[Week 38][Contender] 3. Brown Jesus(2-3) vs 4. RicoSuave(3-3)

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  1. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    VERSES DUE THURSDAY @ 11:59 PST
    Line Limit: Minimum 8 lines, Maximum 40 (If opponent agrees, you may go over the line limit)
    NO BITING OR RECYCLING
    Biting/Recycling is the equivalent of a no show
    Extensions must be requested in your battle thread before the Thursday evening deadline. It is the opponents choice whether to allow the extension or not. Failure to accept/deny the request prior to the first vote being cast will result in the extension being allowed.
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    A No Show results in a loss and automatic sign out
    If your opponent fails to show, you must still post at least 4 lines and 3 voting links for your victory.
    A title wont change hands by no show
    COMPETITORS MAY ONLY POST THREE TIMES IN THEIR MATCH. A CHECK IN, THEIR VERSE, AND THEIR LINKS. EXCESSIVE POSTING WILL RESULT IN A LOSS OF VOTES.
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    Disruptive members will be banned from the league will and have their posts moved to the garbage bin thread.
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  2. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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  3. RicoSuave

    RicoSuave New Member

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    Let's go... I want a good clean, on time battle. Ill put forth more effot that I did last week... 16?
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  4. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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    This bitch know I got heat, hit him with leas Pete, more Pistol,
    So if you wanna address me Rico, I got plenty of shells like Linux distro's
    That was wack,
    Rico a bitch, though; trying to take a technical victory,
    You're a target, my bars are bullets,
    So I put em' in the Mag and blast him with better tactics and weaponry,
    How this faggot step to me? his punches kool-aid.. sugar sweet,
    Your whine has gotten so old and that shit still ain't good to me,
    And you ain't good as me, so drop the act,
    Rico need protection... something like a hockey mask,
    Stop it, man;
    Cus I'll put the burners on your back and call you Rocketman,
    But I got to drop it, fam; y'all too young for the reference,
    I'll say Rico is... don't even have to finish the sentence,
    I'm a trainer, I can tell your at your limit,
    You're just a step up from breathlesss,
    While I'm just over here stretchin, not even warmed up,
    I'm Wilt Chamberlain with the bars, you ain't even scored once,
    You're a perpetual virgin, son; but I'll say it once, alright?
    Rico pimpin! Might miss this Pun like Fat Joe, try as he might,,
    He peddles pussy... but only when riding a bike,
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  5. RicoSuave

    RicoSuave New Member

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    Last week you got to battle your idol, how does it feel man?
    You got beat by a wanabe Eminem, but got no autograph how does it feel Stan?
    Ricosuave bout to loose? “Who Sayin” (Husain) it? Pick one, Sadam, Obama
    Ill address you when you give me ur address and cause ur whole family Trauma
    I got Jamaican killas that don't give a fuck about what u sayin... (Usain)
    Ill have this Chicano floating down the Rio Grande while his body Decayin
    The chances of you beating me 0% sadly
    Paquio has a better chance of losing again to Bradley
    I spit straight fire off the top of my head so you can call me the Ghostrider
    And if u ask me nicely... Your battle with gramur next week, Ill be ur Ghostwriter
    In real life you are sonny daze #1 fan, you admire Son
    I battle in real life, this blog shit is just “PRACTICE!”... Iverson
    Your a Wet Back! Please excuse my Freedom of Speach
    Talk about shells, Ill turn ur neighborhood into Palm Beach
    Linux distro's??? The only shells you've ever seen were covered in Sauce
    What people dont know is that your a fat lazy bastard, Mexican version of Rick Ross
    You actually thought you'd win, that's comedy, from now on ill call you Mr Bean... ER
    I took It back to when I was a teen and Just Customized 2 L's For you Bean (L.L.Bean)
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  6. SonnyDaze

    SonnyDaze 7 train heavyweight

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    Brown Jesus

    This bitch know I got heat, hit him with leas Pete, more Pistol,
    So if you wanna address me Rico, I got plenty of shells like Linux distro's
    -Ha, had to look the reference up, not a bad start.

    That was wack,
    Rico a bitch, though; trying to take a technical victory,
    You're a target, my bars are bullets,
    So I put em' in the Mag and blast him with better tactics and weaponry,
    -*Back to back gun bars by Brown Jesus??? Haha, nice.

    How this faggot step to me? his punches kool-aid.. sugar sweet,
    Your whine has gotten so old and that shit still ain't good to me,
    -the punch was good but the wording right before it coulda been enhanced.

    And you ain't good as me, so drop the act,
    Rico need protection... something like a hockey mask,
    -Meh, needed more from the set up

    Stop it, man;
    Cus I'll put the burners on your back and call you Rocketman,
    But I got to drop it, fam; y'all too young for the reference,
    I'll say Rico is... don't even have to finish the sentence,
    -Woulda preferred the first line to be a full sentence. The Rocketman line was cool. Felt like you got a little lazy with the next two lines.

    I'm a trainer, I can tell your at your limit,
    You're just a step up from breathlesss,
    While I'm just over here stretchin, not even warmed up,
    I'm Wilt Chamberlain with the bars, you ain't even scored once,
    -First two lines: ehhh... Next two lines: much better

    You're a perpetual virgin, son; but I'll say it once, alright?
    Rico pimpin! Might miss this Pun like Fat Joe, try as he might,,
    He peddles pussy... but only when riding a bike,
    -*Dope. Probably my favorite lines

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    Rico Suave

    Last week you got to battle your idol, how does it feel man?
    You got beat by a wanabe Eminem, but got no autograph how does it feel Stan?
    -Ha, okay. The punches felt kinda lazy though.

