[Week 29] 7. Cigma(2-1) vs 8. Riot(16-8)

Discussion in 'The Rapmusic Storytelling/Topical League' started by Tacky Jones, Mar 14, 2011.

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  1. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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  2. Riot

    Riot The Dark Hero.

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    Extension please.
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  3. Cigma

    Cigma Maxwell's Demon

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  4. Riot

    Riot The Dark Hero.

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    Sorry, Massive Writers Block This week. All I Could Muster

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    Was working late, was running behind
    trying to catch the six-thirty
    transit bus, away from daily grind
    winter’s bustling world of inner-city.
    Fighting my way, to the back
    through the sniffles and the sneezes
    dodging germs from rest of the pack
    protecting my face from airborne diseases.
    Noticed a lone man sitting back there
    who had a rather nasty cough
    with tattered clothes and messy hair
    dirty, smelly, couldn’t wait to get off.
    Just a poor man, in a snowstorm
    that was just along for the ride
    if only as to keep warm
    briefly, as I rode along beside.
    He looked very sickly and pale
    suddenly he hurled on my head
    making passengers nauseous, mad as hell
    as the bus driver’s face turned red.
    Bus stopped, were asked to go
    through angry riders, made our way
    forced from passage, into the snow
    doors slammed shut, bus sped away.
    I was ticked, made it known
    luckily for me, wore a hat
    leaving behind, frail man alone
    pitching headgear, was grateful for that.

    Walked a few minutes, turned around
    inside me, my heart was ascend
    through dark bitterness, heard a sound
    echoing his whimpers, in the wind.
    What have I become, a heartless fool
    somber cries, touching me deeply within
    abandoning a soul, under constant ridicule
    with teary eyes, I returned again.
    How do you say your sorry
    to someone’s who’s lost all hope
    not my enemy, but helpless quarry
    who’s everyday survival, walking a tightrope.
    Through the severe, made our way
    cold and numb, could barely feel
    following fade light, into a café
    bought poor soul, needed hot meal.
    Gave my coat, he was clad
    before returning to bitter night air
    from wallet, gave all I had
    saying I had enough to spare.
    Smiling at me, as favor was shone
    noticed one set, footprints in the snow
    stranger vanished, prints were my own
    but I wondered, where’d his go.
    Was I being tested, answered prayer
    eyes opened, so I could see
    was I entertaining an angel unaware
    that once damned soul was me.
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  5. Cigma

    Cigma Maxwell's Demon

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    We met when she was roughed and broken up,
    I was naive to love, no idea what it consisted of.
    She asked me question bluntly, hunting,
    hoping I would open up, give her something,
    but all my life I never trusted women lightly
    So according to my nature not out of spite
    I rebuffed her remarks politely.

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    Man MK that's some dope ish you wrote.
    Today is my birthday and I been running all over the place, about to get ready to go downtown got reservations.
    Been partying all week really... uhh.

    This is a terrible habit I am forming but I'll make up by dropping some killer votes and critique. Sincerely Cigma.
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  6. fairydance2000

    fairydance2000 don't wait, Procrastinate

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    Riot
    I sorry riot I found it hard work to read at times.
    I am a lazy reader; I rely on simply clear images
    The story was good. The rhymes were also o
    All the potential was there for a brilliant read.
    But I got so lost and seem to have mixed imagery.
    It made it confusing for me. But a Hugh job

    Cigma
    What can I say, I wish you had time to get your verse done, but hey it’s your birthday.
    So I am just glad what you wrote rhymed, made since and was spelt correct
    Vote riot
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  7. Riot

    Riot The Dark Hero.

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    Sorry, I'm having trouble copying and pasting, But I did vote on all matches this week.

    Thanks.

    Happy B-day Cigs
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  8. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

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    Riot -Now i know you didn't really try hard here and that is apparent. The flow was good but the story wasn't very entertaining. It just seemed to be bland...nothing exciting to me. Still the mechanics were good. Next week, try harder or get raped by Shadow.


    Fave line -
    "Walked a few minutes, turned around
    inside me, my heart was ascend
    through dark bitterness, heard a sound
    echoing his whimpers, in the wind."


    Cigma -Why don't you ever finish your stories lol. You always start strong and give me interest but then you just leave me hanging. You lose because of this. Thanks for showing up tho dude. I can't wait to see you try harder.

    Fave line -
    "We met when she was roughed and broken up,
    I was naive to love, no idea what it consisted of.
    She asked me question bluntly, hunting,
    hoping I would open up, give her something,
    but all my life I never trusted women lightly
    So according to my nature not out of spite
    I rebuffed her remarks politely."


    V/ Riot for obvious reasons
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  9. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

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    Riot up 2 to -4
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  10. Cigma

    Cigma Maxwell's Demon

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    MK -

    I enjoy the ***** delivery style, short and compact. You used to be overly ornate with your lines but this is complete 180. The scene on the bus had just enough detail to create the scene and the reasoning and emotional state of the man as he was forced off the bus with the bedraggled man, and he was the one that got barfed on lol.

    Yes I forgot writing isn't all pain and heartache. I'm pretty melancholy these days... Story like this is good for the soul. You have control over your actions. Don't forget your manners and values. It's redeeming to read. Nice message with good execution imagery and emotion.
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  11. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    cigma wins 2 to -2
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