[Week 36][Contender] 3. Beyond...(1-0) vs 4. Gramur(1-0)

Discussion in 'Rapmusic.com Battle League' started by Tacky Jones, May 28, 2012.

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  1. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    VERSES DUE THURSDAY @ 11:59 PST
    Line Limit: Minimum 8 lines, Maximum 40 (If opponent agrees, you may go over the line limit)
    NO BITING OR RECYCLING
    Biting/Recycling is the equivalent of a no show
    Extensions must be requested in your battle thread before the Thursday evening deadline. It is the opponents choice whether to allow the extension or not. Failure to accept/deny the request prior to the first vote being cast will result in the extension being allowed.
    If granted, the extension overrides the deadline for BOTH battlers
    A No Show results in a loss and automatic sign out
    If your opponent fails to show, you must still post at least 4 lines and 3 voting links for your victory.
    A title wont change hands by no show
    COMPETITORS MAY ONLY POST THREE TIMES IN THEIR MATCH. A CHECK IN, THEIR VERSE, AND THEIR LINKS. EXCESSIVE POSTING WILL RESULT IN A LOSS OF VOTES.
    COMPETITORS MAY ONLY POST ONCE IN AN OPPONENTS BATTLE. A VOTE. ANYTHING UNNECCESARY WILL RESULT IN A LOSS OF VOTES. IF YOU HAVE SOMETHING TO SAY, EITHER TAKE IT TO THE LOUNGE OR PM THE PERSON.
    First battler to post is allowed to edit their verse up until the second battler posts theirs. Once the second battler posts, they are allowed to edit their verse until the first vote is casted.
    The Second battler to post cannot post more lines than the first. Doing so will result in DQ.
    Disruptive members will be banned from the league will and have their posts moved to the garbage bin thread.
    UNDER NO CIRCUMSTANCES CAN A NON-MOD MAKE A THREAD IN THE LEAGUE. YOU WILL BE BANNED FROM THE SITE FOR A WEEK. THIS IS YOUR WARNING!!!!!

    VOTING RULES:
    VOTES ARE DUE SUNDAY NIGHT @ 8:59 PST
    You must vote on at least 5 matches(provided there are 5 matches to vote on, if no vote on whichever battles are open) and post the links in your thread. For every link not posted you will lose a vote.
    Votes MUST be at least two lines per verse, and must have a vote casted. There is no voting for ties.
    Voting is open past the deadline in the case that I’m late starting the new week.
    Voting is open to current participants, RBL mods, and former champs. Former champs must vote on at least three matches to have their vote counted, and must adhere to the same voting rules.


    Any changes must be agreed upon by both participants and a forum mod.

    Any suggestions or questions feel free to ask me
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  2. Gramur

    Gramur Yung Troy

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    In it.....24
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  3. Beyond..

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    Good luck.
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  4. Gramur

    Gramur Yung Troy

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    He's a faggot who's bitten plenty of greats
    so it aint Cali when I say there's many rappers in the Bey
    there's no wit in his plays, this 'tard is searching for rhymes
    And he's got a learning curve Sammy Sosa couldn't hit in his prime
    so he's not bringing mind thrills to beat my clever punchlines
    he's got dem mime skills...so clearly he could never touch mines
    I'm gliding Lightyears ahead of this peon
    so if yah counting on a loss it's going to infinity and Beyond
    he's got DNA of a chump who lacks the steam
    needing cloth and machines to ever say he manufactures dope genes
    this garbage man is sad, frontin' like his writing is perfect
    ^he gathers all the trash..honest, he recycles his verses!!
    so worthless to the league but thinks he's an idol...
    his arrival was less anticipated than Calibre winning a title
    he's striving to win, he'd die to beat me...
    but unless this guy's a hotboy..the voters won't be hype for B.G.
    this dick puller is nothin' nice, he's a faggot at life
    call him a plumber..the way he always grabbin' at Pipes
    I hope he takes my advice, enough with sellin' dem dreams
    boring us with a week post like RBL magazines
    so yah see he's nothing to argue about
    I mean he don't even deserve criticism Beyond a 'Shadow of a doubt'
    brought my clout upon the league, there's no need to run ya mouth
    I'll shut you out, I'm like the Rev cuz they'll say Gramur Run's House
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  5. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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    there's no wit in his plays, this 'tard is searching for rhymes
    And he's got a learning curve Sammy Sosa couldn't hit in his prime

    This could've been nice, but the wording was weird.

    I'm gliding Lightyears ahead of this peon
    so if yah counting on a loss it's going to infinity and Beyond

    Wording again.

    so worthless to the league but thinks he's an idol...
    his arrival was less anticipated than Calibre winning a title

    lol... I do this all the time, but it really should be directed at your opponent more.

    I hope he takes my advice, enough with sellin' dem dreams
    boring us with a week post like RBL magazines

    :cry: Really, I liked it, but again the wording.

    The rest was ok, some was kinda lame; touch mines comes to mind. I've tried a similar structure as your closer with one of my lines, I felt the same with the end result. The middle line of a three bar can make or break the line flow-wise; If it'd long, it makes the setup seem stretched. The closer could've been nice I think. I'll give you a more general breakdown in the Mag.
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  6. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    Gram wins by no show. loses for no votes.
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