[Week 22] [Contender] 3. Breathless(7-13) vs 4. PharCyzE(1-2)

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  1. Tacky Jones

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  2. breathlesss

    breathlesss Registered Sex Offender

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    i will go roughly a score, give or take a quaternion
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  3. breathlesss

    breathlesss Registered Sex Offender

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    yea, you got yer first win, good job, now try this on pharcyze, it was a lucky start
    with the unignorable reason it was won on some no show shit ... just a pharc ...
    ... the poster boy for this 106th an' Park Immortal Technique shit
    resortin' to horrorcore, the only time you've really aborted a feat is,
    while attemptin' to drop an album tryin' to break the record for bein' the most formidable linguist...
    ...and realizin' you're not gonna sell 'em ...
    Yer distastefully depressing lines need a flavor enhancement,
    Use Effexor Cyze, a quip mint, something ta make it worth upliftin'
    I see you don't like stretch lines, so you try to work ellipsis............... ... .............
    I can't tell if you're a rapper or a fat dyke at Curves for Women
    don't sweat it dude, cut the stance, you're not intimidating
    if you ever threw akimbo slice punch... ,
    ...it's from back when he was a kid in the mid eighties
    you didn't scare me, in fact, wouldn't even if you could do it
    you ain't a visionary of rap, so phar, man, you just look stupid
    you'll never cite me as one a' yer blowhard fans motherfucker...
    ...I ain't gettin' caught in yer deep gays
    you could cross cyze on a boat between alaska an' russia...
    ...an' he'd still not fuckin' see Strait
    Now, I'm Bering in mind, you barely got the wheels in yer brain spinnin'
    comparing to mine, yer grind is to a halt, feelin' like trained women
    got yer face flushed, embareassed, but straight up,...
    ...here's the deal, son, you ain't winnin'
    pull the race card and get spanked hard...
    ...actin' like yer shit don't stank, Phar...
    ...you could peel fuckin' paint with it
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  4. BarZ.

    BarZ. Over Everything

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    aight quick key...


    the names PharZ homie, i'm known for them dope lyricals
    u couldn't pay some1 to scan thru them bars... ask most clericals?
    they fear the flow... pussies scared to jump in da battle ring
    til the point they run n get breathless... ur a fall guy 2 battle me
    u betta bring a calvary.. grandma, uncles, n let ya daddy creep
    THESE letters cause lynchings, n i'll play hangman w/ ya family tree
    i use da force - u force more like gravity w/ those tragic keys
    - ask'n me.? this faggot
    ..............wouldn't throw u 4 a hook if ended wit a fatality
    i'll kill this shit.. than fuck his moms but wont kiss this whore n sex
    i left noticing: DAMN, that's how yall relate... w/ the morn'n breath
    u know how to diss some1? can't tell when u write'n ya speech
    punches...? Island a couple that'll make u wake up in a hawaiin retreat #BOW
    i keep it short, simple to the point.. u write stories as a fuck'n trend
    i mean, if ya lines got any longer
    ....... - u could throw roller coasters n theme parks in front of them
    spit windz til u fuck'n bend.. this pussy win.? highly doubted
    make'm think he caught the holy ghost.. literally, knock the hell up out'em
    i'm supply'n to ya slump.. ya Ass is Fake n what u write'n is sooo butt
    plain to see ya outta here.. when i send u fly'n w/ a punch (think)
    at least u ain't disguising that u suck.. insects hate this thugs presence
    breath nice.? he beat'n round the bush so much... now a ladybug's pregnant
    Phar a trendsetter - n ya punches remind me how I pass'em Punk
    breath after breath i'm giving breath life.. shit, i could be an asthma pump
    ask this chump..? boredom speaks when he forms a speech...
    - u'll need a coach, referees.. lil niggas go'n deep
    ..........n a prize 2 disney world..!
    cuz ya record looks lyk the score n a pop warner league














    #Lesson.Learned
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  5. mrsupahype

    mrsupahype New Member

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    going for phar because he had better personals and attemps at the punches/ breathless almost had it with the vocab but lack personals/ good battle to both!!

    my vote pharcyze
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  6. Significantt

