[Week 40] [Contender] 3. Coup d'etat(2-0) vs 4. Cereal_Killer(2-1)

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  1. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

    Feb 25, 2008


    VERSUS DUE: Every Friday @ 11:59 PM PST
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  2. Coup d'état

    Coup d'état Don't believe the hype

    Jun 19, 2009
  3. Cereal_Killer

    Cereal_Killer no ESCAPE

    Oct 25, 2002
    The Mood For Blue
    In the blink of an eye I exist, a stimulant visual glitch
    A circadian laps un-caged and on track with a pistol grip
    Displayed in brains when racked and strained, I kiss your lips
    You collapse no pain as you submit once my missile hits
    Each person’s thoughts support your own image in darkness
    Unknowing what’s really there in that milli-second your path is
    Changed, re-arranged you are my target in a circus of marksmen
    And my blade remains as the sharpest in hells hand basket
    I am a pirate behind your iris so small I simulate a virus
    No tyrant i'm still low in the ranks of the unforeseen violence
    A migrant with timing to supply your mind so vibrant
    When you close your eyes varmint your right for this viper
    A sniper who’s negative by nature and amused by abuse
    I know you’re confused but you have to loosen that noose
    When your lids shut and you think its red it is usually blue
    As your mind makes up what it thinks is grouped by this brute
    I place the image to remake your decision in life
    I have precision with time so what feels instant is a lie
    As I believe everything can end in the blink of an eye
    Let me explain
    A twenty two year old girl goes out for the night
    Gets drunk but has to get home so she drinks and drives
    She looks at the time 7am as she hops behind the wheel
    Feeling sick she vomits onto the front of the windshield
    Cleaning it off she puts the key in the ignition and chugs off
    Locks the car doors and checks if her guns in the glove box
    She doesn’t want to get jacked so she is glad it’s there
    She removes a chunk of vomit from the plaits in her hair
    Speeding down the street it’s wet and dangerous
    She jets through a red light unfazed for her luck she came to trust
    It’s insane but she must get home as she grazed the clutch
    Changed gears, hits a bump and smears her face all up
    The car barrel rolls down the street as her body carousels
    She gets thrown to the passenger’s side because of no seatbelt
    Without being paralyzed she is lucky to have lived at all
    Especially when she is barely bruised but fit to fall
    Right here I come
    A car pulls off the road and Jane Dough ‘s feelings erupt
    She is unsure as this neighborhood was built up by the rough
    So as a man walks to her car she blinks from the morning sun
    I insert an image of a knight in armor now she won’t reach for her gun
    The man opens the side door as they grace each other with a laugh
    He holds her down and she kicks so he tears her legs apart
    Now with more injuries then the accident it self
    She looks inside the glove box even though it’s too late to help
    The man is gone and in a split instant feelings change
    And those feelings are what shape what you are today
    See I’m an image maker a lower class general
    I’m tired from this small fry shit I want to go terminal
    Move from circadian laps to permanent psychosis you see
    So help my cause and lose focus by dropping LSD

  4. Coup d'état

    Coup d'état Don't believe the hype

    Jun 19, 2009
    NEEED the extention...still working on. Thank you.
  5. Coup d'état

    Coup d'état Don't believe the hype

    Jun 19, 2009
    I'm sorry I can't show this week...yeah i know.there is a party of a life time and im at it.

    Sorry CK
  6. fairydance2000

    fairydance2000 don't wait, Procrastinate

    Mar 10, 2004
    Just a quick vote, I like this story a lot, very deep and tricky, I liked the freshness of this one
    As usual your rhymes and flow are great. I enjoyed this one, it wasn’t too hard for me to read LOL
    I figure if I read a verse and there is a no show, I would comment anyway.
  7. the omega man

    the omega man so, it goes

    Apr 10, 2003
    NO!!! YOU FUCKIN PUSSY! You show up for mine a fuck up my perfect record but then let this fuck get away easy? Fuck that shit, give Coup an extension, how am I suppose to do my P4P this week?

    CK, good story, good why to twist it up. Your rhyming is horrible in places, I don't know what Fairy's talking about.

    "See I’m an image maker a lower class general
    I’m tired from this small fry shit I want to go terminal"

    I don't care what you say...on a rap board general and terminal do not rhyme

    Same thing here

    "The car barrel rolls down the street as her body carousels
    She gets thrown to the passenger’s side because of no seatbelt"

    This weak rhymes really mess up the flow.

    But other than that you have great imaginative verse and well thought out story. Good job.
  8. IAmBenT

    IAmBenT Eat a dick, faggot

    Mar 16, 2011

    So I guess you ARE LSD?? fascinating. I like the imagery and descriptiveness of this verse though and how you turn a phrase is very intelligent and unique. A shame no Coup, he always drops Gold
  9. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

    Apr 11, 2004
    Coup...you realize this is your 4th no show......smh
  10. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

    Apr 12, 2000
    coup get's a ban?
  11. TheInkwell

    TheInkwell New Member

    May 6, 2011

    nice verse though, CK.. its a shame coup no showed
  12. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

    Feb 25, 2008
    CK wins by no show
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