[Week 22] [Contender] 1. Yessir.its.Kin(2-0) vs 2. YonZula(2-0)

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  1. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    VERSES DUE THURSDAY @ 11:59 PST
    Line Limit: Minimum 8 lines, Maximum 40 (If opponent agrees, you may go over the line limit)
    NO BITING OR RECYCLING
    Biting/Recycling is the equivalent of a no show
    Extensions must be requested in your battle thread before the Thursday evening deadline. It is the opponents choice whether to allow the extension or not. Failure to accept/deny the request prior to the first vote being cast will result in the extension being allowed.
    If granted, the extension overrides the deadline for BOTH battlers
    A No Show results in a loss and automatic sign out
    If your opponent fails to show, you must still post at least 4 lines and 3 voting links for your victory.
    A title wont change hands by no show
    COMPETITORS MAY ONLY POST THREE TIMES IN THEIR MATCH. A CHECK IN, THEIR VERSE, AND THEIR LINKS. EXCESSIVE POSTING WILL RESULT IN A LOSS OF VOTES.
    COMPETITORS MAY ONLY POST ONCE IN AN OPPONENTS BATTLE. A VOTE. ANYTHING UNNECCESARY WILL RESULT IN A LOSS OF VOTES. IF YOU HAVE SOMETHING TO SAY, EITHER TAKE IT TO THE LOUNGE OR PM THE PERSON.
    First battler to post is allowed to edit their verse up until the second battler posts theirs. Once the second battler posts, they are allowed to edit their verse until the first vote is casted.
    The Second battler to post cannot post more lines than the first. Doing so will result in DQ.
    Disruptive members will be banned from the league will and have their posts moved to the garbage bin thread.
    UNDER NO CIRCUMSTANCES CAN A NON-MOD MAKE A THREAD IN THE LEAGUE. YOU WILL BE BANNED FROM THE SITE FOR A WEEK. THIS IS YOUR WARNING!!!!!

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    VOTES ARE DUE SUNDAY NIGHT @ 8:59 PST
    You must vote on at least 5 matches(provided there are 5 matches to vote on, if no vote on whichever battles are open) and post the links in your thread. For every link not posted you will lose a vote.
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    Voting is open past the deadline in the case that I’m late starting the new week.
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  2. YonZula

    YonZula Yon the God

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  3. Yessir.its.Kin

    Yessir.its.Kin New Member

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  4. Yessir.its.Kin

    Yessir.its.Kin New Member

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    Apology Owin', cuz I Will Sin...leave thiz Dude Slandered
    I Been Stellar wit Punches....thiz match I call em Zu-Landers!!

    Letz Go.....
    Last week had Phar Sighted..but I don't see u makin' Contact wit Kin
    da Chainsawz wit Him... First time Yon'll be Raw when I Detach his Skin
    Deaths Prepared, throw his Half Assed Raps in da Grass in a Empty Square
    Im Twice as Nice........... tell Y I'm his MC Squared!!
    Ya Barz are Frail, Mine Hard as Nailz, ya Record gettin Marked in Braille
    Your about to be 2 for 1.....Turn Son into a Bargain Sale!!
    Yea....I gotta Bone to Pick like an Itch on Skeletonz
    I drop a Ghost Rider Reference, Then you Do, Guess im Ghost Writin Sentances!!
    Levelz Beyond Im Beastin' upon da Weakest of Pawnz
    Ya Namez Meanin' aint Wrong....We Get it....we Caught the Z's After tha YON!!
    ya Tactics Lackin' a Craft fa' Clashin'
    You Subscribin' to my Delivery... Thats why they Brought tha Mag In!
    Stampede an Crack ya Back, I'm Guaranteed ta' Smash thiz Cat
    He doesn't have tha Upper Hand on Barz, Yon's an Amputee Acrobat!!!!
    Him Winnin? His Prime Writtenz Non Fiction, Theres no Even Oddz
    Check tha Predictionz, even da Priest Admittin' he dont Believe in GOD!!!!
    Want Revenge thats Significant..tha Bright Sidez tha Voterz
    You Losin to me is only puttin' you One Step Closer!!!
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  5. YonZula

