WEEK 19: 11. Daedal 3-0 vs. 12. Halloween Jack 3-1

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  1. Halloween Jack

    Halloween Jack Heavens Demon

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  2. Phryme

    Phryme lets get it.

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    Maybe in '03 you'd have a chance to own me, why you talking, shit..
    The only time ANYBODY uses that concept now is if they're mocking it
    Quit with the bullshit.. You're horrible and you ain't sparkin dudes
    But I'll leave you blacked out so long you're ring tone'll darken too

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    when i enter this thread... all i smell is decay....
    cuz your condition is your name spelled backwards... minus the "L" an' the "A"...
    tell 'im to pay... broke bitch, quit rappin black...
    the only green from checks your raps generate look like that n that


    v/jack. more consistent with the rest of his verse. not much else to say. daedal just came too simple and not effective enough to get this as the W.

    good battle though.
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  3. Ribonuclease

    Ribonuclease New Member

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    Damn at a couple Jack lines this week.

    Ok
    cool battle

    Daedel - your opener was cool, good personal. the dress up for halloween thing was wack, simple concept and bad wording, too much words to explain a simple concept. the ring tone thing was decent, justnot worded well, or setup. the closer I wasnt really feeling. overall it seemed like you rushed it, seen much better from you, the punches were cool, and your rhyme scheme is good, just bad wording in my opinion.

    HJ -
    "first off...
    when i enter this thread... all i smell is decay....
    cuz your condition is your name spelled backwards... minus the "L" an' the "A"...
    -sick line, best of the battle, very good opener. witty shit, good setup.
    tell 'im to pay... broke bitch, quit rappin black...
    the only green from checks your raps generate look like that n that
    -this was clever, cool punch.
    perm thing was decent, the virus thing was wack, played concept and I don't really think thats a diss.
    just moan n whelp im leavin you with broken bones n welts...
    and the only way you'd see a W is if you cloned ya self..."
    wow, this was sick as fuck. I have never seen that done before, killed with the closer.
    good verse jack, had a couple very quotable punches in there, your rhyme scheme is sick, if you can set your shit up good and still have a rhyme scheme like that it helps. This is much better than anything Ive seen you drop before.

    Vote - HJ
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  4. Halloween Jack

    Halloween Jack Heavens Demon

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    haa good looks ribo, 'preciate it...

    7-1 'ween.
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  5. KooL La!d

    KooL La!d iRock Cafe

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    lol at the fact he got his called pulled by using the alphabet line and the dude go and does another letter line...wow, alright..uhm..

    this battle was kinda dull.... dae's verse was full of...the only time and i'll ...lines...gotta be more complex with your shit man...and as for jack.., those letter lines...lmao..L and the A..D's, only ( there comes that word again ) time you see a W..just to fucking basic....but i'd have to go with Jack..his verse was on point and more consistent...feeling his verse overall...
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  6. dak1ngpen

    dak1ngpen bow down bitch!!

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    do i really have to explain this is the second battle i seen like this

    people should really start droppin whole verses or forget about the whole no show verse option because it ruins what would be good battles

    vote- jack easily
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  7. Young Philly

    Young Philly Broad Street Bully

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    Yo wtf?
    When did voting get this fucking bad.

    Anyway, Halloween Jack's verse was pretty corny minus the opener.
    Everything else was non-witty or played.
    That double - u line has been used over 20 times since I used it over a year ago.
    Wow.

    Daedal, not bad at all.
    Opener and the dressing up lines were nice as shit.
    Rest was okay, nothing special.
    But definitly a solid-enough verse to win.

    whoa.

    V/THIS LEAGUES VOTING IS TRASH

    daedal
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  8. john hensley

    john hensley 7xRBL

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    Halloween Jack wins (4-1)
    Daedal loses (3-1)
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