[Week 19] [Contender] 1. Gramur(4-2) vs 2. RaZpUTIN(1-1)

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  1. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    VERSES DUE THURSDAY @ 11:59 PST
    Line Limit: Minimum 8 lines, Maximum 40 (If opponent agrees, you may go over the line limit)
    NO BITING OR RECYCLING
    Biting/Recycling is the equivalent of a no show
    Extensions must be requested in your battle thread before the Thursday evening deadline. It is the opponents choice whether to allow the extension or not. Failure to accept/deny the request prior to the first vote being cast will result in the extension being allowed.
    If granted, the extension overrides the deadline for BOTH battlers
    A No Show results in a loss and automatic sign out
    If your opponent fails to show, you must still post at least 4 lines and 3 voting links for your victory.
    A title wont change hands by no show
    COMPETITORS MAY ONLY POST THREE TIMES IN THEIR MATCH. A CHECK IN, THEIR VERSE, AND THEIR LINKS. EXCESSIVE POSTING WILL RESULT IN A LOSS OF VOTES.
    COMPETITORS MAY ONLY POST ONCE IN AN OPPONENTS BATTLE. A VOTE. ANYTHING UNNECCESARY WILL RESULT IN A LOSS OF VOTES. IF YOU HAVE SOMETHING TO SAY, EITHER TAKE IT TO THE LOUNGE OR PM THE PERSON.
    First battler to post is allowed to edit their verse up until the second battler posts theirs. Once the second battler posts, they are allowed to edit their verse until the first vote is casted.
    The Second battler to post cannot post more lines than the first. Doing so will result in DQ.
    Disruptive members will be banned from the league will and have their posts moved to the garbage bin thread.
    UNDER NO CIRCUMSTANCES CAN A NON-MOD MAKE A THREAD IN THE LEAGUE. YOU WILL BE BANNED FROM THE SITE FOR A WEEK. THIS IS YOUR WARNING!!!!!

    VOTING RULES:
    VOTES ARE DUE SUNDAY NIGHT @ 8:59 PST
    You must vote on at least 5 matches(provided there are 5 matches to vote on, if no vote on whichever battles are open) and post the links in your thread. For every link not posted you will lose a vote.
    Votes MUST be at least two lines per verse, and must have a vote casted. There is no voting for ties.
    Voting is open past the deadline in the case that I’m late starting the new week.
    Voting is open to current participants, RBL mods, and former champs. Former champs must vote on at least three matches to have their vote counted, and must adhere to the same voting rules.


    Any changes must be agreed upon by both participants and a forum mod.

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  2. Gramur

    Gramur Yung Troy

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  3. D-MONIK

    D-MONIK Active Member

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    In check
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  4. D-MONIK

    D-MONIK Active Member

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    You barely beat me bitch, consider this verse a lesson learned
    I'd say they wouldn't vote for yer dumb ass again...
    ..but even George W Bush served a second term
    I give a fuck if you give ya girl a Ring, she loves my sperm
    She said I got a Giant D and you come up shorter than 49er punt returns
    you use that as an excuse cuz you just can't get ya bars right
    ..so you're the one that's always currently viewing the archives
    You a champion? Of what? Bammer?, damn...I can't believe it
    sayin he worth a 20, so HOW THE FUCK is this GRAM Prestigious
    Actin as if you hold value, maybe as a fag elitist
    The only thing you'd go for on the streets...is tranny penis
    You Randolph at the mouth online, but in person prolly wouldn't say shit
    So if you were on your Grizzly...it would probably be on some Gay shit
    Your bars have been played since 01', take this newbie off tha throne
    Ya like Oprah Winfrey, taking other peoples lines then ya use em' on your O.W.N.
    My fists exist as dope, always connected witta nose
    So hope the medics'll show..
    Cuz my hands'll leave this Gramur more fucked up than a Twitter post
    I'm winning this match, its a fact don't even try when dissing you dude
    Cuz you got a signature move that consists of sleeping with nikkas, you lose
    How can you be happy with those one dimensional punches? Ya NOT CONCEITED
    You'll get a Pause put on ya breathin, cuz I basically just caught a body...Quadroplegic
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  5. Gramur

    Gramur Yung Troy

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    fuck you..I'd only lose if it was voting deductions
    your scripts are BET movies..always bogus productions
    so why the fuck you think ya starting plenty trends??
    if you ever had a buzz you're like a Hornet..won't be seeing many wins
    you'll forever ride the bench so get some practice in
    we never hearing Raz Allstate...til agents claiming you're an accident
    I'm such a heavyweight..never have this Gram mistakin'
    you're as lightweight as Damon...and got me laughin' at ya Wayan
    stop fakin because ya hairy mom called you a Great
    and you know that bitch lyin'...just from that Mane on her face
    I'm bout to give you 2 L's...for fuckin wasting my time
    ^so you'll be LL...cuz you aint had a spark since Cool James in his prime
    and no one listens to ya rhymes ...you're a dreama'
    Bump N Raz ..got you panicking...looking for Neutrogena
    I aint seen ya wit..you really have nothing to boast about
    You're just like King Nick...minus the dope rhymes and veteran clout
    how you gansta'? your weak heart'll get defeated
    you're a bum in the summer <<the ONLY way you on the block when it's heated
    you're the weakest...so quit the act you little fag
    cuz whether it's your verses or stiletto's..you're blatantly a drag

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  6. BarZ.

    BarZ. Over Everything

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    Overall:
    Raz had a pretty decent verse.. some nice concepts and great wording throughout w/ a nice flow....
    Gram verse had nice wording w/ a lot of played concepts... flow was nice too but the punches didnt have alot effect because of the concepts

    Vote - Raz - 4 better creativity in his verse...
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  7. D-MONIK

    D-MONIK Active Member

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  8. Menso

    Menso Go Lakers!

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    If this was 10 lines, you would have had an outstanding verse; the first half was bananas. Kinda fell off after that, though.

    Damn! Raz first half of the verse won it for me, dude was going ham. Gram was ok, but didn't have enough for the win.

    Vote Raz
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  9. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    RaZ wins 2-0
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