[Week 20][Champ] 1. RaZpUTIN(2-1) vs 2. PharCyzE(1-0)

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  1. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    VERSES DUE THURSDAY @ 11:59 PST
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    NO BITING OR RECYCLING
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    Extensions must be requested in your battle thread before the Thursday evening deadline. It is the opponents choice whether to allow the extension or not. Failure to accept/deny the request prior to the first vote being cast will result in the extension being allowed.
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  2. BarZ.

    BarZ. Over Everything

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    wanna rock w/ 30..
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  3. D-MONIK

    D-MONIK Active Member

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  4. BarZ.

    BarZ. Over Everything

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    i'll edit w/ verse n links....

    i got 30 for ya i'm drop'n 2morrow
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  5. D-MONIK

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    Fuck outta here

    It's obvious your an alias, wouldn't have made it without the switch, dude
    ya bars stretched, and the only thing that's Phar Fetched..is to say that's^ NOT a Bitch Move
    regardless of how you got here, im'a drop you from the top tier
    Or maybe just the highest pier, they said ya flow was nice...till' they find you inna wier
    I'm fighting a queer, so its k.o. to Cyze, I got writes like im Pacqiuo
    and you blackin' out, grinding ya gears to stay alive cuz dis' tranny out
    I'm manning up like a Giant, you Payton, you manning down
    Except you brake ya neck for gays who check ya, faggot clown
    ill leave this supposed Contender, hurt worse than the after birth
    So just because you won one, your record will reflect that afterwards
    I replied to a classified, "cougar down for selfless fucking"
    "if my son shows up, your there to help me with the plumbing"
    I knocked on the door, said, "Erm, I'm here to be the house sitter"
    ..she told me to "come inside", and I was all ready on the couch with her
    So how are you even here? This ain't March Madness, you kidding me?
    Your a Cindarella story because even ya sisters are a Step above you lyrically
    its as clear as ya heels to see that RaZ is takin the title, whore
    You should've just signed out last week, and made that ya Final Four
    might'a had a bitch at one point, like the dirty version of Rack City, guy
    But the moment they realize you aren't Pharcyde, then they keep on Passing you By
    I'll serve him faster then drive through, you have the stature of fries
    Subtract the swagger an championship pride, you're like illmaculate, Cyze
    Them lines havnt been fresh since 05', or even when you first listened to grind time
    So say that I ain't a veteran, just remember I was one of 'em who originally spit it in 99'

    24.
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  6. BarZ.

    BarZ. Over Everything

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    look.,


    write'n this brawl.. i'll leave u knock'd the fuck out - awkward silence n all
    n i bet delay out will be long... cuz this fags swag has that kind of a pause
    #PAUSE, Steal ya fan base.. when this mans dazed w/ a right n he's lost
    if he builds another buzz..... it'll attract metal detectors cuz i wired his jaw
    my creativity and wordplay is mad fly - bird brains....
    while Raz so fuck'n far under see level..... dodge'n crabs n rape'n mermaids
    See you step'd 2 a tyrant when flow'n whose rhymes is the dopest
    - that'll have Raz Fall Back in a Slump.......
    ... if it ain't writer's block... iono why but you could try scoliosis
    that's when this guy gets 2 choke'n... n starts to spew rubbish
    get'n torso bad, when do'n the Mag.! lets just say, u'll need a new stomach
    see, my knowledge of insight granted could find atlantis... Real Talk #No lying
    while ur depth drops in deadly lengths...... only if u ignore the no diving
    battle Phar, u fell in a hole blindly.... i'm known to give'm platinum bro.
    buddy, how u gon shine w/ that name.. n the END: TIN couldn't pass for gold
    see, i gotta savage mold... lace lines - u'd swear these here snatch'd ya soul
    i mean, u ain't felt nothing this dope.... since 1st time u took Gramur's blow
    the names Phar homie..! i spit them real non-fictional lessons
    opposites attract, if u get in a squeeze.. i know u wont - y invest n a weapon?
    in fact, it ain't funny ur wack but i gots to trip for a second
    - cuz if being garbage was a crime
    ..... u needa be electrocuted & place ya trash can in witness protection
    NE1 can write a couple good bars... but finding consistency's the key
    n Raz u been locked out long enuff to file a complaint w/ the rest of the league
    now, am i learn'n this right? by ya record n how u word'n them fights..
    - outta 30 lines - only 10 are worth what u write...
    ................ basically, ur only worth 1/3 of ya hype....!
    So, if ur well rounded........ shit, i must be the circle of life


