[Week 33] 11. Brown Jesus(0-0) vs 12. Soul of SOD(0-0)

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  1. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    VERSES DUE THURSDAY @ 11:59 PST
    Line Limit: Minimum 8 lines, Maximum 40 (If opponent agrees, you may go over the line limit)
    NO BITING OR RECYCLING
    Biting/Recycling is the equivalent of a no show
    Extensions must be requested in your battle thread before the Thursday evening deadline. It is the opponents choice whether to allow the extension or not. Failure to accept/deny the request prior to the first vote being cast will result in the extension being allowed.
    If granted, the extension overrides the deadline for BOTH battlers
    A No Show results in a loss and automatic sign out
    If your opponent fails to show, you must still post at least 4 lines and 3 voting links for your victory.
    A title wont change hands by no show
    COMPETITORS MAY ONLY POST THREE TIMES IN THEIR MATCH. A CHECK IN, THEIR VERSE, AND THEIR LINKS. EXCESSIVE POSTING WILL RESULT IN A LOSS OF VOTES.
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  2. Soul Of SOD

    Soul Of SOD New Member

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    Cool, I'll drop 20 brother.

    S.O.D
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  3. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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    Sounds good. I'm gonna write the Mag tonight, so I'll try to drop tomorrow night.
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  4. Soul Of SOD

    Soul Of SOD New Member

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    16....


    Whoever said you were dope, needs a few blows to the head,
    Cos they sold you down the river son.. shoulda called yourself Moses instead,
    And when this is over, ya dead.. and forever you'll burn,
    I bet this clown Brown Jesus wish he found reasons to never return,
    I'll spit and sever this worm and shatter his gimmicks,
    So go get Buddha & Mohammed and I'll beat the 3 of you in a matter of minutes,
    I mean, I happen to rip it, you can't fight with this vandal,
    Cos I'll swat ya fuckin' ass as soon as you fly off the handle,
    You can't hold a light to my candle, so fuck ya prayers,
    I aint got a cross to bear, I gotta fuckin' cross with hairs,
    that'll leave ya boss despaired, all shocked an' scared,
    as I enter the church, peel back ya wig and gloss the stairs,
    I'm top notch, prepared.. now ya heart is shattered,
    Shit.. I'm sick enough to turn ya DNA into a laughin' matter,
    And you aint half the rapper, you fuckin' wack, it's true,
    So fucka Brown Jesus, they just found Jesus black and blue

    S.O.D
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  5. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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    I'm going to need an ext; am tomorrow. I'll probably post before you even see this. Nice verse btw

    I checked the archives, wondered why SOD isn't a legend,
    Cus SOD made history... boring as fuck and depressing,
    Jesus wins, no question... but I ain't proud of this battle,
    Cus its only pussies that might be afraid of a Shadow,
    I'll say it stupid, you suck, who would struggle getting through him,
    Dude just gets owned by every one like Credit Unions,
    Keep your nursery rhymes and childrens stories, I'm the better man,
    But... real talk?
    Shadow be chasing Peter Pan all the way to Neverland,
    And Michael J is the truth, might be gay, but who knew,
    His whole life was in Shadow, I'm convinced it might've been you,
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  6. Gramur

    Gramur Yung Troy

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    SOD,

    I'm top notch, prepared.. now ya heart is shattered,
    Shit.. I'm sick enough to turn ya DNA into a laughin' matter,

    ^I thought this line stood out in your verse..you had other lines that were decent but I'm only gonna quote the ones I thought were a lil better than decent. Your first two couplets were straight...Return/Jesus has been done before and better..the gimmicks/budda&muhammad was coo...wasn't feeling the fly off the handle and cross with hairs punches...Peel ya wig back and gloss the stairs had some swag to it and your closer was decent...overall a pretty decent verse...

