[Week 38] [Championship] C. Redeemed(4-0) vs 2. Nique...(3-0)

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  1. T.a.C

    T.a.C Guest



    WEEK 38



    VERSUS DUE: Every Friday @ 11:59 PM PST
    LINE LIMIT: Minimum of 16 lines, Maximum of 64
    ** NO RECYCLING, NO EXCEPTIONS **
    •Recycling is the equivalent to that of a no-show and will be treated as such, thus resulting in a loss in favor of the participant whom chose to recycle and a win in favor of his/her opponent
    •Extensions may only be granted if a moderator has given consent prior to a verse being posted in the match OR your opponent gives his consent
    •If granted, the extension will override deadline for both participants extending it for no more than 24 hours
    •CHECK-INS are encouraged, but not required
    •Verses MUST incorporate AT LEAST 1 of the provided topics or pictures
    •A failure to show will result in a loss and a sign out by default
    •If your opponent fails to show, you MUST STILL post AT LEAST 5 lines (4-15) AND 3 voting links in order to claim victory
    •A Championship Title WILL NOT be decided by way of no-show!!!
    •If an opponent fails to show in a Championship match, the remaining participant will be ranked as the number 1 seed, but will not be considered a Champion until a win by vote
    •Upon your second no show, you will be suspended for two weeks of competition. A third no show will result in a three week suspension and a fourth will result in a suspension for the remainder of the season. There is no suspension for first time no showers.
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    • A verse can be edited if and only if it is the first verse to be posted and the other verse has yet to be posted or it is the second verse posted and a vote has yet to be received.
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  2. UneekTestimony

    UneekTestimony New Member

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  3. Redeemed

    Redeemed MY PRESIDENT IS 1/2 BLACK

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    N.........God bless and good luck


    votes...... here
    prolly around this area


    and .........def here...
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  4. Redeemed

    Redeemed MY PRESIDENT IS 1/2 BLACK

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    yo this beeez a no shigiddy show verse!
    why why why i dont know... smurse
    or maybe smurf and smirt...
    what about kirt and kirk
    why they call me a jerk
    all i do is work work work...
    yeah i said work...
    merry christmas everyone... God loves you so much
    He gave us his Son to so we can use as a crutch

    no show verse.. cause i dedicated my time to God
    and not the rstl...
    sorry i cant be a christian fraude
    gotta be the real deal..

    k
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  5. UneekTestimony

    UneekTestimony New Member

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    Um, Redeemed I'm religious and I had time to write a verse. Maybe you shouldn't have waited until the last minute man, lol.



    Another day controlling the block..
    It's cold - absorbing the shock while folding my box..
    I'm loading my cart. The wind blows and violently cries..
    Wiping my eyes I never leave my items behind..
    Vibrant, alive - I set off roaming the streets..
    Searching for empty pathways, so no one competes..
    And no cops patrolling with ease; I pull out my marker..
    Re-tracing my letters in print, in hopes it'll get darker..
    I've chosen to harbor my misfortune and past..
    I find a half-empty coffee cup, while sorting through trash..
    Meal portions I grab even when the stench is apparent..
    Rotten molded bread with turkey - a menacing sandwich..
    I finish it famished, then I pour out the coffee..
    Tissues to clean up the moisture, I'm deplorable, sloppy..
    Kleenex - dispose of it properly, I sit on the edge..
    .. of the street, I'm in the way - I re-position instead..
    .. with my feet; The sidewalks are congested, insane..
    A perfect spot for breathless exchange, while begging for change..
    I spend hours invested, the same as people with jobs..
    I work long days and evenings - believing in God..
    .. for the best, unseemly odd to those who are watching..
    But content thrives when there is no other option..
    Hoping I profit - some say no, giving a reason..
    And others show tremendous love; depends on the season..
    Almost finished, it's freezing; Rush hour, cars loathing the havoc..
    While the cold temperature violates the holes in my jacket..
    My sole's frozen and its patches are falling apart..
    My old shoes hide the bug bites, appalled at the scars..
    The day's gone and it's dark in the middle of winter..
    I pack up and head to the kitchen for dinner..

    Around miserable mourners..
    For my well-being they say - the church sits on the corner.
    In attendance, my hunger exceeds the pots and peers..
    Where chicken broth is served by fierce volunteers..
    The mob is cleared, I'm given a hefty amount..
    I finish it first, waiting for seconds, ready to pounce..
    "Aye Eddy, it counts!" - A volunteer trying my nerves..
    I complain, despising his words, while eyeing my third..
    .. portion, but I'm tired I turn fulfilled, this menu..
    Was great, I use the restroom and steal some tissue..
    .. for late nights when mother nature's hurried and cold..
    And the grass to wipe my ass is buried in snow..
    I hurry and go to find me some shelter..
    Thinking about my cardboard being light as a feather..
    Not designed for this weather, but I'm used to the burden..
    My home for the night is useless for certain..
    I'm moving with purpose looking for what's vacant tonight..
    Being homeless is just another day in the life..

    A day in the life of a homeless person..
    -Nique​
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  6. MordridDeschain

    MordridDeschain New Member

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    yo red.. I hope u get an ext and drop tonight.. I aint gonna vote on this otherwise.. I hate to see Niq's verse get wasted..
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  7. Got Life?

    Got Life? Resident Megalomaniac

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    he didn't post 16 lines, so as it stands it would fall as a no-show and could not be voted on, and Nique would be the #1 contender and not win the title this week.
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  8. oNeiRiC

    oNeiRiC Souled In

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    I thought this was really cool. Nice verse. Top Quality. My only complaint was here:

    of the street, I'm in the way - I re-position instead..
    .. with my feet; The sidewalks are congested, insane..
    A perfect spot for breathless exchange, while begging for change..
    I spend hours invested, the same as people with jobs..
    I work long days and evenings - believing in God..
    .. for the best, unseemly odd to those who are watching..
    But content thrives when there is no other option..
    Hoping I profit - some say no, giving a reason..
    And others show tremendous love; depends on the season..

    I know it was a practical part of the story, but I would have liked something else in it, since the story line was in its transition stage.
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