Week 4 RBL "First Blood" Event Card/Rankings/Lounge

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  1. Mrjdm998

    Mrjdm998 New Member

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    Your complaint is I set up my lines? Jesus christ shut the fuck up whining, learn to format and improve your writing instead of insulting everybody elses work.
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  2. Mista FREEZE 2001

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    *FREEZE talking to LP*

    It's not that U hav bad bars.. Its that U don't have a pattern at all some times... I actually like your verses but they can get hard to follow... That is actually what makes NETceeing BAD when u are trying 2 be a real MC...

    Here is why..

    In a real live battle U actually get to shave syllables and distort vowel sounds in a way that makes bars fit ..... for example...

    Somebody that he got to know is better than him/
    But he's feeling himself becuase he got more chedder than him/
    But let me tell U something u may have more cash than ME/
    But U don't have the skills 2 eat a niggaz ass like me/

    Now saying that in a battle sounds BRUTAL.... Typing that as a TEXT.... LMAO... It has no punches... Simple foramt and BOY ARE U LEAVING YOUR SELF OPEN FOR PUNCHLINES SAYING U EAT A NIGGAZ ASS...

    See now I battle a Kid named KAL EL before and used a pattern like this...

    Crazy off the top cause my FLOWS INSANE/
    Like oral Sex 2 a Cerebellum these rhymes "BLOW YOUR BRAIN"/
    Dyslexic barber my verse "Goes against the GRAIN"/
    Your Girl cause me "SUPERMAN" when i fly in here "LOIS LANE"...

    Okay now READING that verse U can see a lot of my punchlines and jokes but I COULD NOT SPIT THAT IN A LIVE BATTLE BECAUSE HALF THE CROWD WOULD MISS IT.... Plus in a battle I would have 2 shave syllables to spit it...

    like...

    FLOWS INSANE... My rhymes blow your brain...
    Your Girl calls me "SUPERMAN" when I'm in her "LOIS LANE"

    Now that would sound better in a live battle and the punchline would SOUND NICE but on here it looks BAD!

    The way U structure your verses might sound great live but reading them just leaves people flat. When people say U need to work on your structure that is what they mean.... Let me check your verse.... I'll be right back....
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  3. Mista FREEZE 2001

    Mista FREEZE 2001 Member

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    Actually i just read you and nibos break down and U actually proved my point by posting that TWISTA verse...

    See reading that verse it really wasn't that Hot but when U hear it man it sounds waaaaayyyyyy different...

    U have to try and find a way 2 balance what U would spit and how U can get it to look on a POST....

    U don't need 2 change your style... Just find a way 2 make it more pleasing 2 the reader....

    Feel the FREEZE!!!
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  4. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    i'm feeling freeze, mrj can shut the fuck up, because ur horrible


    so if freeze is merely saying that my bar's don't look pretty, up to formula standard.. that's coo, the flow is easy as fuck to find, i write my bars how i'd say them obviously, w/out to much syllable altering, bc it is text.

    but if that's all that's holding me back, then it isn't me that's lacking in skill, it's the retarded ass readers and voters, that's lacking in skill.

    freeze agree's that, the shit may sound great on audio, but written, it doesn't look "pretty enough"

    i see freeze making the same mistakes as me

    u know what i say tho, if fagot's can't learn how to read, then they the weak mc's

    my shit is blazing regardless so fuck it

    my home boy rap name is kal el aka sawchosiz btw..
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  5. Silentt L

    Silentt L Registered Deity

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    1 good person in this whole league.
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  6. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    Vocaroo | Record and send voice emails

    listen to this, then tell me, it's hard to find the flow, i read my shit w/out any added swagger or anything, just up- and down.


    pretty flow worthy if u ask me
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  7. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    silent L stop riding that one dick.. it's disgusting
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  8. Silentt L

    Silentt L Registered Deity

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    riding? i've beat him twice already. i wouldn't ride anybody. you just fucking suck.
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  9. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    your the most pathetic fagot on here, your whole signature really exposes a lot about u

    go fuck a Nephilim, you and a small handfull of internet geeks think i suck, bc in actuallity im fucking awesome.. that's just ur way, of tryna reverse the influence of the conversation crack head
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  10. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    Thanks for the compliment, magus
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  11. Mrjdm998

    Mrjdm998 New Member

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    Bodied.
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  12. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    im not tryna insult u or MK's verses. they are what they are, but my complaint is
    you had 30 bars.. most punches took 4 bars to get one punch acrossed do the math

    you didnt even have 15 punches ur whole verse

    MK on the other hand, probably had 18 solid punches each bar was formed to have a stinger on it

    my bars, had multiple punches, i had about 25 solid punched give or take a few.

    im not saying i deserve to win this match, im just saying, the structure bull shit, just isn't resonating with me that's all

    freeze made the most sense.. but if that's the case, the flaw there is, if we acknowledge that, and people know im abstract writer, then why they keep reading my bars like lil idiots?

    im not bout to downgrade my skill level just to win some votes

    rappin antics fagots act with
    be the same reason rappin fagots actions can't quit

    yawl want me to write something like

    these rapping antics these fagots act with
    are the reason the rappin fagots actions cant quit

    but idk, i dont know how to re-structure the bars
    to make them prettier to the reader. so if that's why i suck

    then i'd rather suck and have more talent then any of u, then to have appropriate bar structure and hurt my flow..
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  13. smittyrhythm

    smittyrhythm you love 2 hate me

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    Nope... he signed-out 3 weeks ago :funny:
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  14. Silentt L

    Silentt L Registered Deity

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    what does my signature expose? that i can go 8 years without changing my internet message board signature?

    and im probably the most accomplished person here...in any sense.
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  15. Silentt L

    Silentt L Registered Deity

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    ever considered maybe you just suck?


    i've never had these conversation you kids have to justify your lack of talent.

    you're just not any good.
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  16. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    i hear the claim.. but i w/ all the mental capacity that i have, can't grasp what ur talking about...you say i suck all cleverly, i say i do not suck, this is so redundant, you all are trash, anyone who opposes the priest, we can battle, you'll get thrashed, i'll take some jabs, and we can keep it pushin, other then that, mrjdm, is trash, ur trash

    allen knight is trash, and idgaf what anyone tries to say otherwise, your riding my dick so hard anyways, it's getting uncomfortable, get the fuck from under me!
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  17. Silentt L

    Silentt L Registered Deity

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    allen knight? wtf. i haven't read any of your nonsense. just list of names, and it sucked, so i posted accordingly.
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  18. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    lmao, so your saying im trash bc the garbage man said it first

    mean while with thick encrustation called a skull must be getting in the way of
    being able to make a good choice
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  19. Silentt L

    Silentt L Registered Deity

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    .....
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  20. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    that's a good choice...
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