[Week 31][Champ] C. T.a.C(17-1) vs 2. Gramur(2-1)

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  1. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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  2. Gramur

    Gramur Yung Troy

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    let's make this good...16 coo?
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    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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  4. Gramur

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    T.a.C was wack til oldheads gave him a style and some rhymes
    he's so nurtured...Oneduh and Lotus conceived him in '09
    and now he got the sweetest lines?? shit, he's worthless
    looking like he took all the gay out of San Fran and stuffed it in his verses
    Ima hurt this star who was never a factor in the past
    so just call me the director putting this actor in a cast
    he's gassed...who gives a fuck if he's the champ? I'm wreckless

    http://board.rapmusic.com/rbl-top-2...p-1-oneduh-20-0-vs-2-richard-corey-4-0-a.html
    http://board.rapmusic.com/rbl-top-2...p-1-oneduh-17-0-vs-2-john-hensley-16-3-a.html

    ^those are REAL title matches..well, at least HE beat Breathless
    no respect cos on a 1-10 scale...he's bogus, see
    if this kid is the 1...that gives nigguhs 9 more reasons to vote for me
    he's not as dope as G..to say different gets me appalled
    his text career is hide & seek because there's no Peaking involved
    Tacky getting broads? fuck no...this ugly emo dike
    can't take a bitch on a date...because she'd rather take her life
    he tries to get head..but he don't know shit about deep throatin'
    so if yall hearing T bagged..I dumped his body in the ocean
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  5. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    1,2,3, and to the 4, now G’s through
    I wasn’t singing Nothing but a G Thang…
    …I was just counting the times I’ve beat you
    Bleed tool, cuz really you have not a wish
    Could never be the top dog...
    …But hes happy to be the bottom bitch
    I’ll ash this flame, you don’t have any hope
    I shoulda made this match on 4/21, cuz Gram’s already smoked
    Been here 5 years, yet you’re the same mess
    How can I hit you with any name flips when you’re still nameless?
    Actin like it hurts to grow, I’ll burst his skull
    Flow hasn’t improved at all…
    …And dating ads are the only time he writes a personal
    His fans still look both ways and hold hands
    Feel like I’m battling OSEP…
    …Cuz retarded kids are the only ones pro Grams
    You blow man, no respect, watch as he sweats
    Yeah, we have the same amount of losses…
    …Thanks to you already havin’ 3 resets
    I call him a faggot, he’ll smile and stand the shit
    See, I aint talking mean grandparents when I say that Gram’s a bitch
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  6. PresentsOfMind

    PresentsOfMind New Member

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    Overall, this match was enjoyable to read. A lot of talent shown on both sides.

    T.a.C was wack til oldheads gave him a style and some rhymes
    he's so nurtured...Oneduh and Lotus conceived him in '09
    and now he got the sweetest lines?? shit, he's worthless
    looking like he took all the gay out of San Fran and stuffed it in his verses

    Personal, flows well. Solid opening.

    ma hurt this star who was never a factor in the past
    so just call me the director putting this actor in a cast
    he's gassed...who gives a fuck if he's the champ? I'm wreckless
    ^those are REAL title matches..well, at least HE beat Breathless

    First two lines were well thought-out, sets up with punch line with "Breathless" extremely well.

    no respect cos on a 1-10 scale...he's bogus, see
    if this kid is the 1...that gives nigguhs 9 more reasons to vote for me
    he's not as dope as G..to say different gets me appalled
    his text career is hide & seek because there's no Peaking involved

    Well done.

    Tacky getting broads? fuck no...this ugly emo dike
    can't take a bitch on a date...because she'd rather take her life
    he tries to get head..but he don't know shit about deep throatin'
    so if yall hearing T bagged..I dumped his body in the ocean

    You can do better than this.

    1,2,3, and to the 4, now G’s through
    I wasn’t singing Nothing but a G Thang…
    …I was just counting the times I’ve beat you

    The "G Thang" part doesn't flow that well (coulda tried something like "I wasn't singing Dre and Snoop"...reference would have still been clear) but the punch line is dope.

    Bleed tool, cuz really you have not a wish
    Could never be the top dog...
    …But hes happy to be the bottom bitch

    It's 2012, don't go so Shakespeare on us just to get a rhyme. Still, solid punch again.

    I’ll ash this flame, you don’t have any hope
    I shoulda made this match on 4/21, cuz Gram’s already smoked
    Been here 5 years, yet you’re the same mess
    How can I hit you with any name flips when you’re still nameless?
    Actin like it hurts to grow, I’ll burst his skull
    Flow hasn’t improved at all…
    …And dating ads are the only time he writes a personal

    This is the reason [Champ] is written next to your name. Keep the bar high.

