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  1. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    i don't know what a multi is?? lemme go grab my verse against you and show u how many multi's i used fagot brb
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  2. Mrjdm998

    Mrjdm998 New Member

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    You still have no idea.

    Multi:

    My brain scan
    Results are the same as the rain man

    Rain and brain rhyme, then scan and man. Step my game up? I beat you in the topical league, and beat you in the battle league. Are you actaully brain dead retarded?
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  3. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    Damn son, you contradictive as fuck. talk about getting personal....
    ..you just did a whole back ground search....took time,
    visted my page....and hadda take 30 bars to dedicate your lil verse you ho..

    bitch, you bettah gitchya sketch right, only reason why you ain't
    fucking with a pussy because you find better pleasure with ur flesh light:jerkoff:
    i've wrecked better texter's on they best night
    better git in bed before you get the stretcher & next will be the death light.
    and i ain't talking ur average jdm head lights, im talking the bright light
    you see directly after you left life.


    keep pokin ya 'big headed' "ass" up in my sight's and git ya helm sniped

    you fucking pee-body-fag, you more mrs. krumpit then alice and a tea party..
    get ya whole "stee" bodied and after that get ya body tea-bagged

    your Austin power teeth having geek swag, aint bout to get you the RBL "get off-free" pass

    wich ya weak ass entrance and your meek ass presence, you need a male escort
    you can find him on craigslist,


    ima really defeat you, take it all the way and leave you legless.

    ima really re-heat you like a left over plate you have 4 breakfast..

    then im'a really delete you, turn u into a lyrical bowel movement, so
    you could say you was the shit right before you made your exit.

    do you get the message? i will multi-lyrically combo punch line your light's
    out descriptivly in a sentence. more thorough and intricate then you could ever get
    with your lil premise.. you English motha fucka how do you pronounce the "pen'is"
    you "joke" you get choked "bloke" your "Kermit the frog and "Mr's piggy" you just another puppet
    with a fist-in-ya-throat like a swisher-get's-rolled this bitch-will-get-smoked
    you'll get lifted-and-stoned-quicker then bitches in kosovo.



    im not gonna bold every part where i multi'd but lemme tell u something about our battle why you didn't really win.. bc you verse didn't have any matching skill level bars like mine, multi's werent as power full inner rhymes end rhymes weren't as difficult, the only thing i give it up to you on, is your clever word play on my name.. you had a few punches, that i admit, were superior to my hardest ones. they didn't hold any level of lyricism other then you have a creative play on words.. actually the LP part of myname, all ur other punches missed the mark and were stretched and dry english humor i don't fancy mate.

    so off the nut's fago
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  4. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    you have multi's and rhyme scheme confused

    poor lil chap
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  5. Mrjdm998

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    Rhyming the same sound more than once isn't multi sylabel rhyming. There's plenty of other people here who will confirm that. Read Freeze's verse, he uses multis all day:

    I couldn't find anything on JIMMY or anyone who's ever "HUNG WITH HIM"/ 1
    & since all he's gonna do is drop "MONKEY BARS" may be we should just call him "JUNGLE JIM"/ 2

    You're a moron with an unwarented ego. You said you would go to LW to be the king of the losers, and lost in week 2. Why do you still argue?
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  6. Mrjdm998

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    Go check google. Hell, if anybody else is reading this, they can confirm what a multi is.
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  7. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    rhyming a same sound more then once is a multi?

    didn't you just say previously "Rain and brain rhyme, then scan and man"

    in your lil my brain scan compared to rain man pretend multi?

    your right, freeze uses multi's i do, most the battlers here do, why don't you?
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  8. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    your multi is only a two syllable multi.. it isn't even considered a multi to superior multi syllabic artist's like me and deth and other texters like tac and jason anthony on this site.

    when u have 3- or more syllable's being rhymed in a bar, then lemme know and i will battle you again, but as long as your still on your 2 sylllable end rhyme scheme, i can't acknowledge you.

    you beat me twice i admit it! every one you hear that... but why are u still more garbage then me.. you'd think you'd get better, but u just got worse, it's sorta suspect if u ask me.

    fuck the queen of england to btw
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  9. Mrjdm998

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    Where did I say that?