    BJ,
    I checked the archives, wondered why SOD isn't a legend,
    Cus SOD made history... boring as fuck and depressing,
    I'll say it stupid, you suck, who would struggle getting through him,
    Dude just gets owned by every one like Credit Unions,

    I liked these two lines from your verse...Pussies afraid of a shadow wasn't your best line...and that Peter Pan punch could have been replaced...closer coulda worked if it was worded differently..I feel like you had my two favorite lines of the battle..but overall, I don't think you were as consistent as SOD, even with a shorter verse..

    v-SOD
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  7. RicoSuave

    RicoSuave New Member

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    Brown Jesus, maybe you are too focused on dissing ur opponents, that it takes away from ur verse. Every line does not have to be a diss, try adding some creativity and some punchlines to ur verses and ur verses will hold alot more substance...

    SOD, Nice verse. people may sleep on it a little bit but i thought every line was pretty decent. Had more punches than BJ and I could feel the energy that u put into the lines and u came hard enough to get my vote..

    Vote- SOD
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  8. SonnyDaze

    SonnyDaze 7 train heavyweight

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    S.O.D.

    Whoever said you were dope, needs a few blows to the head,
    Cos they sold you down the river son.. shoulda called yourself Moses instead,
    Creative opener
    And when this is over, ya dead.. and forever you'll burn,
    I bet this clown Brown Jesus wish he found reasons to never return,
    meh, a little generic
    I'll spit and sever this worm and shatter his gimmicks,
    So go get Buddha & Mohammed and I'll beat the 3 of you in a matter of minutes,
    Nice
    I mean, I happen to rip it, you can't fight with this vandal,
    Cos I'll swat ya fuckin' ass as soon as you fly off the handle,
    not bad
    You can't hold a light to my candle, so fuck ya prayers,
    I aint got a cross to bear, I gotta fuckin' cross with hairs,
    punchline didn't make sense to me, but the set up was good
    that'll leave ya boss despaired, all shocked an' scared,
    as I enter the church, peel back ya wig and gloss the stairs,
    Nice
    I'm top notch, prepared.. now ya heart is shattered,
    Shit.. I'm sick enough to turn ya DNA into a laughin' matter,
    Not feeling the punch that much
    And you aint half the rapper, you fuckin' wack, it's true,
    So fucka Brown Jesus, they just found Jesus black and blue
    Feel like the black and blue line has been used before but solid closer

    Brown Jesus

    I checked the archives, wondered why SOD isn't a legend,
    Cus SOD made history... boring as fuck and depressing,
    haha good opener
    Jesus wins, no question... but I ain't proud of this battle,
    Cus its only pussies that might be afraid of a Shadow,
    Set up was a little bit of a self put-down. Punch was a little generic
    I'll say it stupid, you suck, who would struggle getting through him,
    Dude just gets owned by every one like Credit Unions,
    Nice punch, didn't flow as well as it could've though
    Keep your nursery rhymes and childrens stories, I'm the better man,
    But... real talk?
    Shadow be chasing Peter Pan all the way to Neverland,
    Meh, a little corny
    And Michael J is the truth, might be gay, but who knew,
    His whole life was in Shadow, I'm convinced it might've been you,
    Nice, good closer

    SOD had a well put together verse- consistent rhyme structures, flowed well, decent punches. Brown Jesus was more creative with his punches all around- some hit, some didn't.

    Vote: SOD... More consistent from start to finish. Could've been a toss up if BJ matched his 16
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  9. Gee Wilikers

    Gee Wilikers G Willy

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    nice battle here

    SOD had some coo shit. very aggressive verse. liked the cross with hairs line mostly. came with a solid verse. good shit.

    BJ came with a good verse too. i liked the scared of a shadow line mostly from you. wanted to see a little more but hey its cool. good verse nonetheless.

    had to give it to SOD in the end who i felt came with the better all around verse. good battle here though.
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  10. Soul Of SOD

    Soul Of SOD New Member

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    Voted on a couple of battles, but it seems peeps no-showed on a lot of battles?

    Thanks for the votes BTW. And good stuff BJ... I gotta up my game man, hella rusty after 10 years outta the text game.. LOL

    S.O.D
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  11. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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