[WEEK 19][CHAMPIONSHIP]C. Nu'maaN 12-2 vs 2. .:Pain:. 11-4

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  1. xX_NASTY_Xx

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    WEEK 19



    VERSUS DUE: Every Friday @ 11:59 PM EST
    LINE LIMIT: Minimum of 16 lines, Maximum of 64
    ** NO RECYCLING, NO EXCEPTIONS **
    •Recycling is the equivalent to that of a no-show and will be treated as such, thus resulting in a loss in favor of the participant whom chose to recycle and a win in favor of his/her opponent
    •Extensions may only be granted if a moderator has given consent prior to a verse being posted in the match OR your opponent gives his consent
    •If granted, the extension will override deadline for both participants extending it for no more than 24 hours
    •CHECK-INS are encouraged, but not required
    •Verses MUST incorporate AT LEAST 1 of the provided topics or pictures
    •A failure to show will result in a loss and a sign out by default
    •If your opponent fails to show, you MUST STILL post AT LEAST 5 lines (4-15) AND 3 voting links in order to claim victory
    •A Championship Title WILL NOT be decided by way of no-show!!!
    •If an opponent fails to show in a Championship match, the remaining participant will be ranked as the number 1 seed, but will not be considered a Champion until a win by vote
    •Upon your second no show, you will be suspended for two weeks of competition. A third no show will result in a three week suspension and a fourth will result in a suspension for the remainder of the season. There is no suspension for first time no showers.
    • Competitors are limited to posting 3 times in their own match, which allows for checking in, posting votes, and posting a verse. For each post over 3 unless deemed necessary by the mods, the competitor will be docked one vote.
    • Each competitor may only post once in another competitors battle allowing for a vote and nothing more, if you would like an explanation or to explain as to why a vote was cast a certain way, you can pm them or point things out properly in the vote to begin with. Violating this will result in losing a vote in your match.
    • A verse can be edited if and only if it is the first verse to be posted and the other verse has yet to be posted or it is the second verse posted and a vote has yet to be received.
    • Members found constantly disruptive to the league will have their sign-in ignored.​
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  2. Nu'maaN

    Nu'maaN Anu'naki, Nuqqa.

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    shalom, fellow bretheren of the book.

    i will need an extension, man ...

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  3. .:Pain:.

    .:Pain:. Futurely J. Keeper

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    Np...

    I need one too...
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  4. .:Pain:.

    .:Pain:. Futurely J. Keeper

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    The House Inside My head
    I've been traversing this pot holed lost soul path,
    I think I'll have the same luck those old fossils had,
    I walk with a condom wrapped,
    Round my gonzo past, to make sure it's safe to fuck with that,
    Occasionally, I look in the mirror and see,
    Two deep dark hazel doors open and peer into me,
    And when it appears that I'm weak,
    I disapear for the week, twisted, sippin' beers in defeat,
    But when that mirror reappears, I feel hopeless,
    Cuz no one dares enter those doors that are always open...

    It's cold, it's so sick inside that house,
    But most don't even enter to ever find that out,
    Being a gentleman, I hold the door for my date,
    But they get turned away by the clutter that adorns my brain,
    Not to mention the second hand smoke is intolerable,
    And they hafta leave if they wanna powder their nose,
    They see lust, overloaded, and blood by the ocean,
    Love that was broken by slow, clumsy emotions,
    A brain full of momentos, shame, and a pencil,
    The rest of the place is plagued with wasted potential,
    Lacerations and cuts, slashed by hatred and love,
    Scar tissue a large issue, like my fascination with drugs,
    The entire structure seems it would break with a breeze,
    The house itself is strong, the foundation is weak,
    It's grip with the ground slips, it's easy to lose,
    The day it doesn't slip is the day I'm cleanin' my room,
    So I'll make another trip through these thunderin' storms,
    Fuck this shit, I'll make my way to somebody elses door,
    I know I'll be accepted, just like I usually am,
    They'll ask me to help, say they could use another hand,
    And I'll arrange, sweep, and clean, with a grin on my face,
    Revive the plants of love that have withered in shame,
    I'll eat the plate of dinner that they'll offer to me,
    Call it delicious, even though it's prolly awful to me,
    As I leave, I'll wave, with a grin on my face,
    Look back at their plants as they wither in shame,
    It'll be another day, walking home, feet feelin' weak,
    As I sprint through the cold, and leap through the weeds,
    And I'll arrive, realize it's finally to easy to see,
    That my doors are always open, even for me...​
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  5. Nu'maaN

    Nu'maaN Anu'naki, Nuqqa.

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    bring forth, the fourth.

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    behold the pale horse, this world's my race course/
    i ride with great force, you reside with stale corpse/
    i came to slay all, the coroners have warned ya/
    the breath in your chest has just left, i'm upon ya/
    coz i was born to .. make martyrs of your fathers/
    the torture i author cause horrible horrors/
    we guardin' the garden of eden believe it/
    you heathens! we spawn from the semen of demon/
    death is my name, i bare scars of the crucifix/
    got more disciples than the stars in the universe/
    damned & cursed, the four horsemen of apocalypse/
    all your swords and your force couldn't conquer this/
    grannnnted dominion over quarter of the earth/
    if i deem you a threat, i'll just slaughter you at birth/
    giving orders with a curse, i embody death and decay/
    there's no running from this, don't try and step out the way ...


    meh, didn't really want to no-show against pain.

    hardly any time, so just a basic open mic verse that i've used in the past so pain can atleast get critiqued for his efforts.

    enjoy the crown jae, i'm out ...

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  6. Betty*Beretta

    Betty*Beretta New Member

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    Nu:

    At least you showed. Not much to say that wasn't stated by you under your drop.

    Pain:

    Sick drop! I really liked this piece. I loved the topic you chose and the way it was executed, very well written!!! My fave parts:

    "Occasionally, I look in the mirror and see,
    Two deep dark hazel doors open and peer into me,
    And when it appears that I'm weak,
    I disapear for the week, twisted, sippin' beers in defeat,"

    "It's cold, it's so sick inside that house,
    But most don't even enter to ever find that out,
    Being a gentleman, I hold the door for my date,
    But they get turned away by the clutter that adorns my brain,"

    "A brain full of momentos, shame, and a pencil,
    The rest of the place is plagued with wasted potential,"

    VOTE = Pain

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