[Week 32] [Championship] C. .:Pain:.(3-0) vs 2. ShadowWarriorfs(14-12)

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  1. T.a.C

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    WEEK 32



    VERSUS DUE: Every Friday @ 11:59 PM PST
    LINE LIMIT: Minimum of 16 lines, Maximum of 64
    ** NO RECYCLING, NO EXCEPTIONS **
    •Recycling is the equivalent to that of a no-show and will be treated as such, thus resulting in a loss in favor of the participant whom chose to recycle and a win in favor of his/her opponent
    •Extensions may only be granted if a moderator has given consent prior to a verse being posted in the match OR your opponent gives his consent
    •If granted, the extension will override deadline for both participants extending it for no more than 24 hours
    •CHECK-INS are encouraged, but not required
    •Verses MUST incorporate AT LEAST 1 of the provided topics or pictures
    •A failure to show will result in a loss and a sign out by default
    •If your opponent fails to show, you MUST STILL post AT LEAST 5 lines (4-15) AND 3 voting links in order to claim victory
    •A Championship Title WILL NOT be decided by way of no-show!!!
    •If an opponent fails to show in a Championship match, the remaining participant will be ranked as the number 1 seed, but will not be considered a Champion until a win by vote
    •Upon your second no show, you will be suspended for two weeks of competition. A third no show will result in a three week suspension and a fourth will result in a suspension for the remainder of the season. There is no suspension for first time no showers.
    • Competitors are limited to posting 3 times in their own match, which allows for checking in, posting votes, and posting a verse. For each post over 3 unless deemed necessary by the mods, the competitor will be docked one vote.
    • Each competitor may only post once in another competitors battle allowing for a vote and nothing more, if you would like an explanation or to explain as to why a vote was cast a certain way, you can pm them or point things out properly in the vote to begin with. Violating this will result in losing a vote in your match.
    • A verse can be edited if and only if it is the first verse to be posted and the other verse has yet to be posted or it is the second verse posted and a vote has yet to be received.
    • Members found constantly disruptive to the league will have their sign-in ignored.​
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  2. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

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    I don't have time to really get into this..

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    The Fifth Horseman

    Trumpets have sounded, loud and frightening
    They run for cover from clouds of lightning
    Time has diminished, Judgment Day is at hand
    We stood sinisterly, darkness chokes the land
    Taking our place, mounted on our horses
    The course was Earth and devastating was our forces
    We had different objective, respective to our power
    The hour has arrived, we departed from His tower

    One rider was draped in white as he rode first
    faceless, His bow strapped, ready to conquer
    The next wore red, figure blazed with a blur
    Sword cried for war to quench his blood thirst
    The third was dressed in black, frail and diseased
    Bring darkness as he poisons their food supply
    A pale, cold figure followed, death carved his eye
    As if starved to die, his air stale as he grieves

    My image cloaked, as I trail the horsemen
    Charging forth as God sits on his porcelain
    Purpose was unknown, only told a word
    “Doubt” whispered faintly, confusion had stirred
    On this path, my presence invisible yet known
    Looking for answers, I turn to a wolf standing alone
    It was hungry, scared and on the verge of death
    The others were here yet their aura hasn’t left
    I watched as the wolf takes its final breath
    Merging with his shadow, his sense become deaf

    Invigorating its soul, I watch it react…

    A strange scent fills the clean yet frigid air
    Nose to the sky, eyes closed, “Is it there?”
    An aroma so delicate that saliva begins to grip
    Eyes dilate as my tongue hangs below the lip
    Regaining composure, slowly, as I follow
    Concentration skewed, stomach now hollow
    Each step calculated, I hunt strictly to devour
    Hour has become late, muscles are losing power
    He is in my sights, now finished with the foreplay
    "Doubt" whispers, as I’m paralyzed in the doorway
    “Could I eat him if I tried? I should act…..no wait”
    My fur begins to sweat and my legs begin to shake
    Insanity taking over, switching from rational to irate


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    I leave the wolf in division, yet I am in tact…

    This must be my power, putting doubts in mind
    Smiling, watching another victim shout in crime
    Galloping towards him, merging into his shadow
    I whisper, “You think you’re strong? Its really sad though…”

    To be continued…​
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  3. .:Pain:.

