[Week 31] 11. Jai-Z(0-0) vs 12. Brown Jesus(0-0)

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  1. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    VERSES DUE THURSDAY @ 11:59 PST
    Line Limit: Minimum 8 lines, Maximum 40 (If opponent agrees, you may go over the line limit)
    NO BITING OR RECYCLING
    Biting/Recycling is the equivalent of a no show
    Extensions must be requested in your battle thread before the Thursday evening deadline. It is the opponents choice whether to allow the extension or not. Failure to accept/deny the request prior to the first vote being cast will result in the extension being allowed.
    If granted, the extension overrides the deadline for BOTH battlers
    A No Show results in a loss and automatic sign out
    If your opponent fails to show, you must still post at least 4 lines and 3 voting links for your victory.
    A title wont change hands by no show
    COMPETITORS MAY ONLY POST THREE TIMES IN THEIR MATCH. A CHECK IN, THEIR VERSE, AND THEIR LINKS. EXCESSIVE POSTING WILL RESULT IN A LOSS OF VOTES.
    COMPETITORS MAY ONLY POST ONCE IN AN OPPONENTS BATTLE. A VOTE. ANYTHING UNNECCESARY WILL RESULT IN A LOSS OF VOTES. IF YOU HAVE SOMETHING TO SAY, EITHER TAKE IT TO THE LOUNGE OR PM THE PERSON.
    First battler to post is allowed to edit their verse up until the second battler posts theirs. Once the second battler posts, they are allowed to edit their verse until the first vote is casted.
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    Disruptive members will be banned from the league will and have their posts moved to the garbage bin thread.
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    VOTES ARE DUE SUNDAY NIGHT @ 8:59 PST
    You must vote on at least 5 matches(provided there are 5 matches to vote on, if no vote on whichever battles are open) and post the links in your thread. For every link not posted you will lose a vote.
    Votes MUST be at least two lines per verse, and must have a vote casted. There is no voting for ties.
    Voting is open past the deadline in the case that I’m late starting the new week.
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  2. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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  3. Jai-Z

    Jai-Z Bangem, Jai

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    Check, 24.
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  4. Jai-Z

    Jai-Z Bangem, Jai

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    Jesus, Menso..
    ..ur trife, everybodies slut is ur wife;
    Mosez ran into The Burning Bush, but u asked to marry Magdalen for life.
    And u knew she had nasty twat, u dont get cooch so y not tap it..
    ..last time I hearda bitch flashed u her breast, u asked for hot sauce and a napkin.
    U get no propz, talk mad shit, not to mention u suck too;
    Out of the 5 chancez u had to nail TaC, he posterized u.
    Plus u stay on my dick wth hate votez, Ima kill him, no question;
    And put B on his back long enough to reach Blue Ivy's conception.
    Or Usherz Confessionz..
    ..thm sideline hoez u deal wth are weak as fuck;
    Ur bitch got tattooed eyebrowz..
    ..complimentz of smittyrhythm, if he ever did make-up.
    We were supposed to pic battle, but I guess he got scared so;
    Count on him to do some sucker shit..
    ..like morph into a mesquito.
    Thatz some fag shit.. he hada bare breast bitch n his face and ddnt hit?
    The Farmer and The Dell couldnt milk the game for what itz worth, til he faced a tit.
    Fly guy? Piece of shit! Lucky I dont pull picz on this geek;
    this niggaz grill look like a Swiss Army Knife, u could cut, stab, peel and pop a cork wth his teeth.
    I'll stick an apple n his mouth, and roast this fool from the start;
    Go HAM? Not wthout PINEAPPLEZ..
    ..we all know u got Kevin's Heart.
    And his Magz garbage, got no effort and shit;
    Punchline Of The 'Week', is ur rhymez highlighted..
    ..if they used the other synonym for ur lyricz.
    And yea, I was hospitalized for 11 dayz, sick wth the craziest shit;
    Metaphorically quarantined, u could nvr b iller than Jai asa lyricist.
    This wetback'll get his mellon cracked, split and served to the massez;
    2 Clay's of a different pod, u Aiken to b Cassius.
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  5. Menso

    Menso Go Lakers!