    His fans still look both ways and hold hands
    Feel like I’m battling OSEP…
    …Cuz retarded kids are the only ones pro Grams
    You blow man, no respect, watch as he sweats
    Yeah, we have the same amount of losses…
    …Thanks to you already havin’ 3 resets
    I call him a faggot, he’ll smile and stand the shit
    See, I aint talking mean grandparents when I say that Gram’s a bitch

    Solid ending, that OSEP part set up the punch line, but I feel like it came out of nowhere in terms of rhyming.

    Vote: T.a.C. Did my research and I've definitely noticed recent improvement on Gramur, but still not enough to win in a title fight. Keep at it.
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  7. Jai-Z

    Jai-Z Bangem, Jai

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    Vote - Gram

    Bar for bar, u got creamed, TaC.

    Fresher conceptz and wording.

    TaC, I liked ur G Thang concept, but ur execution to the punch sucked. Dont b lazy wtha good idea bro.

    "I'll ash this flame".. what doez that mean? Makez no sense.

    All Gram/Drug/Grandparentz wrdplay suckz. Gv it a rest.

    Gram, good solid verse. Ur executionz got a lot better.
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  8. SonnyDaze

    SonnyDaze 7 train heavyweight

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    Gramur:
    T.a.C was wack til oldheads gave him a style and some rhymes
    he's so nurtured...Oneduh and Lotus conceived him in '09
    Good opener

    and now he got the sweetest lines?? shit, he's worthless
    looking like he took all the gay out of San Fran and stuffed it in his verses
    meh, punch was a little generic

    Ima hurt this star who was never a factor in the past
    so just call me the director putting this actor in a cast
    feeling it

    he's gassed...who gives a fuck if he's the champ? I'm wreckless
    CHAMPIONSHIP 1. Oneduh 20-0 vs. 2. Richard Corey 4-0
    CHAMPIONSHIP 1. Oneduh 17-0 vs. 2. John Hensley 16-3

    ^those are REAL title matches..well, at least HE beat Breathless
    Not gonna dig deep into the history but the scheme was alright

    no respect cos on a 1-10 scale...he's bogus, see
    if this kid is the 1...that gives nigguhs 9 more reasons to vote for me
    not bad

    he's not as dope as G..to say different gets me appalled
    his text career is hide & seek because there's no Peaking involved
    dope

    Tacky getting broads? fuck no...this ugly emo dike
    can't take a bitch on a date...because she'd rather take her life
    ehh, a little forced

    he tries to get head..but he don't know shit about deep throatin'
    so if yall hearing T bagged..I dumped his body in the ocean
    punchline was good, set up had me thinking "pause"

    T.a.C.:
    1,2,3, and to the 4, now G’s through
    I wasn’t singing Nothing but a G Thang…
    …I was just counting the times I’ve beat you
    These types of schemes are getting a little played out by you

    Bleed tool, cuz really you have not a wish
    Could never be the top dog...
    …But hes happy to be the bottom bitch
    Not bad

    I’ll ash this flame, you don’t have any hope
    I shoulda made this match on 4/21, cuz Gram’s already smoked
    solid

    Been here 5 years, yet you’re the same mess
    How can I hit you with any name flips when you’re still nameless?
    felt a little forced

    Actin like it hurts to grow, I’ll burst his skull
    Flow hasn’t improved at all…
    …And dating ads are the only time he writes a personal
    Good set up, decent puncline

    His fans still look both ways and hold hands
    Feel like I’m battling OSEP…
    …Cuz retarded kids are the only ones pro Grams
    another good set up, punchline was a little forced

    You blow man, no respect, watch as he sweats
    Yeah, we have the same amount of losses…
    …Thanks to you already havin’ 3 resets
    meh, nothing special

    I call him a faggot, he’ll smile and stand the shit
    See, I aint talking mean grandparents when I say that Gram’s a bitch
    okay closer, again nothing special

    Vote: Gramur. I think he edged it by the slightest of margins. He had some really dope lines and some mediocre ones. T.a.C. was more consistent from start to finish, but lacked creativity to be honest.
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  9. Gee Wilikers

    Gee Wilikers G Willy

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    close battle here. definitly botw.

    dam were to start

    gramur had a good verse. opener and middle where strongest parts in the verse. i like the 9 more reasons line mostly.

    tac came with a good verse too. opener was nice. middle was also good. both of you guys had stronger starting and midway lines than closers. i had to read it a few times to get a true perspective on who to vote for cuz it was close.

    in the end i gotta give it to Tac. the dude just had the slightly better verse imo. i think it was the personals here that got him the w. but gram has skill tho. and i think if the bar limit was higher for this one he would have pulled through with the win. good shit
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  10. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    Tie in votes. T.a.C wins after voting deductions
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