    .:Pain:. Futurely J. Keeper

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  4. Shadow

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  5. Got Life?

    Got Life? Resident Megalomaniac

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  6. Shadow

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    ^^[funny] hilarious
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  7. Got Life?

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    Pain's verse...

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  8. Got Life?

    Got Life? Resident Megalomaniac

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    vote = pain.

    much more comedic verse, better flow, strong use of imagery.
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  9. IgloS

    IgloS Eye Glows

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    OMFG!!! Bwahahahahahahahahahaha
    vote=got life
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  10. .:Pain:.

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    The Deep Dark Unknown

    I've been traversing this pot holed lost soul path,
    I think I'll have the same luck those old fossils had,
    I walk with a condom wrapped,
    Round my gonzo past, to make sure it's safe to fuck with that,
    Occasionally, I look in the mirror and see,
    Two deep dark hazel doors open and peer into me,
    And when it appears that I'm weak,
    I disapear for the week, twisted, sippin' beers in defeat,
    But when that mirror reappears, I feel hopeless,
    Cuz no one dares enter those doors that are always open...

    It's cold, it's so sick inside that house,
    But most don't even enter to ever find that out,
    Being a gentleman, I hold the door for my date,
    But they get turned away by the clutter that adorns my brain,
    Not to mention the second hand smoke is intolerable,
    And they hafta leave if they wanna powder their nose,
    They see lust, overloaded, and blood by the ocean,
    Love that was broken by slow, clumsy emotions,
    A brain full of momentos, shame, and a pencil,
    The rest of the place is plagued with wasted potential,
    Lacerations and cuts, slashed by hatred and love,
    Scar tissue a large issue, like my fascination with drugs,
    The entire structure seems it would break with a breeze,
    The house itself is strong, the foundation is weak,
    It's grip with the ground slips, it's easy to lose,
    The day it doesn't slip is the day I'm cleanin' my room,
    So I'll make another trip through these thunderin' storms,
    Fuck this shit, I'll make my way to somebody elses door,
    I know I'll be accepted, just like I usually am,
    They'll ask me to help, say they could use another hand,
    And I'll arrange, sweep, and clean, with a grin on my face,
    Revive the plants of love that have withered in shame,
    I'll eat the plate of dinner that they'll offer to me,
    Call it delicious, even though it's prolly awful to me,
    As I leave, I'll wave, with a grin on my face,
    Look back at their plants as they wither in shame,
    It'll be another day, walking home, feet feelin' weak,
    As I sprint through the cold, and leap through the weeds,
    And I'll arrive, realize it's finally to easy to see,
    That my doors are always open, even for me...
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  11. Shadow

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  12. Got Life?

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    that's a recycled verse even if you wanted to allow it.

    c'mon pain...shoulda stuck with the picture.

    http://community.********.com/showthread.php?t=227503 3 years ago? lolwtf.

    link doesn't work, but just plop the first line into google.

    it's rap v e r s e without the spaces.
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  13. Shadow

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  14. Got Life?

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    lmao.

    can't wait to read the mag.
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  15. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

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    [​IMG]
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  16. Lucifa

    Lucifa Viva La Eva

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    lol @ the bubbles girl ..
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  17. .:Pain:.

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    lol wow.

    Got Life? is quite possibility the biggest herb-ass hypocrite the net has ever seen.

    Fuckin' snitches man...
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  18. Got Life?

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    i wouldn't have said shit if you posted within the 24 hr extension, how you gonna take a 2 day extension to post a 3 year old verse son?
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  19. .:Pain:.

    .:Pain:. Futurely J. Keeper

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    Why the fuck do you care?
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  20. Shadow

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    i feel sad now
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