WEEK 19: 7. Odin 5-1 vs. 8. Voltron 4-0

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  1. john hensley

    john hensley 7xRBL

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  2. OptimusRhyme

    OptimusRhyme the people's champ

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  3. Odin.

    Odin. Step Ya Game Up

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    word up, post early so we get alot of votes
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  4. voltron

    voltron get money, fuck newbies

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    20, early
    match it







    Check it,
    I’ll tell the truth, then watch this sly geek shiver
    I voted against Demik only cos you promised me a bi-week, nigga!
    Now try to deliver.. a boss of my peers, Q flawless and feared
    I make NOISE, you make Creaks not even Dawson could hear
    So im mean as fuck, and I hate fags so when I lean to chuck
    Its cos I ain’t seen a sweeter O since Krispy Kreme blew up
    A live writer, and i promise you'll fry in my live cipher
    Cos if you play the role well, you’ll still die like Mekhi Phifer
    Now bat your eyes, cos you’ll feel guilty when I cast your lies..
    O didn’t flip, but took a Phys Ed course in Fracture lines
    And here’s the Urban Prowlers Archives, now think as I past time
    Why use personals? when ya whole verse is that link in my last line
    So his rhymin career, severely sucks at every time it appears
    Man I’ve seen better lines at Toys R Us around this time of the year
    And my greatness aroma, is strong enough to put a break to a coma
    While O’s wack in so many degrees, they need to make a diploma
    So get slain to hell, cos ima shoot until ya veins’ll swell
    And watch O hit the ‘black top’ quicker than Dave Chappelle
    And when I spit-flame-shit, I plan to give this prick-fame-quick
    And make this OD the biggest death ever since Rick James, bitch!






    holler
    and dont feed nigga
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  5. Odin.

    Odin. Step Ya Game Up

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    u still think u hot man?

    stop it, ya not a god but u must be a prophet,
    cuz a hot line, oracle verse is somethin u ain't dropped yet,

    ^^ that bum shines? u represent what dumb defines,
    u the only nigga left on the site usin cum lines,
    this man's bitchin, u prolly suffered a long hair transition,
    since u only beat Halloween Jack cuz i gave u an extension,
    attention.. the reason i helped this text geek,
    was to make it easy to be in the contendership next week,
    call it fair, u played yaself like solitare,
    u lose so much.. u made an art of how-to-draw despair,
    small & square, ya verse is a puzzle to make the most of it,
    it's such an unsolved mystery.. Robert Stack is hostin it,
    sign out & quit - Dawson's Creak came out in '98
    it's the year '05.. & ya STILL use lines about the shit?
    ya style's degraded, that Urban Prowler Archive concept betrayed it
    cuz u bit lines from those ppl before they even made it
    ayo u know i'll throw a blow at ya fro with no stoppin,
    ya floppin.. even ya flow don't show,
    ya droppin in the league, & investigatin the problem of it,
    but why? u already succeed in gettin to the bottom of it,

    too easy man.. it's too easy
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  6. voltron

    voltron get money, fuck newbies

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  7. Jai-Z

    Jai-Z Bangem, Jai

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    voltron..

    was pretty decent. i liked ur krispy kreme line and ur diploma 1 alot. real smart. especially the diploma. the dawson creek line was whack.. i could see it coming.. and u didnt disappoint. i also enjoyed the fracture line. but who doesnt enjoy a fracture line?? u went on to claim that odin/eyedeal bites.. when u dint have to really keep stating it, when he's KNOWN for doing so.. its quite comical.lol but anyway... decent verse

    odin/eyedeal..

    i should shoot u for having a cumline. even tho u were merely pointing out we he done previously, but still.. i should shoot u. u r better than that! but to be honest and critical.. bcus thats how i am.. i only liked 1 line in ur verse. and ur opponent already pointed it out.. and it kinda took the fun out for me, cus i wanted to do it. ur unsolved mystery line was nice. but that was about it. u feeded and came up with ur stomach growling. what a waste of a snack.. oh well.


    vote-voltron
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  8. Calibre

    Calibre Peoples Champ

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    Nice Battle Guys..


    Voltron..
    First bar was funny.. Nice opener, feelin it. Dawson line was nice.. cool wordplay,
    The follow on line was cool too, nice flow, so far everything seems smooth, haha
    loving the flow as im reading along cool lines.. lol @ the toys R us line.. cool line with
    the urban prowlers link too.. LMFAO.. the degree line killed this ahahahah PROPS MAN..
    next line is nice..flow on the last line was godly, shows true professionalism.. Nice..

