[Week 29] 5. Tbone(2-1) vs 6. Breathless(8-19)

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  1. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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  2. tbone

    tbone Well-Known Member

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    Ya record is a window to ur soul, he think it's a fluke
    Go and try to shine, won't change how nyggaZ close they blinds on u
    wit ya set ups, it'll take cheats and code books to formulate punchlines
    With ya verse, looking like a guide outline from nursery rhymes
    Know u reading this sqush face, lemon lime
    would name flip ya name, but I ain't stuck in 99
    all ur fuck ass shit, after this you'll be right back in the back of the line
    yea bj gas me, but he didnt do me what he done to u in a sec out of time
    Shit I dont know if u battle him, I'm doing what u doing just trying to rhyme
    But fuck it if the voters don't see it, this me doing u for the last time

    Aight...

    Back on this real shit, I'm nothing to be fool wit
    U a silly hoe filt wit gas, talking all that dumb shit
    See me in ya city, feeling that we breezy
    Till I make it known, that you do this for a hobby
    Jai did beat u, even those that you won too
    So it's not shocking, I'm battling a name u could live up to
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  3. breathlesss

    breathlesss Registered Sex Offender

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    hold it homie, whoa, yer actin' like I shook you son...
    I didn't mean to kill this shakin' baby, but, I coulda no showed and still took the won
    win, whatever, shit kid, my stretched lines fulla filler woulda been more than ill enough
    acting like some bad ass... million to one odds, all that villain stuff
    stops the exact instant you turn yer god damned computer off
    thinkin' that you were tough... pfft... watch this mororon fail
    catch a truly rough old school as fuck TB death like I'm playin' Oregon trail
    yea, I did stutter, to keep the flow smooth like I spit butter
    so ya better fuckin' believe I'm the realest fat white liquid giver like gripped utters
    shit, mutterin' under my breath with my lips covered
    would leave a bigger impression than any ancient secrets you could disscover
    I'd stick a fist up yer trick mother's slit, bust her clit in half, get smothered in blood an laugh...
    when I happen to wonder if it'll be half or double that I gotta pay yer pimp brother in cash...
    there, faggot, that's how you rip syllables on the wavelength of rhythm and rhyme
    you ain't intricate, you're pitiful, wave g'bye, herb, its about time you wither and die
    the clock's final spin has come hither and nigh
    whether it's somethin' yer with or it's why... you must figure just tryin'
    is worth it, but uh uh... you ain't ripe yet, one whiff a' my cock an' ya cry
    quick switchin' from fresh to death to bitchin' up and dead
    I'd say get in the kitchen an' make me sammich, but I bet you ain't even got the bread....

    you got 1999 problems and rapping is one... nuff said
    *crossed arm, peace sign, sideways lean back stance*
    beotch
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  4. SonnyDaze

    SonnyDaze 7 train heavyweight

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    Tbone:

    Ya record is a window to ur soul, he think it's a fluke
    Go and try to shine, won't change how nyggaZ close they blinds on u

    Thought this was a decent opener but the rest of the verse was really sub par to me. I'm assuming you didn't put a lot of effort into it. Not saying that quickly written verses can't be dope.. but when you get to the point where you're rhyming "breezy" with "hobby", you gotta take a step back and ask yourself if you can do better.

    Breathless:

    I'd stick a fist up yer trick mother's slit, bust her clit in half, get smothered in blood an laugh...
    when I happen to wonder if it'll be half or double that I gotta pay yer pimp brother in cash...
    there, faggot, that's how you rip syllables on the wavelength of rhythm and rhyme
    you ain't intricate, you're pitiful, wave g'bye, herb, its about time you wither and die
    the clock's final spin has come hither and nigh
    whether it's somethin' yer with or it's why... you must figure just tryin'
    is worth it, but uh uh... you ain't ripe yet, one whiff a' my cock an' ya cry

    Thought your verse was okay up to that point but damn, you killed those lines right there. You definitely had the all around better verse.

    Vote: Breathless.
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  5. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    Bone:

    Jai did beat u, even those that you won too
    So it's not shocking, I'm battling a name u could live up to


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    Breath:

    thinkin' that you were tough... pfft... watch this mororon fail
    catch a truly rough old school as fuck TB death like I'm playin' Oregon trail


    not a good battle. ive seen better from both. but the Oregon trail line was my favorite, so vote - breath
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  6. C Price

    C Price New Member

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    T Bone you just plain out sucked....didn't like one line...

    I Admit that Breath did kill with that oregan trail line as well the bar right after that was garbage as fuck almost wanted to stop reading....but you took the win with garbage

    Vote Breath
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  7. Gee Wilikers

    Gee Wilikers G Willy

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    this was coo. tbone had some good flow. i thought the opener was a good start. wanted to see more lines like it but still coo verse. breathless had a good flow and rhyme scheme too. oregon trail was good, as was pimp brother line cuz it made me laugh.

    in the end im giving it to breathless who i thought had the better verse. good job.
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  8. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    Breath wins in votes. loses for no links
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