[Week 43] [Contender] 1. Tacky Jones(7-4) vs 2. ShadowWarriorfs(27-14)

Discussion in 'The Rapmusic Storytelling/Topical League' started by Tacky Jones, Jun 21, 2011.

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  1. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

    Feb 25, 2008


    VERSUS DUE: Every Friday @ 11:59 PM PST
    LINE LIMIT: Minimum of 16 lines, Maximum of 64
    •Recycling is the equivalent to that of a no-show and will be treated as such, thus resulting in a loss in favor of the participant whom chose to recycle and a win in favor of his/her opponent
    •Extensions may only be granted if a moderator has given consent prior to a verse being posted in the match OR your opponent gives his consent
    •If granted, the extension will override deadline for both participants extending it for no more than 24 hours
    •CHECK-INS are encouraged, but not required
    •Verses MUST incorporate AT LEAST 1 of the provided topics or pictures
    •A failure to show will result in a loss and a sign out by default
    •If your opponent fails to show, you MUST STILL post AT LEAST 5 lines (4-15) AND 3 voting links in order to claim victory
    •A Championship Title WILL NOT be decided by way of no-show!!!
    •If an opponent fails to show in a Championship match, the remaining participant will be ranked as the number 1 se
    ed, but will not be considered a Champion until a win by vote
    •Upon your second no show, you will be suspended for two weeks of competition. A third no show will result in a three week suspension and a fourth will result in a suspension for the remainder of the season. There is no suspension for first time no showers.
    • Competitors are limited to posting 3 times in their own match, which allows for checking in, posting votes, and posting a verse. For each post over 3 unless deemed necessary by the mods, the competitor will be docked one vote.
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    • A verse can be edited if and only if it is the first verse to be posted and the other verse has yet to be posted or it is the second verse posted and a vote has yet to be received.
    • Members found constantly disruptive to the league will have their sign-in ignored.


    VOTES DUE: Every Sunday @ 11:59 PM PST

    •You MUST vote on AT LEAST 5 matches AND post links in your thread
    •EACH link NOT POSTED will result in a 1 vote DEDUCTION
    •Voting on the Championship and Contender matches is mandatory
    •Champ and Contender links MUST be labeled accordingly
    •Your votes MUST be AT LEAST 2 FULL lines in length per verse in order to be deemed valid (Discretion given on incomplete verses)
    •Failure to vote and/or post LABELED LINKS will result in vote deductions in your battle
    •If your opponent fails to show, you are still accountable for voting on 3 matches as well as posting those links in your match and labeling the CHAMP and CONTENDER respectively!!!
    •Votes posted AFTER DEADLINE will NOT COUNT!!!
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    •Editing your vote for any reason must be done within the hour of the original post time. Otherwise, the vote will be null and void.


    Any changes must be agreed upon by both participants and cleared by a moderator

    T.a.C- thedude8125
    ShadowWarriorfs- ShadowWarriorfs
  2. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

    Apr 11, 2004
  3. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

    Feb 25, 2008
    Oops. Phone bugged out i gyess. I said me too yesterday. Will post shortly
  4. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

    Feb 25, 2008
    The greatest day of my life lead to my worst
    My pride and joy, my boy, and my hurt

    I met this girl at my friend’s party
    17, heaven’s queen, wearing Ed Hardy
    Sipping Hen, Bacardi, cant nothin’ stop me
    Heading to the bedroom for a drunken romping
    From there it gets blurry as I awoke early
    She heard me hurling burly chunks of curly
    Fries and fried chicken thighs, to my surprise
    She’d rise and try to help, sitting by my side
    Holding a bucket like it’s a game where I’d get a prize
    No longer feeling like I’ll die after one glimpse of her eyes