    8.5/10

    Odin..
    ahahah first line did some sonnage.. Nice.. haha nect line was nice too..
    next line was ok not bad, average.. next line was genious.. godly lovin it..
    LMFAO next line is killin it, word up dilly niceness.. next line was played off
    Volts verse but its still nice.. next line again was cool but played off volts verse..
    still ya done him with it.. last line was nice to finish it off..


    7.5/10

    Overall..
    I enjoyed Voltrons verse more.. He seemed a little more consistent.. Both were a
    good read but I'm gonna give it to Volt..

    Vote - Voltron
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  9. FaceLess

    FaceLess jook is my dad..

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    we can sure tell jook didnt write this odin verse...

    eyedeal u suck
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  10. voltron

    voltron get money, fuck newbies

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  11. Ja¢k £an†e®n

    Ja¢k £an†e®n Spirit of Vengeance

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    this man's bitchin, u prolly suffered a long hair transition,
    since u only beat Halloween Jack cuz i gave u an extension,
    attention.. the reason i helped this text geek,
    was to make it easy to be in the contendership next week,

    that alone is why in voting for voltron you bitch ass nigga.
    out.


    p.s.
    dont count this vote...
    i was just pissed from readin that bullshit...
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  12. voltron

    voltron get money, fuck newbies

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  13. Sikabod Khrayne

    Sikabod Khrayne Please Kill Me...

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    And my greatness aroma, is strong enough to put a break to a coma
    While O’s wack in so many degrees, they need to make a diploma
    your best punch, very witty..coulda hit harder, but was definitely feelin'.

    small & square, ya verse is a puzzle to make the most of it,
    it's such an unsolved mystery.. Robert Stack is hostin it,
    sign out & quit - Dawson's Creak came out in '98
    it's the year '05.. & ya STILL use lines about the shit?
    only have to here for you b/c they came back to back & they were both tight.
    to be honest the rest of your verse wasn't that appealing.

    overall, th first guy was pretty decent, an avg verse with one stand out line, the second guy seemed like he didn't put much into his verse, just got lucky with a couple lines. A couple I really liked

    v/ second guy
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  14. dak1ngpen

    dak1ngpen bow down bitch!!

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    pretty even battle but i think odin takes this with better personals that connected better, we all know the "rumors" of eyedeal biting so its a played concept in my point of view but nice battle none the less

    good shit fellas

    vote- odin
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  15. john hensley

    john hensley 7xRBL

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    2-2, uppin...
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  16. iLL niGGa

    iLL niGGa aka quriosity

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    damn daily sins, why you have to vote?
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  17. David Lama..

    David Lama.. oh yea?

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    small & square, ya verse is a puzzle to make the most of it,
    it's such an unsolved mystery.. Robert Stack is hostin it,
    sign out & quit - Dawson's Creak came out in '98
    it's the year '05.. & ya STILL use lines about the shit?

    vs

    So im mean as fuck, and I hate fags so when I lean to chuck
    Its cos I ain’t seen a sweeter O since Krispy Kreme blew up

    summary- this was weird, I felt Voltrons flow more, but his punches werent cutting it, I seen stuff similiar to the creek line before, also the prowlers line.. and a couple other lines he had.. Odin just came fresher here and had more lines I felt, and out of the weaker lines that i didnt quote, I'm going with odin here, just by a bit.

    vote - Odin
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  18. Orange407County

    Orange407County Well-Known Member

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    vote - voltron...

    man the urban prowler line hit..LOL, but..it later gets disqualified cause of dill flippin it agains thim, which is also not necessarily a lie..

    Qs opener was good, ohpe it wasnt true tho dilly..
    chappelle line was coo, original..i liked the dawson line, ehhh at crispy kreme line..toys r us was coo, fracture...diplomas was iight..

    good verse, Q still nice.. ive fallen off in text lol..

    dill..

    didnt like the first couplet..iight personal about jack..how to draw line was iight...
    the urban prowlers shit is dope if u remember Q's past..but, the last few lines were blah... verse just wasnt put together that nice, some lines were forced and really did nothing for me...sorry fam
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  19. Defcon_5

    Defcon_5 Relax and take notes

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    sorry Syn but the vote before urs was the final and tie breaking vote

    winner Odin 3-2 record 6-1
    Q loses 4-1
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