[Week 25] 5. Murderous Keys(15-6) vs 6. Cereal_Killer(2-2)

Discussion in 'The Rapmusic Storytelling/Topical League' started by Tacky Jones, Feb 14, 2011.

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  1. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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  2. Cereal_Killer

    Cereal_Killer no ESCAPE

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  3. Cereal_Killer

    Cereal_Killer no ESCAPE

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    Operation Northwoods
    Operation Northwoods
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    Will you die for your country, shed blood for your flag
    In the bowels of hell will you prevail on my command
    Will you portray patriotism before the body bag
    Or will you stand back and watch your comrade’s collapse
    You have to crack some eggs to make a damn omelet
    The bigger picture is framed and it’s us whom stand honest
    ..
    Here I sit before the leading officer with my Caribbean descent
    I’m a CIA operative aware on how quick terrorism ascends
    Fidel Castro has just announce all of Cuba as communist’s
    And the American government now must keep its promises
    To make you feel safe by any means necessary
    Even if it means a one way ticket to the cemetery
    You see in America the Jewish population is vast
    They have their fingers in every pie and the power to cast
    The swing vote on this countries legal operations
    So we need Cuba as a threat for the civil rights of the population
    And this is why Operation Northwoods exists
    To exterminate bad beliefs that could affect the future of our kids
    I dress in my civilian gear and stroll down Miami streets
    It’s hot, my head is heavy and my leather shoes are sticking to my feet
    My duffle bag swings as I shuffle through the wind
    Then walk into The Jewish Community Centre with a grin
    I place a large quantity of c4 at the pillars where you enter
    People are praying to their mentor as I pass with a different agenda
    I bend pass the people as my charge is lethal
    I know the civilians in this building won’t see this brutal
    Act of equality, honestly I am doing this for you
    You want to eat the cow but you don’t want to see the truth
    I wait once I place the package and then I walk outside
    I blow the building to pieces and the rubble does fly
    The tip was given and all the FBI has already arrived
    So I sit down in my chair as the only one to survive
    Politics is a game and you either win or you lose
    As I get arrested I wonder what is going on in the sport news
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  4. Riot

    Riot The Dark Hero.

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    Extention Please. TY.
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  5. fairydance2000

    fairydance2000 don't wait, Procrastinate

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    ok again i dont know if the other person is a no show, but i think the deadline has passed.
    Your verse was well thought out, with very nice rhymes.
    A smooth flow start to finish you didn’t miss a beat. I am glad to see that you didn’t give up any of the stories plot in trade for the wording and flow you nailed it all. I like the way you have broken it up and set it out.
    It makes it very easy to read and with the powerful imagery and strong story line it was easy to follow the story. Enjoyable yet tragic story.
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  6. Coup d'état

    Coup d'état Don't believe the hype

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    When I first read this I thought I was being lectured, like you were disclosing some shit like wiki-links. And I loved that, because it brought a suspension, a alarmist tone to the whole verse. Flow and pacing were right for the verse. Beautiful job here, you did some sort of research and I can tell it inspired you.

    I always think of you as a writer by that first verse you posted about the lesbian girl and how it went back in time...I'm awaiting for a similar drop from you in the future.
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  7. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    CK wins by no show
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