    Me not using multis? There weren't anywhere close to being my best bars, but lots of multi rhymes:

    We all know Riots best acomplishments are in the topical league
    So him winning here will be rare and strange an improbable mystery
    My punchlines sting like the backend of a swarm of unstoppable bees
    You're a joke like oversized comical frizbees and the size of hospital TV's
    My verses aren't just rhymes they're a viscious dark art
    Having a lighbult in your spines the closest you'll be to a smart arse
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  10. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    This is again moving into more complex territory. Multis, for this purpose, involve stringing together words that use, as the name suggests, more than one syllable. Now this can either be complete words… like “contradiction” etc, or multiple words put together and spat quickly… “Bomb-tha-mission” etc. It’s fairly easy to integrate this into verses, but creating a verse which uses a multi-syllable rhyme scheme is very difficult, as you have to rhyme long words consistently. Which, as you can imagine, isn’t easy. This is one of the flashier ways of showing off your skills. Most really skilled emcees can do this, but emcees that use this regularly are few and far between.


    you not being one of the few
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  11. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    it's ok mrjdm i see how your getting confused.. multi's is more then end rhyme

    this isn't a multi and i'll tell u why

    We all know Riots best acomplishments are in the topical league
    So him winning here will be rare and strange an improbable mystery



    first end rhyme... 4 syllables

    second 7 syllables

    then you went on to 5... and 5.. again.. better. then 2, and 2

    vs

    do-you get the message?
    i will multi-lyrically combo punch line your light's out descriptivl- in-a-sentence. more thorough and intricate then-you-could-ever- get- with your lil premise..
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  12. Mrjdm998

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    That one wasn't that much of a multi because mystery and league are a slant rhyme. A multi rhyme is a multi rhyme, you put in whole words which don't rhyme with your multi. I don't give a fuck if you can multi to seven words when your punches are trash, you type like a retard and you keep making comments about how you're better than me after getting beaten.

    "with your lil premise.. you English motha fucka how do you pronounce the "pen'is""

    The fuck is that shit? "How do you pronounce the pen'is"? Please explain how that's a diss?
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  13. Mrjdm998

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    Fact is, you claimed this has multis:

    "you want a haiku
    with multi-syllables too
    i'd be obliged to"

    Then changed your tune. You lose (Again), good day, and good night.
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  14. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    never changed my tune lil kid.. fact is, it is a multi, not your ordinary rap multi, it's poetry.. not even intended to rhyme, but i did, as to dumb it down for u for emphasize..

    tha line u quoted from me, was a diss on ur english accent you retarded mother fucker

    the haiku i demonstrated, wasn't supposed to be a typical rap multi btw u ignorant fuck

    it was a demonstration of a multi syllable scheme in poetry..bc u claimed that rap, has no ties to poetry and that deth's comment about 15 attributes to lyricism or whatever u said..

    your a pathetic lil boy, that can't prove a point, but tries hard and fails miserably

    bc of that now, with my green mod powers, i hereby revoke both wins here and rstl against me, unless a super comes and rejects my statement, just consider it, official

    now!

    GOOD DAY SIR.. AND GOOD NIGHT
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  15. DethStryque

    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

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    Mrjdm...you should know by now that I don't make things up.If I offer up the (remarkably simple) evidence that concretely proves my contentions,will you acknowledge that you are mistaken and withdraw doubts about my word?
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  16. BronzeAtlas

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    Elements of Lyricism = Subject, theme, motif, thesis, perspective, economy of language, similie, hyperbole, metaphor, alliteration, Onomatopoeia, rhyme, internal rhyme and imagery.
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  17. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    MRJDM998 u are officially whack as fuck
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  18. Severity.

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    Can we each name one or two people that are NOT allowed to ever vote on our battles?

    My pick is HeartCloaker, dude's a straight up MORON.

    It's not about voting against me...several folks have done so this week and in the past...and people like what they like and don't like what they don't like, and I always respect that, even when I disagree. Sometimes the execution's off, sometimes the rhyme is forced, sometimes the concept is weak, sometimes the patterns are too basic, etc etc...in YOUR OPINION. Writers here have to sift through what's valuable in terms of criticism and throw away the bullshit.

    But if you're retarded, then please don't vote on people's battles. Who the fuck doesn't understand a terrorist/black sites reference? Turn off the Xbox and read a fucking newspaper for fuck's sake. And if you don't like half-rhymes then you should probably stop listening to and reading rap lyrics, period, since just about every lyricist uses them. You've never heard of anyone being "sonned" before? What an idiot, lol.

    If, say, John Hens had said the same shit, I'd consider his opinions. I don't like TaC, but I respect him either way, I'd see what he has to say. But Cloaker??? Have you read your OWN work? LOL.

    Done ranting. On to the next...
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  19. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    i was holding my breath incase he mentioned me
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  20. HeartCloaker

    HeartCloaker Winter is coming

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    haiku/obliged too sound like a multi to me. Maybe inferior idiots like you just can't see multis.
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