, u'll even think ur stuck n a church
    .. decent, couldve been a little more effective
    i rap tight around coil - construct'n a verse to boa construct on ya nerves
    any1 vote for Syc.... shit, there must be a lesson hidden under their verse
    .. ehh
    need better aim w/ them shots - this milf hunter tryna fuck w/ my words (lol)
    u ain't come strap'd w/ a magnum.. now watch this mothafucker get burned
    .. filler
    Lesson.Learned-> the motto - come follow - text legends who'll take ya pride
    break this guy till he's left width-end tears like draw'n a map of Asian cries
    .. nah
    amaze'n heights, i take n display n fights when i turn the animated type
    haduken separates ya plates n breaks ya face til u need glasses to brace ya eyes
    .. cool flow but no punch
    change ya fate - cage n shape... energy blast - flash - brains get fried
    dnt ask for cash... leave a Penny for ya thoughts - Why? I Break, I Buy
    .. nah
    my shits fire - bars are equivalent to gadgets - when flame'n nines
    your shits fire - bars are equivalent to faggots....... the flame'n type
    .. decent line, played concept tho
    they'll change ya life - drop'd early so they'll have to tag-team
    be hard n make the bitch move... it's a good look for you drag queens
    .. again, decent but a played concept
    in this bad scene.. the monster in ya closet just infected ya bad dreams
    Grim, the messenger of death? but...... got shrills when he grab'd me
    .. nah
    man, please!! i'm in ya face like acne.. - the shit found on ya girl
    give u a couple paranormal punches.... literally, knock you outta this world
    .. i liked this one
    See, i ain't take Syc serious... cuz i learned back thug'n in school
    that u can't take Syc serious.. based how many times i cut w/ the crew
    .. decent but needed to be more effective
    try n stunt like u cool.. get first aid how i do u the the worst way
    fuck around n plant Sycamore n the ground.. my early contribution for earth day
    .. this was nice
    my man say they hate'n.... so when u reenter make a statement
    but this here be easy sail'n.... you guys prolly tour guide great vacations
    .. nah
    Syc ain't shit - but they said coil ain't nothing to mess with
    so i encryted this verse w/ lead fist encoded w/ multiple chest hits
    .. ehh, filler
    roles reversed - tides turned soon as coil stepped in my presence
    now if my future looks Grim its cuz God chose me to handout YALL death wish
    .. nah

    Overall this verse wasn't anything outstanding. I did like the paranormal punches line, and the earth day shit was nice too. Other than that, nothing outstanding. You could've worded a couple concepts better to make them into something nice. U did have a good flow to it.

    Coil Grimely:

    Battling the grimiest so now you're showered with hope?
    It still won't get you a clean win with those 30 bars.. of soap
    .. lol, this was funny, flipped well
    ^Just some filler to alleviate the pain of your sorrow,
    Like using your neighbors Wi-fi, I bet those bars are borrowed
    .. cool
    Sorry, but I promise tomorrow you're gonna thank me,
    Like..
    "Forgot to clean my room today Thank God my mom ain't spank me"
    .. ehh
    Strapped when I dance but Syc knows the way I move quick,
    In battles I get a-head w/ two arms that raise your roof, slick
    .. nah
    I'll just call you "The Cat", so if curiosity doesn't kill it...
    I'm at a chinese food restaurant with Q to split the bill wit'
    .. lol
    You gon' pay for this later. Fuck it make you pay for this now!
    No Santa but I'll slay ya...
    I'm no Muslim when you're prey-ya put ya face on the ground!
    .. bad wording
    How that concrete tastes, as I stomp the back of ya necks,
    Pieces of ya grill cover the pavement like cars in a high speed wreck
    .. this was another decent flip
    30 bars huh? If you're not spent.. all your lies are sold bruh,
    'Cos you've bitten more lines than a devious coke fiending cobra
    .. nah
    Got blades for the snake in the grass, lungs black like a hatian w/ hash
    Your materials recycled like I bottled that style and I'm takin' the trash
    .. decent
    I'll just call you "Landfill". They look at me like "Damn this man is ILL",
    Gun'll POP at your face and I guarantee it'll make that soda can spill
    .. lol another decent flip
    I'll call you Ginger Ale, frail, with thoughts slower than a snail's rate,
    Your moms an open cereal box 'cos if you check her pussy's stale, mate
    .. ehh
    You'd rhyme oh shit with ocean, nope bitch. I got that potion...
    homos you won't win..
    I plan on beating you, you're hoping w/ your dicks & some lotion
    .. nah
    I'm number one prospect yall should leave me the fuck alone!
    'Cos that rough draft isn't gonna get you far with Luck alone
    .. filler
    Pharnyce? - must be smokin' tar, ice.. thinkin' that your bars' tight?!
    Beat you to death with a stool 'cos you wanted to get ina bar fight!
    .. played
    Swingin' atcha jaw, right, 'til you ain't got no teeth left,
    Say outcha lights & goodnite but after reading your verse, WE slept
    .. couldve been better
    ............I'll travel back in time, Syc, I'm tearing you whore,
    Torture your pregnant moms 'til she couldn't bear any more
    .. nah

