[Week 34] [Contender] 3. ShadowWarriorfs(22-10) vs 4. Fairydance2000(9-3)

Discussion in 'The Rapmusic Storytelling/Topical League' started by Tacky Jones, Apr 18, 2011.

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  1. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

    Feb 25, 2008


    VERSUS DUE: Every Friday @ 11:59 PM PST
    LINE LIMIT: Minimum of 16 lines, Maximum of 64
    •Recycling is the equivalent to that of a no-show and will be treated as such, thus resulting in a loss in favor of the participant whom chose to recycle and a win in favor of his/her opponent
    •Extensions may only be granted if a moderator has given consent prior to a verse being posted in the match OR your opponent gives his consent
    •If granted, the extension will override deadline for both participants extending it for no more than 24 hours
    •CHECK-INS are encouraged, but not required
    •Verses MUST incorporate AT LEAST 1 of the provided topics or pictures
    •A failure to show will result in a loss and a sign out by default
    •If your opponent fails to show, you MUST STILL post AT LEAST 5 lines (4-15) AND 3 voting links in order to claim victory
    •A Championship Title WILL NOT be decided by way of no-show!!!
    •If an opponent fails to show in a Championship match, the remaining participant will be ranked as the number 1 se
    ed, but will not be considered a Champion until a win by vote
    •Upon your second no show, you will be suspended for two weeks of competition. A third no show will result in a three week suspension and a fourth will result in a suspension for the remainder of the season. There is no suspension for first time no showers.
    • Competitors are limited to posting 3 times in their own match, which allows for checking in, posting votes, and posting a verse. For each post over 3 unless deemed necessary by the mods, the competitor will be docked one vote.
    • Each competitor may only post once in another competitors battle allowing for a vote and nothing more, if you would like an explanation or to explain as to why a vote was cast a certain way, you can pm them or point things out properly in the vote to begin with. Violating this will result in losing a vote in your match.
    • A verse can be edited if and only if it is the first verse to be posted and the other verse has yet to be posted or it is the second verse posted and a vote has yet to be received.
    • Members found constantly disruptive to the league will have their sign-in ignored.


    VOTES DUE: Every Sunday @ 11:59 PM PST

    •You MUST vote on AT LEAST 5 matches AND post links in your thread
    •EACH link NOT POSTED will result in a 1 vote DEDUCTION
    •Voting on the Championship and Contender matches is mandatory
    •Champ and Contender links MUST be labeled accordingly
    •Your votes MUST be AT LEAST 2 FULL lines in length per verse in order to be deemed valid (Discretion given on incomplete verses)
    •Failure to vote and/or post LABELED LINKS will result in vote deductions in your battle
    •If your opponent fails to show, you are still accountable for voting on 3 matches as well as posting those links in your match and labeling the CHAMP and CONTENDER respectively!!!
    •Votes posted AFTER DEADLINE will NOT COUNT!!!
    •PAST CHAMPIONS MUST vote on a MINIMUM of 3 matches in order to be counted as a legitimate voter
    •Editing your vote for any reason must be done within the hour of the original post time. Otherwise, the vote will be null and void.