    YonZula Yon the God

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    last time i went light, it's time to finish him off
    he got rid of his dashes just to turn around and run into this loss
    what did the voters see? while u did get my worst
    i still beat that ass backwards, ya shit couldn't even nik my verse
    i'll murder ya lover, yon known for lettin the ratchet off
    see i'm killin kinsman, n there ain't no biological attachment involved
    who gives a fuck if u flow, i'll still tame ya show
    leave this K silent, he'll end up changing his name to know
    sayin u fuckin hoes?, shit we cannot tell
    i think ur gay, hell even ur favorite drink is a cocktail
    ur not hard or scary, ur just a small time joke
    i seen kinfolk, made me realize gangbangin's hit an all time low
    u had a nice lil run, now ya stuff's gotta sit
    the honeymoon is over, somehow ur still gettin fucked like a bitch
    ur soft as shit, u may try to pass it as just a doubt
    he watches wedding shows and probably cries when they bring the dresses out
    i've been known here for a while, n i'm observant too
    wack fuck, u been here since 09 and this is the first we've heard of u
    lil dick fucka, u need to take notes from the leader holmes
    i could Lin'd u some of mine, u still wouldn't bring it when the Heat is on

    ^^see what i did there lol
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  6. YonZula

    YonZula Yon the God

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    hope you let this stand i completely forgot the due date was last night i keep thinking it's friday night
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  7. Yessir.its.Kin

    Yessir.its.Kin New Member

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    all good Man... let it Ride!
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  8. Significantt

    Significantt New Member

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    Levelz Beyond Im Beastin' upon da Weakest of Pawnz
    Ya Namez Meanin' aint Wrong....We Get it....we Caught the Z's After tha YON!!
    Him Winnin? His Prime Writtenz Non Fiction, Theres no Even Oddz
    Check tha Predictionz, even da Priest Admittin' he dont Believe in GOD!!!!

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    last time i went light, it's time to finish him off
    he got rid of his dashes just to turn around and run into this loss
    i'll murder ya lover, yon known for lettin the ratchet off
    see i'm killin kinsman, n there ain't no biological attachment involved
    u had a nice lil run, now ya stuff's gotta sit
    the honeymoon is over, somehow ur still gettin fucked like a bitch
    lil dick fucka, u need to take notes from the leader holmes
    i could Lin'd u some of mine, u still wouldn't bring it when the Heat is on

    Solid battle, Kin had a few bars worth mentioning but the bolding your wordplay & punches is a rookie move to me thats lost points. Overall kin had good flow & decent structure but lacked the hard hitting punches it would have taken to win this one. Yon has improved since our last match, I could tell this verse was most likely keyed & he still had a few cool personals along with some wordplay I was feeling. Yons punches hit harder & his concepts were stronger, he takes this one hands down.

    V/Yon
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  9. breathlesss

    breathlesss Registered Sex Offender

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    coulda been close but i think yes had it in all categories, yon had good punches but nothing really spectacular, while yes's verse actually had some stand outs for me

    Stampede an Crack ya Back, I'm Guaranteed ta' Smash thiz Cat
    He doesn't have tha Upper Hand on Barz, Yon's an Amputee Acrobat!!!!
    Him Winnin? His Prime Writtenz Non Fiction, Theres no Even Oddz
    Check tha Predictionz, even da Priest Admittin' he dont Believe in GOD!!!!

    while Yon's verse was pretty much "i'll kill you, you're gay, and wimpy... sports reference"

    vote = Yes
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  10. BarZ.

    BarZ. Over Everything

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    Apology Owin', cuz I Will Sin...leave thiz Dude Slandered
    I Been Stellar wit Punches....thiz match I call em Zu-Landers!!
    Fuck'n Dope... i think u should've said my punches been stellar.. w/p is sick here

    Letz Go.....
    Last week had Phar Sighted..but I don't see u makin' Contact wit Kin
    da Chainsawz wit Him... First time Yon'll be Raw when I Detach his Skin
    ehh
    Deaths Prepared, throw his Half Assed Raps in da Grass in a Empty Square
    Im Twice as Nice........... tell Y I'm his MC Squared!!
    PLAYED.. could've had a better flip cuz this been done a million times
    Ya Barz are Frail, Mine Hard as Nailz, ya Record gettin Marked in Braille
    Your about to be 2 for 1.....Turn Son into a Bargain Sale!!
    ya first line.. record marked in braille..? wtf.? set up sucks.. filler could be better... second line is pretty coo.. would be dope if u did somtin like:
    ya record, shit it wont be hard to tell
    that your about to be 2 for 1.... etc. etc....