    #Lesson.Learned










    edited: deleted last 4.... said i was drop'n 30 n u drop 24 early.. :)
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  8. ThisisDAM

    ThisisDAM Turn The Pages

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    Both came cool. I think phar started off real slow and after the middle part picked it up a bit. I felt Raz was more consistent in his attack. Nothing that really was whoa or outstanding but consistent nice stuff. The Pharcyde line was cool. Phar ended well. But the rest of the verse hurt him IMO. Vote - Raz
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  9. Yessir.its.Kin

    Yessir.its.Kin New Member

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    Raz
    I got writes like im Pacqiuo
    and you blackin' out, grinding ya gears to stay alive cuz dis' tranny out- Made me laugh wit' dat one

    ill leave this supposed Contender, hurt worse than the after birth
    So just because you won one, your record will reflect that afterwards - HEAAAAT!!! a fan of number flips wit' Punchez....That shit was nice

    Cinderarella line was a stretch....aight tho

    I'll serve him faster then drive through, you have the stature of fries
    Subtract the swagger an championship pride, you're like illmaculate, Cyze - Fire!!

    U had some Hard hitters man...lotta smooth easy to flow connectionz too solid verse
    cyze

    Wired jaw line was ehhh but....
    awkward silence n all
    n i bet delay out will be long- The Lay Out haha I liked that one!

    get'n torso bad, when do'n the Mag.! lets just say, u'll need a new stomach _ whoa I see ur specialty is makin wordz mean somethin else when u read DOPE

    Tin/Gold ehh

    So, if ur well rounded........ shit, i must be the circle of life...Your whole last 3 bars were Blazin' Hard hitting

    thiz shit is tough to call....Cyze hands down had da Better closer....an opener. But i felt there was more of a Hot line/ filler line then what Raz had...

    Vote- Raz....by an Inch....only cuz' of consistency but this shit was a dope battle
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  10. YonZula

    YonZula Yon the God

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    Raz had,

    I knocked on the door, said, "Erm, I'm here to be the house sitter"
    ..she told me to "come inside", and I was all ready on the couch with her
    might'a had a bitch at one point, like the dirty version of Rack City, guy
    But the moment they realize you aren't Pharcyde, then they keep on Passing you By



    Phar had,

    write'n this brawl.. i'll leave u knock'd the fuck out - awkward silence n all
    n i bet delay out will be long... cuz this fags swag has that kind of a pause
    my creativity and wordplay is mad fly - bird brains....
    while Raz so fuck'n far under see level..... dodge'n crabs n rape'n mermaids
    that's when this guy gets 2 choke'n... n starts to spew rubbish
    get'n torso bad, when do'n the Mag.! lets just say, u'll need a new stomach
    battle Phar, u fell in a hole blindly.... i'm known to give'm platinum bro.
    buddy, how u gon shine w/ that name.. n the END: TIN couldn't pass for gold
    ................ basically, ur only worth 1/3 of ya hype....!
    So, if ur well rounded........ shit, i must be the circle of life



    vote=phar actually a pretty nice verse there...raz was way too basic in the rest of his verse
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  11. breathlesss

    breathlesss Registered Sex Offender

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    this was a pretty nice battle here, both had strong points, but i saw one having less weak points
    raz was upper level consistent throughout, a perfect blend of lyricism and meaning, really no complaints
    phar, if you would've been as clean with the punchiness in the first two thirds as you were with the delivery and flow of the last third, you would've probably got this, but the beginning was just, off, too much, overall pretty good though

    vote = Raz
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  12. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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