    No beer goggles involved, she’s still glorious
    She looks like a model evolved into a beauty queen
    Gazing upon her face, all I can feel is victorious
    She’s absolutely gorgeous, no joke, truly she
    Has every right to be a snooty being, but she’s down to earth
    She gets out of bed, and looked around ‘til she found her purse
    Wrote her number down, got dressed out of her slumber gown
    Watching as she leaves my lumber hounds and I wonder how
    I was able to pull a girl like her, the feeling in my heart was great
    Called her that same day, and that night decided to start to date
    The start was great, even though we agreed to slow it sexually
    Take it slow, with my track record it seems I’d blow it next, you see
    I’ve never been good with relationships, every girl I get has left, so
    I’m gonna try my best though…
    …I expect what happened next to be our fuckin death blow
    “I’m pregnant” tears rolling down her face
    Saying it in a tone like she sounds disgraced
    That night a few months back was the last time we had sex
    She’s a few months late and was positive on her last test
    Abortion seems like a fast guess, as I try to convince her
    That we should have this child, sealing it as I kiss her
    All my life I wanted to be a father, my secret
    I tell her it wouldn’t be a bother, let’s keep it
    She says she isn’t ready to be a mother, but I beg her to
    “Fine, I’ll have this baby just for you”

    I was by her side for all 9, and one morn.
    I woke in a soaked bed, 12 hours later our sons born
    So proud, calling both our families, I couldn’t stop smiling
    My girl, who only did this for me was not liking
    All the pain of birth, how he cried all night at first
    And thought changing his diaper 20 times was worse
    She stayed home with him, while I worked a crap job
    At a pharmacy, just so that I could get half off
    I’d come home late night after working a double shift
    And instantly she tells me how all day she had trouble with
    Keeping him from crying, every time he unloads shit
    It explodes quick all over and she doing this alone, it’s
    Too much for her, and now she barely see’s me
    Between work and Barry’s needs and screaming
    Constant feedings and feces, what seemed fairly easy
    Has become scary, she’s even almost prepared for leaving
    She wants to end it, she wants to just quit this now
    But I convince her it’ll get better and just to stick it out

    One day after work, I walk into our apartment and smell smoke
    Running down the hall, its feeling hot as hell, though
    One of them may need help so I kick in the back door, hard as I can
    To see as she tosses our son into a burning garbage can

    The greatest day of my life lead to my worst
    My pride and joy, my boy, and my hurt

    Topic: Burn Baby Burn
  5. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

    Apr 11, 2004
    Something different

    Get off my back

    Every morning awaken by the same anger
    Of a stranger waiting, watching like Gods above Christ’s manger
    Beaten with rods to entice the wickedness in my heart
    Demons sticking dicks in parts of my soul to spark
    Flames to burn holes through my fresh, veins about to ignite
    Ignoring my plight for freedom, bleeding just to spite
    These heathens, still calling for no reasons, perhaps stalling
    For time until I snap, tightening my straps on my belt crawling
    Out my bedroom, voices through out my brain strains my thoughts
    Head room exceeded, vacancy denied for me while Satan sought
    Latency, patience no longer a virtue as rage continues to build
    Retrained likes patients declared insane, fighting because my heart willed
    Itself to remain, energy drains ra-p-i-dly making me weak
    Now the demons laugh at me and lurk, refusing to speak
    Sanity leaves its perch aware that anger was about to destroy it
    Family annoyed as I tried to explained that I was being toyed with
    Verbal pains shouted at me as I felt the their words on my back
    Racial slurs attack while I flee the scene; anger continues to stack
    Suddenly their words seem less dominant, followed by absence
    Breath heated as Goosebumps spawn, I finally collapse since
    I lost the strength to endure, anger’s storage filled, it’s time to release it
    With the world on my back, I exorcise the demons that policed it
    My hatred now to much for them to bare, escaping my flare
    As I declare war against everyone as all Satan could do was stare…


  6. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

    Apr 12, 2000
    t.a.c.- this was a very amusing narration. very typical story line... typical in the sense it's cliche but very abnormal for mother's to hate their baby's that much that a few diaper changes a day drive em crazy.. that bitch had major problems. how hard can changing a diaper be and feeding haha.. good rhyme and word usage.. a tad bit immature in some area's but solid for the most part.

    shaddow- very poetic deep, rhyme riddled, liked the flip the most, and this topic was very relatable. as we all fight our inner demon's. we all got our "monkey's on our back" no racist. haha. but yo i liked this story som area's the flow seemed forced but the last half it was really on point.

    vote- shaddow

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  7. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

    Feb 25, 2008
    shadow wins 1-0
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