[Week 39][Contender] 3. Gramur(2-2) vs 4. T.a.C(18-2)

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  1. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    VERSES DUE THURSDAY @ 11:59 PST
    Line Limit: Minimum 8 lines, Maximum 40 (If opponent agrees, you may go over the line limit)
    NO BITING OR RECYCLING
    Biting/Recycling is the equivalent of a no show
    Extensions must be requested in your battle thread before the Thursday evening deadline. It is the opponents choice whether to allow the extension or not. Failure to accept/deny the request prior to the first vote being cast will result in the extension being allowed.
    If granted, the extension overrides the deadline for BOTH battlers
    A No Show results in a loss and automatic sign out
    If your opponent fails to show, you must still post at least 4 lines and 3 voting links for your victory.
    A title wont change hands by no show
    COMPETITORS MAY ONLY POST THREE TIMES IN THEIR MATCH. A CHECK IN, THEIR VERSE, AND THEIR LINKS. EXCESSIVE POSTING WILL RESULT IN A LOSS OF VOTES.
    COMPETITORS MAY ONLY POST ONCE IN AN OPPONENTS BATTLE. A VOTE. ANYTHING UNNECCESARY WILL RESULT IN A LOSS OF VOTES. IF YOU HAVE SOMETHING TO SAY, EITHER TAKE IT TO THE LOUNGE OR PM THE PERSON.
    First battler to post is allowed to edit their verse up until the second battler posts theirs. Once the second battler posts, they are allowed to edit their verse until the first vote is casted.
    The Second battler to post cannot post more lines than the first. Doing so will result in DQ.
    Disruptive members will be banned from the league will and have their posts moved to the garbage bin thread.
    UNDER NO CIRCUMSTANCES CAN A NON-MOD MAKE A THREAD IN THE LEAGUE. YOU WILL BE BANNED FROM THE SITE FOR A WEEK. THIS IS YOUR WARNING!!!!!

    VOTING RULES:
    VOTES ARE DUE SUNDAY NIGHT @ 8:59 PST
    You must vote on at least 5 matches(provided there are 5 matches to vote on, if no vote on whichever battles are open) and post the links in your thread. For every link not posted you will lose a vote.
    Votes MUST be at least two lines per verse, and must have a vote casted. There is no voting for ties.
    Voting is open past the deadline in the case that I’m late starting the new week.
    Voting is open to current participants, RBL mods, and former champs. Former champs must vote on at least three matches to have their vote counted, and must adhere to the same voting rules.


    Any changes must be agreed upon by both participants and a forum mod.

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  2. Gramur

    Gramur Yung Troy

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    check, 16

    [Week 39][Champ] C. SonnyDaze(10-1) vs 2. RicoSuave(4-3)
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  3. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    good luck, bro.
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  4. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    slight ext? ill need a few hours, if that. i just want to be safe.
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  5. Gramur

    Gramur Yung Troy

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    http://board.rapmusic.com/rapmusic-...2-champ-c-t-c-18-1-vs-2-sonny-daze-3-1-a.html