    Overall this verse was alright, nothing special. I did like a couple of the flips you pulled off. Most were pretty played but U made a few fresh.

    It came down to these lines IMO...

    man, please!! i'm in ya face like acne.. - the shit found on ya girl
    give u a couple paranormal punches.... literally, knock you outta this world

    try n stunt like u cool.. get first aid how i do u the the worst way
    fuck around n plant Sycamore n the ground.. my early contribution for earth day

    vs.

    Battling the grimiest so now you're showered with hope?
    It still won't get you a clean win with those 30 bars.. of soap
    ^Just some filler to alleviate the pain of your sorrow,
    Like using your neighbors Wi-fi, I bet those bars are borrowed

    I'll just call you "The Cat", so if curiosity doesn't kill it...
    I'm at a chinese food restaurant with Q to split the bill wit'

    Vote: Coil Grimely

    IMO, PharCyzE was 2 good lines short of winning this one.
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  6. EKGenius

    EKGenius New Member

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    Im down to vote on this battle if its cool with you guys. My only valid post is a sign in to the league. Let me know. If not, its cool.
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  7. BarZ.

    BarZ. Over Everything

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    go head.. need all the votes we can get
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  8. eggo

    eggo gg

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    Swingin' atcha jaw, right, 'til you ain't got no teeth left,
    Say outcha lights & goodnite but after reading your verse, WE slept
    I'll just call you "The Cat", so if curiosity doesn't kill it...
    I'm at a chinese food restaurant with Q to split the bill wit'

    vs

    they'll change ya life - drop'd early so they'll have to tag-team
    be hard n make the bitch move... it's a good look for you drag queens


    This was very weak battle, not alot of quotables from either. coil had the better wording but neither had very good concepts or hard hitting punches was just alot of rhyming and saying some insults, not alot of creative punches. phar had some attempts at some wordplay he just didn't use them the right way. had alot of potential ones, the sycamore earth day couldla been decent but you just didn't incorporate it in right. anyways,

    v/coil
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  9. EKGenius

    EKGenius New Member

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    PharCyzE Verse

    lemme show u how the fuck this gon work.. w/ every punch it gets worst
    hit with a cross from every angle... hell, u'll even think ur stuck n a church
    .. concept needs to be flipped a little differently imo - but still like it
    i rap tight around coil - construct'n a verse to boa construct on ya nerves
    any1 vote for Syc.... shit, there must be a lesson hidden under their verse
    .. ok
    need better aim w/ them shots - this milf hunter tryna fuck w/ my words (lol)
    u ain't come strap'd w/ a magnum.. now watch this mothafucker get burned
    .. filler
    Lesson.Learned-> the motto - come follow - text legends who'll take ya pride
    break this guy till he's left width-end tears like draw'n a map of Asian cries
    .. wordplay slightly forced
    amaze'n heights, i take n display n fights when i turn the animated type
    haduken separates ya plates n breaks ya face til u need glasses to brace ya eyes
    .. like the multi rhyme scheme extended from previous bar but its pretty much an extended filler
    change ya fate - cage n shape... energy blast - flash - brains get fried
    dnt ask for cash... leave a Penny for ya thoughts - Why? I Break, I Buy
    .. I see the concept just could’ve flipped differently - decent
    my shits fire - bars are equivalent to gadgets - when flame'n nines
    your shits fire - bars are equivalent to faggots....... the flame'n type
    .. ok – played concept tho
    they'll change ya life - drop'd early so they'll have to tag-team
    be hard n make the bitch move... it's a good look for you drag queens
    .. again played concept – same as the bar before but a bit better
    in this bad scene.. the monster in ya closet just infected ya bad dreams
    Grim, the messenger of death? but...... got shrills when he grab'd me
    .. again filler
    man, please!! i'm in ya face like acne.. - the shit found on ya girl
    give u a couple paranormal punches.... literally, knock you outta this world
    .. cool – fresh flip
    See, i ain't take Syc serious... cuz i learned back thug'n in school
    that u can't take Syc serious.. based how many times i cut w/ the crew
    .. ok
    try n stunt like u cool.. get first aid how i do u the the worst way
    fuck around n plant Sycamore n the ground.. my early contribution for earth day
    .. cool name flip
    my man say they hate'n.... so when u reenter make a statement
    but this here be easy sail'n.... you guys prolly tour guide great vacations
    .. simple straight punch – old concept, but I like the wording