    Yea....I gotta Bone to Pick like an Itch on Skeletonz
    I drop a Ghost Rider Reference, Then you Do, Guess im Ghost Writin Sentances!!
    bone to pick.. like itch on skeleton.. again wtf.? this ain't 99 bruh...
    2nd line... haha.. dope

    Levelz Beyond Im Beastin' upon da Weakest of Pawnz
    Ya Namez Meanin' aint Wrong....We Get it....we Caught the Z's After tha YON!!
    DEAD... this is Fuck'n Dope - BEST LOTB IMO..
    ya Tactics Lackin' a Craft fa' Clashin'
    You Subscribin' to my Delivery... Thats why they Brought tha Mag In!
    ehh
    Stampede an Crack ya Back, I'm Guaranteed ta' Smash thiz Cat
    He doesn't have tha Upper Hand on Barz, Yon's an Amputee Acrobat!!!!
    PLAYED.. very played
    Him Winnin? His Prime Writtenz Non Fiction, Theres no Even Oddz
    Check tha Predictionz, even da Priest Admittin' he dont Believe in GOD!!!
    coulda been dope.. if u added some reference w/ church in the first line..
    ya first line dont' just have to rhyme.. u can lead it into ya 2nd to make stronger connections and harder hitting punches.. it's decent at best

    Want Revenge thats Significant..tha Bright Sidez tha Voterz
    You Losin to me is only puttin' you One Step Closer!!!
    fuc'n dope... this what i'm talking bout.. the set up and closer go perfect 2gether..






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    last time i went light, it's time to finish him off
    he got rid of his dashes just to turn around and run into this loss
    coo
    what did the voters see? while u did get my worst
    i still beat that ass backwards, ya shit couldn't even nik my verse
    beat backwards. and flip name lines are PLAYED.. gotta be more innovative w/ it[/b]
    i'll murder ya lover, yon known for lettin the ratchet off
    see i'm killin kinsman, n there ain't no biological attachment involved
    its decent
    who gives a fuck if u flow, i'll still tame ya show
    leave this K silent, he'll end up changing his name to know
    tame ya show..? 2nd bar - i get it.. but i dont' get where ur going w/ it.. leave k silent and change his name to know.. but no1 calls him K - we call him Kin/Yes.. why would he change his name to know if u left the k silent... i get it, but it doesn't make sense all together
    sayin u fuckin hoes?, shit we cannot tell
    i think ur gay, hell even ur favorite drink is a cocktail
    LOL... Funny
    ur not hard or scary, ur just a small time joke
    i seen kinfolk, made me realize gangbangin's hit an all time low
    Bwuahahahahahaa... DEAD
    u had a nice lil run, now ya stuff's gotta sit
    the honeymoon is over, somehow ur still gettin fucked like a bitch
    YonZ.. ur sleep'n w/ bars like this
    ur soft as shit, u may try to pass it as just a doubt
    he watches wedding shows and probably cries when they bring the dresses out
    more of a comedic bar that doesn't make u laugh.. u watch too much GT battles fam
    i've been known here for a while, n i'm observant too
    wack fuck, u been here since 09 and this is the first we've heard of u
    cool.... coulda worded it to make it better.. there's been a million lines like this too... the no1 heard of you cuz u been registered for years shit
    lil dick fucka, u need to take notes from the leader holmes
    i could Lin'd u some of mine, u still wouldn't bring it when the Heat is on
    cool



    Overall:
    I think Yes came w/ some dope bars.. he just needs to work on set ups
    YonZ rushed his verse and didn't write what i've seen from him in past battles it seems... i think he underestimated Yes and that was his downfall
    when i really read and brokedown the verses i think Yes took this clearly w/ all around more solid verse.. had better bars and harder hitting punches...

    Vote- KIN
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  11. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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