    ^I'm on fire. Nowadays my scripts explicit and heated
    my verses Rated ar,Son...so I'm cremating all ya rhymes like HE did
    you've lost your steam bitch. Now everything you drop sucks
    to add, you've never really been a vet and still you're washed up
    so fuck your narrations. You're stressin' from these ill facts
    But they'll call you a sick NairRaider when they see you losing hair from this match
    I'll beat ya nerdy ass! Leave you with a bruising for real
    So the dentist is where they'll Syntac when I loosen his grill
    he lacks true skill, and brags as if he's perfect?
    Yo, his rhymes are cheap shots..but shit, you'll always see me overtax verses
    he's so virgin. I'm a baller so women say I'm a treasure
    I fuck bitches in Palm Springs. He sprangs his Palm from self pleasure
    T.a.C's a Jester. We're laughing at him if the crowd's ever amped
    he's more noted for Freeposting than he'll EVER be as a champ!
    Damn you're scared. I'll give you all the time you need to take a loss
    ^Go find a SafeHouse, I'll still get an easy kill like I'm Tobin Frost
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  6. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    I’m the psycho with an icepick who wont go brokeback
    The gore of this beating will be so bad…
    …Luka Magnotta’s gonna watch with a notepad
    I police this league, I taught em all the rules
    Been beating this King for years…
    ...After this L, somebody go check the bottom of his pool
    I hate voted you vs Sonny, smilin’ with a cheesy grin
    Knowing I’d face the loser…
    …I wanted to start my comeback with an easy win
    I kicked it with my pop’s Sunday
    … I say it for braggin rights
    Cuz I can see my dad whenever I like…
    …His wanted no part in this faggot’s life
    No respect for you, not even in the slight, dunn
    But in honor of Fathers Day, I’ma call your dad a bitch…
    …Like father, like son
    No street cred, this pussy gets no re-spect
    How you broke with the name of Grams?...
    …This faggot even bounced a G-check
    Your lines aint clever, that’s where the shit ends
    Only making a dope play on Words when playing Words with Friends
    The mags opinion on this match defines doubt
    I cant talk, were equal in losses…
    …Wait, you reset your record 2 weeks after I signed out?
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  7. Sneez

    Sneez Danish Curling

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    hmm
    ill have 2 re-read and edit my vote in later

    close battle
    leaning toward _____


    gotta go with gramur

    the washed up/vet
    and virgin lines killed me :funny:
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  8. the marshall

    the marshall New Member

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    ^I'm on fire. Nowadays my scripts explicit and heated
    my verses Rated ar,Son...so I'm cremating all ya rhymes like HE did
    I'll beat ya nerdy ass! Leave you with a bruising for real
    So the dentist is where they'll Syntac when I loosen his grill
    he lacks true skill, and brags as if he's perfect?
    Yo, his rhymes are cheap shots..but shit, you'll always see me overtax verses

    vs

    I hate voted you vs Sonny, smilin’ with a cheesy grin
    Knowing I’d face the loser…
    …I wanted to start my comeback with an easy win

    Im leaning a little toward Gramur. Idk, in my opinion his punches were just better

    v/Gram
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  9. DarkQuest

    DarkQuest smooth as ravens claws

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    I didn't think T.a.c was bad by all means compared to the skill level of the rest of the league, but Gramur definitely took this battle by a few harder hitting lines. Both really lost in consistency, alot of filler between them.



    Tac took the right approach, just didn't have enough ammo or enough editing.
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  10. SonnyDaze

    SonnyDaze 7 train heavyweight

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    I don't know how others felt, but this battle was VERY close to me.

    Gramur- I liked your verse a lot up until the overtax line... the last 3 couplets just didn't have the kick the first 5 punches did... My only other gripe was word choice in a few spots (using narratives then narrator after, Syntac not being a real word, sprangs his Palms), a little bit picky, but it woulda enhanced your verse even more... all in all, good verse.

    T.a.C.- Your opener was really dope, maybe my favorite line of the battle... You almost pulled the Rodney King line off. What I didn't like about it was the "been beating this King for years" part and referring to Gramur as a king for part of the double meaning. Coulda been worded differently... The dad lines hurt your verse the most in my opinion. I liked the concept but you weren't creative enough in making them effective... The rest of your lines floated between average and barely above average... I liked your closer as a punch, but not as a closer. It should've been your opener.

    Vote: Gramur... Heavier punches, more creativity, more consistency.
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  11. RicoSuave

    RicoSuave New Member

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    Gramur, u had a good overall verse, a few hit and miss lines, but u made up for it in other parts, I've seen better from u and I thought u could have done better as well

    Tac, I enjoyed reading ur verse a lot better and u had better concepts all around, u also had a few hit and miss lines... the hate vote line was the line of the battle and made me laugh...

    My vote is based on whose verse I enjoyed more, it was a very close battle but I have to give it to TAC...
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  12. Tacky Jones

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