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    they fear the flow... pussies scared to jump in da battle ring
    til the point they run n get breathless... ur a fall guy 2 battle me
    u know how to diss some1? can't tell when u write'n ya speech
    punches...? Island a couple that'll make u wake up in a hawaiin retreat
    i keep it short, simple to the point.. u write stories as a fuck'n trend
    i mean, if ya lines got any longer
    ....... - u could throw roller coasters n theme parks in front of them
    ^^^heh LOTB

    Vs

    yea, you got yer first win, good job, now try this on pharcyze, it was a lucky start
    with the unignorable reason it was won on some no show shit ... just a pharc
    you didn't scare me, in fact, wouldn't even if you could do it
    you ain't a visionary of rap, so phar, man, you just look stupid
    you'll never cite me as one a' yer blowhard fans motherfucker...
    ...I ain't gettin' caught in yer deep gays
    you could cross cyze on a boat between alaska an' russia...
    ...an' he'd still not fuckin' see Strait

    Decent showing here, breathless had a few concepts I liked but the stretched bars did take if way from them a bit. Overall I would have liked to see more punches in a 20 line verse but solid drop none the less. Pharc had the better read, better structure(I'd still lose the -..... It just isn't necessary) his concepts were stronger & better flipped. The island wordplay & theme park lines could fall into the played category, reguardless pharc had enough material to take the W.

    V/pharc
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  7. Yessir.its.Kin

    Yessir.its.Kin New Member

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    Breath- ... the poster boy for this 106th an' Park Immortal Technique shit
    resortin' to horrorcore, the only time you've really aborted a feat is,
    while attemptin' to drop an album tryin' to break the record for bein' the most formidable linguist... - Nice shit...u have a weird way of structuring' ya linez..makes it hard to follow at 1st

    Use Effexor Cyze, a quip mint, something ta make it worth upliftin'
    I see you don't like stretch lines, so you try to work ellipsis
    -wordplay was there...needz some work to hit harder

    you could cross cyze on a boat between alaska an' russia...
    ...an' he'd still not fuckin' see Strait-- haha that shit was creative

    I liked the ending also your rhyme scheme got more creative an was smoother..bars weren't as stretched solid verse dog

    PHAR-

    slow start i thought an then....
    THESE letters cause lynchings, n i'll play hangman w/ ya family tree - Boom!
    i left noticing: DAMN, that's how yall relate... w/ the morn'n breath- haha

    punches...? Island a couple that'll make u wake up in a hawaiin retreat--- Daaaaamn

    make'm think he caught the holy ghost.. literally, knock the hell up out'em- Whoa

    breath after breath i'm giving breath life.. shit, i could be an asthma pump----Dope nameplay

    ending barz were cool...

    Breath was nice..but not as consistent wit punches an overall Phar had the harder linez

    Vote- PHARz
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  8. breathlesss

    breathlesss Registered Sex Offender

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    i had 10 punches, several of them overlapping...
    seriously, next week, i'm gonna break down my own verse
    i think...i'm just misunderstood...:drool: (<not drool, that's a tear in this case, a stupid, pixelated tear)


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  9. YonZula

    YonZula Yon the God

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    Breathless:
    you didn't scare me, in fact, wouldn't even if you could do it
    you ain't a visionary of rap, so phar, man, you just look stupid
    Now, I'm Bering in mind, you barely got the wheels in yer brain spinnin'
    comparing to mine, yer grind is to a halt, feelin' like trained women


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    phar
    they fear the flow... pussies scared to jump in da battle ring
    til the point they run n get breathless... ur a fall guy 2 battle me
    i use da force - u force more like gravity w/ those tragic keys
    - ask'n me.? this faggot
    ..............wouldn't throw u 4 a hook if ended wit a fatality
    u know how to diss some1? can't tell when u write'n ya speech
    punches...? Island a couple that'll make u wake up in a hawaiin retreat #BOW
    spit windz til u fuck'n bend.. this pussy win.? highly doubted
    make'm think he caught the holy ghost.. literally, knock the hell up out'em
    at least u ain't disguising that u suck.. insects hate this thugs presence
    breath nice.? he beat'n round the bush so much... now a ladybug's pregnant <--lmmfao


    vote=phar easy

    breath u have some nice concepts but ur lines are way too stretched to have a impact and ur structure is all off. Revamp ur style and compress ur ideas into shorter lines and u'll have a lot more of a impact cayse when u have to read 5 lines just to get to the punch it's not gonna hit hard
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  10. BarZ.

    BarZ. Over Everything

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  11. Tacky Jones

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