[Week 35][Contender] 3. Brown Jesus(1-1) vs 4. RicoSuave(2-1)

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  1. Tacky Jones

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    VERSES DUE THURSDAY @ 11:59 PST
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  2. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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  3. RicoSuave

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    8?????? Lol!!!!! Who the fuck u think u battling?! "Breathless"? I'll drop 24 on ur bitch ass!
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  4. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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    Verse of the Week, prove me wrong Sonny.

    This fool think he hot, son, I kid you not,
    I had to lower my standards to give you props,
    So don't think a spot in the Mag makes you dope,
    Breathless made the Mag... twice... I'm saying, bro,
    Stash the ego, I'll trash ya Rico and bash this geek,
    Why are you surprised I think you suck?
    I been predicting you to lose the last few weeks,
    Don't tell me about the people ya beat,
    Cus they lost to a faggot who's name means he's Sweet,
    I'm a master, see... when I swing I hit,
    You're a tranny... when you swing... you Miss,
    But you can clown the Mag, we all know it's rushed and sloppy,
    But in this run-in, you're Santorum for Pres and I'm fuckin' Rocky,

    pause...

    This was something new, shit had me troubled, dude,
    Somehow Rico made it so Son rose AND set in the W
    Sweet don't want my wordplay, bitch shoulda shut his mouth,
    He has two no show wins and last week Sonny shoulda shut him out,
    I couldn't even quote it, the flow was horrible, Sweet,
    Know what else I'm noticing?
    It was only faggot ass Calibre who voted for Sweet,
    Trying to fuck with the rankings or add to his lackeys,
    Cus you're trying to be on ::Beast::-mode and he finds it attractive,

    Fuck your 24, go 40 tbh
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  5. RicoSuave

    RicoSuave New Member

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    Ill need an ext
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  6. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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  7. RicoSuave

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    In this battle, Im not even going to talk about how ill make the gun clap,
    If I said I was worried, Id be lying, Im more concerned about when D.Rose guna come back
    Fuck the resurrection Of jesus, Every time I spit, I bring my nigga Pun back
    You can mesure my dick with 6 rulers, but you go as deep in a bitch as a thumb tac.
    You droped more lines in this battle then ur last 2 battles combined... What an Accomplishment!
    Im well known in my streets so Fuck you and ur Rap Mag, I dont need no Acknowledgment
    But If Jesus is brown, then im a Jewish member of the KKK, waiving a Confederate flag
    Id rather be called Sweet than to be called Blow Job any day you fag
    It fits you a lot better since you spend most of your time Choking On Sonny's Cock.
    If I ran up in ur hood u'd probably call the Cops... Or put both ur hands in the air like its 12'o Clock
    If you honestly thought you would beat me, you must be high... Meth
    While not working on ur mag, you probably draw Dick Picks all day long... Seth
    I don’t know why this dude came back... Let alone, how he got out of his tomb
    Ill make sure this time BJ is gone for good... Or at least until the next time until his bodys exhumed
    Since Im sweet, Its only right that with 16 lines I end this homos career
    Because the last time Jesus saw a Sunny Day, he made rainbows appear
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    So don't think a spot in the Mag makes you dope,
    Breathless made the Mag... twice... I'm saying, bro,
    I'm a master, see... when I swing I hit,
    You're a tranny... when you swing... you Miss,
    But you can clown the Mag, we all know it's rushed and sloppy,
    But in this run-in, you're Santorum for Pres and I'm fuckin' Rocky,


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    Fuck the resurrection Of jesus, Every time I spit, I bring my nigga Pun back
    You can mesure my dick with 6 rulers, but you go as deep in a bitch as a thumb tac.
    It fits you a lot better since you spend most of your time Choking On Sonny's Cock.
    If I ran up in ur hood u'd probably call the Cops... Or put both ur hands in the air like its 12'o Clock
    I don’t know why this dude came back... Let alone, how he got out of his tomb
    Ill make sure this time BJ is gone for good... Or at least until the next time until his bodys exhumed



    Close battle. Brown Jesus had Breathless, miss and Rocky. Miss isn't too fresh, but I quoted it since it was one of his more witty punch attempts. Breathless could of used a little more creativity. Rocky's just an old reference. As far as the non-quotes, I just felt they were a bit too statementish and not creative enough. Rico's 3 lines that I quoted were executed in a more traditional punch oriented sort of way. 12'o clock is not too fresh, similar to Brown's miss line. Exhumed just needed a little better wording with the double use of the word until and all. He had some statement lines too, but for the most part was just more creative, witty and clever here. I liked his standouts more than I liked Brown's and his non-quotes as well I'd say. His lines could use shortening, but other than that, he did his thing here and got it imo. If Brown can incorporate moe wit and creativity in his lines, he will be a lot harder to beat. Props to both.