    Any changes must be agreed upon by both participants and cleared by a moderator

    T.a.C- thedude8125
    ShadowWarriorfs- ShadowWarriorfs
  2. fairydance2000

    fairydance2000 don't wait, Procrastinate

    Mar 10, 2004
  3. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

    Apr 11, 2004
  4. fairydance2000

    fairydance2000 don't wait, Procrastinate

    Mar 10, 2004
    If I could give you one thing


    The mood was set it was 2am
    Chest pains started pounding like a battering ram
    All alone I reach for the phone Dial 911
    My heart beating fast like a Gatling gun
    I feel my chest tighten difficult to breath
    Ambulance arrives, work fast we need to leave
    Somewhere between life and death I saw your face
    I was no longer afraid of what was about to take place
    I am rush off to surgery. My life near its end
    I ask them to call my family and friend
    Awake and confused in the recovery room
    Aching all over! My head feels a sonic boom
    But a familiar face I see smiling at me
    She said I have a few questions about your family tree
    I watched you tend to me day in and day out
    The feelings I held inside left me no doubt
    The way you move your body when you walk
    Makes my heart jump, tongue tied unable to talk
    Everything about you is perfectly place
    Your clothes, your hair, the mole on your face.
    Dimples when you smile and ask how I am.
    I feel like I have past my preliminary exam
    When I am scared you are there at my side
    My fears and insecurities I don’t try to hide
    The mention of sadness you offer advice
    When crazy thoughts cloud my brain you are there to chastise
    I am sorry for the times I was to drug to care
    To take note of your shape, your poise, your flare.
    You would always know when I was too high
    To care what happened if I live or die
    You made it matter, you made me count
    When life seemed shattered. Troubles amount
    You held my heart in your magic bare hands
    You gave me life. Yet you make no demands
    It’s your job you would say. Cardiology is your trade.
    Thanks to you. my death is delayed! The scares will soon fade
    So much love and admiration I have for you
    Your knowledge and skills are what got me through
    Time heals all wounds. And can mend a broken heart
    But if you will have me. Together we can create a fresh start
    I promise to thee, I will break your heart never
    An epiphany so clear, no doubt whatsoever
    I will tend to every one of your heart’s desire
    From trips to Paris. Or Champaign by an open fire
    I give you my heart in more than one way
    To keep safe like you did on that very first day
  5. fairydance2000

    fairydance2000 don't wait, Procrastinate

    Mar 10, 2004
  6. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

    Apr 11, 2004

    The Fairy’s Dance - “The maze in my mind”

    I use to lay awake, slightly intoxicated from my wine
    Reading fairy tales about any romances that I could find
    Where a woman can be loved even when the sun does not shine
    So I wait, hoping mine would start with ‘Once upon a time’
    As the days pass by, I begin to watch my beauty fade away
    Huddled in the darkness, clinging to my lackadaisical ways
    Why does this room feel empty, it’s so quiet, I’m so alone
    So I began to read my book hoping Henry would take me home
    I’ve been reading about him and fantasizing about his touch
    I wondered what it would feel like to be within his clutch
    His eyes slowly undressing me while his lips gave me chills
    His voice giving me strength as his words provided the thrills
    What more could I ask for but for this to become a reality
    I yearned to be swept off my feet by Henry’s mentality
    “Please open your eyes,” he whispered as I continued to stare
    Confused but I ignored his words, focusing on the clarity of his smile
    So exuberant, so warm as I envisioned us walking down the isle
    “Stand up.” He whispered as I continued to lie there
    His expressions remained calm; his words came out of nowhere
    But there a was difference in the air, something he wasn’t showing
    I tried to focus in; he seemed so real now with no angelic glowing
    Henry started to become familiar to me like we’ve met before
    “But from where?” I thought as he slowly moved away from the door
    I reached for him but he was like a ghost haunting my room
    He began to cry as the atmosphere filled with chaos and doom
    As I pulled my hand from him, I notice I was wearing a wedding ring
    So was he and suddenly I started to make sense of things
    I was diagnosed with amnesia from the car crash years ago
    Feeling alone, thinking my memories were fictional stories
    I felt like a fool as this realization had me suddenly alarming
    As it took my death for me to remember that Henry was my prince charming


  7. IAmBenT

    IAmBenT Eat a dick, faggot

    Mar 16, 2011
    Wow what a great battle and some solid stories

    Fairy- Again I really like what you are doing in terms of flow and consistency week in and week out. This story was very strong emotionally. I feel like I got lost at times as to whom I was supposed to relate to in terms of who was the savior in the story. Was it a mother? The Doctor? a Lover? I was following the story and then all of a sudden it was in another world and I dont know if that was intentional or not but it was offsetting for me. I think identifying your main character at least would have fixed this up and why this "other" maybe dream person was so important.

    Shadow-i liked how this verse flowed along and especially how it started, setting us up for the twist ending. very vivid details, almost romance novel style which you then undercut by revealing the psychological trauma she is dealing with. great use of the topic.

    Vote-Shadow i feel told a more complete and compelling story IMO
  8. Cereal_Killer

    Cereal_Killer no ESCAPE

    Oct 25, 2002
    Tight little diddy this was.. Compact and complete.. with all your verses you never loose focus on where your heading so it makes for a smooth read.. Your vocab is strong and rhyming structure is getting a lot more advance.. A pleasant read, i really did enjoy it.

    top verse dude, from start to finish.. sweet detail and a well delivered story.. Your vocab was strong like fairys and your flow was hot.. All up this was an A grade verse and i felt this was an exciting story to read.. I was even captured by the title.. nice job dude..

    vote = shadowarriorfs

    he had a more descriptive story.. Nice work guys..
  9. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

    Feb 25, 2008
    shadow wins 2-0
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