    Ricosuave bout to loose? “Who Sayin” (Husain) it? Pick one, Sadam, Obama
    Ill address you when you give me ur address and cause ur whole family Trauma
    -Okay wordplay. The punch coulda been better.

    I got Jamaican killas that don't give a fuck about what u sayin... (Usain)
    Ill have this Chicano floating down the Rio Grande while his body Decayin
    -Not sure how I feel about this type of wordplay again. The punch was better though.

    The chances of you beating me 0% sadly
    Paquio has a better chance of losing again to Bradley
    -*Nice, probably your best line of the battle.

    I spit straight fire off the top of my head so you can call me the Ghostrider
    And if u ask me nicely... Your battle with gramur next week, Ill be ur Ghostwriter
    -Same as your opener, the punches were kinda lazy here.

    In real life you are sonny daze #1 fan, you admire Son
    I battle in real life, this blog shit is just “PRACTICE!”... Iverson
    -Ha, decent.

    Your a Wet Back! Please excuse my Freedom of Speach
    Talk about shells, Ill turn ur neighborhood into Palm Beach
    -Meh, too generic.

    Linux distro's??? The only shells you've ever seen were covered in Sauce
    What people dont know is that your a fat lazy bastard, Mexican version of Rick Ross
    -I think you assumed the linux distro reference was about guns when it wasn’t. Wasn’t feeling the punch.

    You actually thought you'd win, that's comedy, from now on ill call you Mr Bean... ER
    I took It back to when I was a teen and Just Customized 2 L's For you Bean (L.L.Bean)
    -The wordplay here was cool. The only problem is that you literally rhymed “Bean” with “Bean” for your punches. Gotta put more effort in there.

    Rico had some humorous lines like usual; punches were all over the place though. Brown Jesus edged on quotables 2-1, but he wasn’t as technically sound as he’s been in the past. I’ve seen better from both of you but I think there was a clear winner here.

    Vote: Brown Jesus… more consistent and just a better overall effort.
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  7. Gramur

    Gramur Yung Troy

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    Lemme break this down...

    BJ
    This bitch know I got heat, hit him with leas Pete, more Pistol,
    So if you wanna address me Rico, I got plenty of shells like Linux distro's

    ^wasn't feeling how you used the concept. I don't think it was the best idea to use Shells when referring to Linux Distros, I think you coulda found something better to use as a simile

    That was wack,
    Rico a bitch, though; trying to take a technical victory,
    You're a target, my bars are bullets,
    So I put em' in the Mag and blast him with better tactics and weaponry,

    ^this was ok. I just didn't like the fact that you had to rhyme victory and weaponry

    How this faggot step to me? his punches kool-aid.. sugar sweet,
    Your whine has gotten so old and that shit still ain't good to me,

    ^setup is good. Punch was not worded well.

    And you ain't good as me, so drop the act,
    Rico need protection... something like a hockey mask,
    Stop it, man;
    Cus I'll put the burners on your back and call you Rocketman,

    ^this was aite. I like the "burners on your back" reference. Wording was ok

    But I got to drop it, fam; y'all too young for the reference,
    I'll say Rico is... don't even have to finish the sentence,
    I'm a trainer, I can tell your at your limit,

    ^I see where you were going but not a very hard hitting punch

    You're just a step up from breathlesss,
    While I'm just over here stretchin, not even warmed up,
    I'm Wilt Chamberlain with the bars, you ain't even scored once,

    ^you coulda did more with this, it's like an open quote

    You're a perpetual virgin, son; but I'll say it once, alright?
    Rico pimpin! Might miss this Pun like Fat Joe, try as he might,,
    He peddles pussy... but only when riding a bike,

    I lol'd....

    Rico

    Last week you got to battle your idol, how does it feel man?
    You got beat by a wanabe Eminem, but got no autograph how does it feel Stan?

    ^this was coo

    Ricosuave bout to loose? “Who Sayin” (Husain) it? Pick one, Sadam, Obama
    Ill address you when you give me ur address and cause ur whole family Trauma

    ^not the best punch, wordplay was ok

    I got Jamaican killas that don't give a fuck about what u sayin... (Usain)
    Ill have this Chicano floating down the Rio Grande while his body Decayin

    ^this was ok...a little forced but ok

    The chances of you beating me 0% sadly
    Paquio has a better chance of losing again to Bradley

    ^too simple

    I spit straight fire off the top of my head so you can call me the Ghostrider
    And if u ask me nicely... Your battle with gramur next week, Ill be ur Ghostwriter

    ^so you saying Ima lose? lol this was aite

    In real life you are sonny daze #1 fan, you admire Son
    I battle in real life, this blog shit is just “PRACTICE!”... Iverson

    simple...not very effective but not terrible

    Your a Wet Back! Please excuse my Freedom of Speach
    Talk about shells, Ill turn ur neighborhood into Palm Beach

    ^this was ok

    Linux distro's??? The only shells you've ever seen were covered in Sauce
    What people dont know is that your a fat lazy bastard, Mexican version of Rick Ross

    ^I lol'd at the punch...setup was weak

    You actually thought you'd win, that's comedy, from now on ill call you Mr Bean... ER
    I took It back to when I was a teen and Just Customized 2 L's For you Bean (L.L.Bean)

    weak closer

    Idk, I got

    Rico

    edging this by a slight margin
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