    /v rico suave
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  9. RicoSuave

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  10. SonnyDaze

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    Brown Jesus

    This fool think he hot, son, I kid you not,
    I had to lower my standards to give you props,
    feeling the rhyme scheme

    So don't think a spot in the Mag makes you dope,
    Breathless made the Mag... twice... I'm saying, bro,
    haha

    Stash the ego, I'll trash ya Rico and bash this geek,
    Why are you surprised I think you suck?
    I been predicting you to lose the last few weeks,
    good rhyme schemes here again, solid punch

    Don't tell me about the people ya beat,
    Cus they lost to a faggot who's name means he's Sweet,
    meh, coulda been worded better

    I'm a master, see... when I swing I hit,
    You're a tranny... when you swing... you Miss,
    Ha, like the creativity, wording coulda been tweaked to improve the punch though

    But you can clown the Mag, we all know it's rushed and sloppy,
    But in this run-in, you're Santorum for Pres and I'm fuckin' Rocky,
    Had to look this one up but I'm digging it, probably your line of the battle

    pause...

    This was something new, shit had me troubled, dude,
    Somehow Rico made it so Son rose AND set in the W
    Sweet don't want my wordplay, bitch shoulda shut his mouth,
    He has two no show wins and last week Sonny shoulda shut him out,
    I couldn't even quote it, the flow was horrible, Sweet,
    Know what else I'm noticing?
    It was only faggot ass Calibre who voted for Sweet,
    Trying to fuck with the rankings or add to his lackeys,
    Cus you're trying to be on ::Beast::-mode and he finds it attractive,
    This was one big scheme so just gonna talk about it as a whole. I appreciate the attempt to switch your style up from the first half of your verse but I think 8 lines was a little too much to talk about our battle last week. The punches sounded good and everything flowed well but the content just didn't seem to hit as hard with several lines dedicated to uppin me and dissing Calibre versus mainly attacking Rico.

    Rico Suave

    In this battle, Im not even going to talk about how ill make the gun clap,
    If I said I was worried, Id be lying, Im more concerned about when D.Rose guna come back
    Not much of a diss but decent start

    Fuck the resurrection Of jesus, Every time I spit, I bring my nigga Pun back
    You can mesure my dick with 6 rulers, but you go as deep in a bitch as a thumb tac.
    Pause... ha just kidding. Digging the Pun reference, decent punch

    You droped more lines in this battle then ur last 2 battles combined... What an Accomplishment!
    Im well known in my streets so Fuck you and ur Rap Mag, I dont need no Acknowledgment
    Set up hit a little harder than the punch to be honest, but still decent.

    But If Jesus is brown, then im a Jewish member of the KKK, waiving a Confederate flag
    Id rather be called Sweet than to be called Blow Job any day you fag
    Ha, not bad. Punch coulda been worded a little better

    It fits you a lot better since you spend most of your time Choking On Sonny's Cock.
    If I ran up in ur hood u'd probably call the Cops... Or put both ur hands in the air like its 12'o Clock
    The 12 o'clock reference is a little played out but still one of your better lines

    If you honestly thought you would beat me, you must be high... Meth
    While not working on ur mag, you probably draw Dick Picks all day long... Seth
    Haha, this was creative but coulda been worded a little better

    I don’t know why this dude came back... Let alone, how he got out of his tomb
    Ill make sure this time BJ is gone for good... Or at least until the next time until his bodys exhumed
    Aside from the typo this was your line of the battle.

    Since Im sweet, Its only right that with 16 lines I end this homos career
    Because the last time Jesus saw a Sunny Day, he made rainbows appear
    Set up was good, punchline coulda been worded better

    Wow... this battle was one of the hardest to judge since I've been involved with the league. Brown Jesus had the edge in rhyme schemes, and with overall structure as his wording was better throughout. Rico Suave was more creative and more aggressive with his punches.

    Vote: Rico Suave.... despite a few things that could've been tweaked, he swung harder with his punches and had the more consistent content.... Dope on both sides though.
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  11. Tacky Jones

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