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    Might need an ext until tomorrow early am to finish the Mag.
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  6. Jai-Z

    Jai-Z Bangem, Jai

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    Thatz fine.
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  7. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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    The chickens joke are corny, but I only really showed for Hens,
    This ugly bitch only take self portraits, cus she doesn't have any friends,
    Its the animal kingdom in this mufucka, who'll save ya
    Crab face bitch, ya eyes on stalks like bull traders,
    Swine nosed whore, this shit is making me cry,
    Look, its fitting why ya nostrils like the infinity sign,
    Cliche line: You broke? Its just a guess, boo,
    I swear this bitch is homeless taking pictures in public restrooms!
    Or maybe you stay in the telly, romance and play in the setting,
    Fuck a honeymoon, though... ...this a funeral it ain't a wedding,
    Eyes are the window to the soul... you cruising with tint,
    I hate to look at you, cus locking eyes with you is a sin,
    Undeserved ego, stfu no one gives you respect,
    So you dress like a man... and no one gives you respect,
    And you haven't beat anyone since God knows when,
    Jai was bad then and she's been awful since,
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  8. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    Jai:

    U get no propz, talk mad shit, not to mention u suck too;
    Out of the 5 chancez u had to nail TaC, he posterized u.

    Plus u stay on my dick wth hate votez, Ima kill him, no question;
    And put B on his back long enough to reach Blue Ivy's conception.


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    BJ:

    Swine nosed whore, this shit is making me cry,
    Look, its fitting why ya nostrils like the infinity sign,

    Cliche line: You broke? Its just a guess, boo,
    I swear this bitch is homeless taking pictures in public restrooms!


    this was a really close battle actually. could see it going either way. i got each with 2 quotables. my favorite line that isnt quoted was prolly the "dressed like a man/no respect" punch. if he didnt rhyme no respect wit no respect, i woulda quoted that one. so i guess i gotta give it to Menso.

    vote-BJ
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  9. SonnyDaze

    SonnyDaze 7 train heavyweight

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    Jai: Thought you were firing on all cylinders to start off. The Blue Ivy line was the line of the battle for me. Everything was pretty solid up until you inserted the long quote- having to read all that and then having a weak punch to follow up lost you a lot of momentum. You picked it up with your last 4 lines though. Your closer was probably my 2nd favorite line of the battle.

    BJ: Consistent verse with some good personals. The set-up to the "no one gives you respect" punch could've been worded better.

    If I judged this battle on quotables alone, I would give it to Jai hands down, but I prefer to look at the whole body of work. Both of you had well-executed schemes but Jai's inserted quotes took away from what could've been a really good verse. If I took out the worst 8 lines from your verse Jai, your best 16 would've beat BJ's 16. Brown Jesus didn't mesmerize but he was solid all-around and that was enough for me.

    Vote: Brown Jesus
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  10. Circleplex

    Circleplex New Member

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    jai had the better quotables, but bj was more consistent throughout and the quotes were a bit corny and messed up the verse a bit. was close and if it went the other way id be completely ok with it but yeah

    vote: brown jesus
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  11. Gramur

    Gramur Yung Troy

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    Jai Z
    Jesus, Menso..
    ..ur trife, everybodies slut is ur wife;
    Mosez ran into The Burning Bush, but u asked to marry Magdalen for life.
    U get no propz, talk mad shit, not to mention u suck too;
    Out of the 5 chancez u had to nail TaC, he posterized u.
    Plus u stay on my dick wth hate votez, Ima kill him, no question;
    And put B on his back long enough to reach Blue Ivy's conception.

    ^these were the highlights of your verse in your opinion...it kinda went downhill..you had some more good concepts but some were worded very weird to where they didn't hit very hard

    Swine nosed whore, this shit is making me cry,
    Look, its fitting why ya nostrils like the infinity sign,
    Cliche line: You broke? Its just a guess, boo,
    I swear this bitch is homeless taking pictures in public restrooms!

    these were your standouts...

    while I do believe Jai had the most quotables...her verse had to much filler in it which kind of killed it for her imo..Menso was definitely more consistent..while Jai Z had one more quotable..Menso was more consistent..

    v-Menso
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  12. Gee Wilikers

    Gee Wilikers G Willy

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    nice battle here:

    jai definitely came with a good start. napkins line was funny. i see why you used to quote to give context. dragged out your verse a lil longer but hey its needed to make the point. the line following came off cool. your ending wasn't as strong as your beggining but it was still a cool finish.

    BJ came with a solid verse too. i like the short direct punches you put up here. i liked the public restrooms and infinite sign lines. nice shit. not too much more to say you had a good verse my g.

    close battle, but im giving it to Brown Jesus who came with the better verse all around. jai definitely has skill tho. i kinda wish you came with more lines like the napkin one in this battle. i think making your verse more succinct would have got you the win here.
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  13. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    Menso wins in votes. both lose for no links.
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