    Syc ain't shit - but they said coil ain't nothing to mess with
    so i encryted this verse w/ lead fist encoded w/ multiple chest hits
    .. again rhyme scheme filler
    roles reversed - tides turned soon as coil stepped in my presence
    now if my future looks Grim its cuz God chose me to handout YALL death wish
    ..Grim/death played concept – needs a fresher flip.

    Decent work.. Flow is on point at most parts, but could’ve taken out a lot of those fillers from the verse and add more substance.. Quality over quantity.. Some concepts are played but if the flip is fresh then I don’t worry about it too much. Best line is the earth day line.

    Coil Grimely

    Battling the grimiest so now you're showered with hope?
    It still won't get you a clean win with those 30 bars.. of soap
    .. Played concept – ok flip
    ^Just some filler to alleviate the pain of your sorrow,
    Like using your neighbors Wi-fi, I bet those bars are borrowed
    .. again played – but cool flip
    Sorry, but I promise tomorrow you're gonna thank me,
    Like..
    "Forgot to clean my room today Thank God my mom ain't spank me"
    .. not feeling this
    Strapped when I dance but Syc knows the way I move quick,
    In battles I get a-head w/ two arms that raise your roof, slick
    .. not feeling this flip on a played concept
    I'll just call you "The Cat", so if curiosity doesn't kill it...
    I'm at a chinese food restaurant with Q to split the bill wit'
    .. liking this
    You gon' pay for this later. Fuck it make you pay for this now!
    No Santa but I'll slay ya...
    I'm no Muslim when you're prey-ya put ya face on the ground!
    .. ive seen this concept worked better
    How that concrete tastes, as I stomp the back of ya necks,
    Pieces of ya grill cover the pavement like cars in a high speed wreck
    .. ok flip
    30 bars huh? If you're not spent.. all your lies are sold bruh,
    'Cos you've bitten more lines than a devious coke fiending cobra
    .. not feeling this – a cobra that does coke is slightly forced imo
    Got blades for the snake in the grass, lungs black like a hatian w/ hash
    Your materials recycled like I bottled that style and I'm takin' the trash
    .. alright


    I'll just call you "Landfill". They look at me like "Damn this man is ILL",
    Gun'll POP at your face and I guarantee it'll make that soda can spill
    .. cool flip
    I'll call you Ginger Ale, frail, with thoughts slower than a snail's rate,
    Your moms an open cereal box 'cos if you check her pussy's stale, mate
    .. idk probably would’ve liked it better if you stuck with a “chess” flip – decent tho
    You'd rhyme oh shit with ocean, nope bitch. I got that potion...
    homos you won't win..
    I plan on beating you, you're hoping w/ your dicks & some lotion
    .. too played man – not feeling it
    I'm number one prospect yall should leave me the fuck alone!
    'Cos that rough draft isn't gonna get you far with Luck alone
    .. nice line – cool set up
    Pharnyce? - must be smokin' tar, ice.. thinkin' that your bars' tight?!
    Beat you to death with a stool 'cos you wanted to get ina bar fight!
    .. another played concept that’s too played to flip
    Swingin' atcha jaw, right, 'til you ain't got no teeth left,
    Say outcha lights & goodnite but after reading your verse, WE slept
    .. wording made this seem off a bit – ok punch
    ............I'll travel back in time, Syc, I'm tearing you whore,
    Torture your pregnant moms 'til she couldn't bear any more
    .. not feeling the self nameplay here

    This verse stayed consistent.. A couple played lines with no original flip in some parts, but countered it with a couple fresh ones.. Best line is the Andrew Luck line.. the whole bar was a nice set up with the “rough draft” concept. Decent work as well.

    Vote – Coil Grimely
    Stayed more consistent than PharCyzE.. The fillers took out a lot out of the verse.. while Coil Grimely provided more package with his verse. Good battle fellas.
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  10. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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    I liked Coil's split the bill line. The only line I thought was good here =/. I'll be more specific in the Mag.

    Vote Coil
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  11. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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    Coil wins 3-0
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