[Week 31] [Champ] C. Cereal_Killer(8-2) vs 2. ShadowWarriorfs(21-8)

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  1. Tacky Jones

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  2. Cereal_Killer

    Cereal_Killer no ESCAPE

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  3. Cereal_Killer

    Cereal_Killer no ESCAPE

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    The Ultimate Warrior
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    A man is measured by his actions through chaos
    As halo’s crisscross with horns, we mourn the same loss
    Is it life or something with a little more bite
    It’s pride that has fallen in the dawn of sunlight
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    Through shadows of a shady alley he cracks back his knuckles
    Track marks make muscle; in the dark he practiced this tussle
    The rustling leaves float at his feet. A king of the cardboard ring
    He breathes sighs of relief as he knows his next opponent won’t win
    He flexes and stretches then peels back a snuff box to sniff
    He's wired, so high that he knows each fist thrown will split
    Bone, breaking noses and limbs, choking throats when he grips
    He exists in a world that you couldn’t grope let alone begin to depict
    His A.D.I.D.A.S clothes are fit for the stains of his victim’s blood
    A Gatling Gun whom begun these stunts to battle for fun
    Now like cattle they run as he brushes his shoulders off and enters
    He walks to the center of the ring with his one and only agenda
    To humiliate, penetrate their brain with shame in front of a stage
    Make them crumble, rearrange their pride for the fair price they pay
    The warrior opens with a gorilla press then running splash
    This killer lets go with a scissor kick and removes the pads
    Off his gloves. He uppercuts the clown and he hits rock bottom
    He jumps on top with fury fist until each clock got him
    The crowd is electric as he surges with a strangle hold
    Releases he goes for the figure four until the ankle broke
    He stands up spits on the fallen solider and laughs
    His opponent taps out knowing the warrior just left his mark
    Darkness has fallen and the warrior returns to his throne
    Where he dons the belt of honor from melting unknowns
    He explodes into a mountain of coke and puts his feet up
    And binge drinks bourbon out of a gold incrusted cup
    Unfazed with his grace you should stay away from his belt
    Incase you want to be shelled as hells flames ring out
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    The End
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  4. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

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    Hi CK...good luck man!



    Stop!


    Perhaps it was my destiny in the long run
    To protect her despite still being an adolescent son
    She had given me life and for that, I owed her mine
    Providing me with sustenance because I was only nine
    Wine filled her glass every night while she cried in the dark
    Deprived of light as i would press my ears against her heart
    She would start to embrace me until suddenly the door would open
    “Get your ass to bed kid! Now!” he yelled. “Daddy has spoken”
    I was hoping for more time with her to just recline and dream
    Dream of a day where I am not forced to stay awake and listen to her scream
    Agonizing screams of fear, hate, pain and utter frustration
    I watched from the stairs as dad returned from the bus station
    Constantly pacing circles around her, blindly seething for no reason
    Mom believing I was sleeping but I was seeing that there was no pleasing
    Him, confessing his adulterous sin as mom begins crying chaotically
    His eyes became red, fist clinching tightly as he shakes it periodically
    His veins bulged out as he slowly slithered closer to her
    She panicked as he pushed her out of her chair hoping damage would occur
    Her head cracks against the wall as she struggles to the corner
    He followed her trail like a predator whose saliva gradually gets warmer
    She begs him to stop as he grabs mom by her hair and forces her to her feet
    His hand full of blood and tangled hair, he pulls her towards his face
    He licked her cheek slowly saying that he “loved the way her fear tastes”
    I could hear her soft yelps for help as I found it unbearable to listen
    I charged into dad’s closet and grabbed his new pistol that glistened
    I was silent in my approach of him as I raised the gun, hands shaking
    “Stop it!” I yelled as he violently tossed her to the ground. He begun taking
    Steps towards me, daring me to pull the trigger, I just wanted him to stop
    He got closer as I backed away, calling on every ounce of strength I’ve got
    He lunged at me as the gun went pop as he dropped to his knees
    His intestines began to bleed; content in my tears as he slowly breathes
    He sees me shiver as I run to mom, he tries to grab me but I escape
    He swiftly turns to us as he bitterly begins to realize his fate
    He reaches for us then suddenly collapses in the middle of the living room
    Mom grabs me tightly and showers me with kisses while dad enters doom
    I felt like a savior who had just put down an animal who had gone wild
    Promising mom that I would always protect her, after all, I was her only child

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  5. IAmBenT

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    Very tough match.

    CK - your attention to detail is really fantastic, and your rhyme scheme for this battle and flow was alot better than I have seen you drop in your previous battles. ferocious, you painted a great portrait of a tremendous fighter and I kind of like that you didnt really pass judgement you just gave us the character to decide what we are gonna do with him, i tried to do the same this week with my character.

    Shadow - great story full of emotion and verve, I like your details here even though it was tough at times to go with the flow. i think you did a great job of giving life to that picture I had thought to use the same pic but you really did it justice.

    This is a tough battle

    vote -Cereal Killer in a match that can go either way, cuz Shadow's verse is really descriptive and powerful. I just like CK's approach and tightness of the verse.
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  6. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

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  7. fairydance2000

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    CK
    I liked your story; it was different to what I have seen here,
    I like the use of the picture, I would have never thought of that, but it goes really well
    The flow was smooth and the rhymes are nicely matched. The story read well.
    Nice imagery!
    Shadow
    A powerful story. I liked it.
    The imagery was your strongest in here, your detail was good.
    The rhymes let you down a little. But this didn’t take away from the story
    The flow was ok, I liked that you placed the picture ay the end. It made the ending even more powerful.
    Well told story.

    Shadow you had a wonderful story but I think a few more rhyme sets would have brought it to a higher level. CK a short story, but your flow and rhymes were spot on. This was a great match. With two different styles of writing. And two wonderful verses it’s a hard one. But for the technique and working structure of the piece my vote goes to ck
    VOTE CK
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  8. Kuja

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    Will edit with vote later on
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  9. Kuja

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    Ck - Brilliant, the wording and flow was perfect.
    I love how you grabbed my atension with the brillant
    way you described his actions, overall a very tight
    verse.Not really a story, more of a series of actions
    & if im been honest these are the type of verses I
    perfer, pure rawness! nice job.


    His A.D.I.D.A.S clothes are fit for the stains of his victim’s blood
    A Gatling Gun whom begun these stunts to battle for fun
    Now like cattle they run as he brushes his shoulders off and enters
    He walks to the center of the ring with his one and only agenda


    Killer lines.


    Shad - A very touching & powerful pieace here, altho I have
    read a lot of verses with the same kinda story but id have
    to say this was one of the best ive read. Flow was nice, altho
    did go off a couple of times but nothing major.

    Him, confessing his adulterous sin as mom begins crying chaotically
    His eyes became red, fist clinching tightly as he shakes it periodically
    His veins bulged out as he slowly slithered closer to her
    She panicked as he pushed her out of her chair hoping damage would occur


    Nice.


    Good battle here, but overall my vote goes to

    Cereal Killer
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  10. Tacky Jones

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    CK wins 3-0
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  11. Tacky Jones

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    uppin cuz im OCD
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