[Week 18][Contender] 3. ShadowWarriorfs(11-6) vs 4. Breathless(7-10)

Discussion in 'The Rapmusic Storytelling/Topical League' started by Tacky Jones, May 15, 2012.

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  1. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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  2. Shadow

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    hi buddy
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  3. Shadow

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    Fade away

    Perhaps I was naïve to believe that I mattered
    Ashamed of what most perceived to be greed shattered
    Our morals breaking our spirits like glasses splattered
    Against the wall, we fear it like victims beaten and battered
    Trapped within corrupt systems stripped of family and friends
    Trying not to miss them as our minds breaks instead of bends
    I wanted to do what it takes to relinquish his oppressive rule
    I thought it would be simple but he was aggressive and cruel
    “Pitiful fool!” he yelled as his guards tossed me into the streets
    Joanne fell at the feet of these Romans and Greeks
    As they laugh and spit on her while she speaks
    So she turns the other cheek ignoring the stench on their breath
    Body drenched with sweat I stand with everything I had left
    A slender man assault by His command, His decree
    Soul fading, mind on the brink of history
    Joanne refusing to flee begging them to leave me be
    They turn to her; Joanne knew that she would never be free
    Calling her a bottom feeder despite wanting to breed her
    “Quickly seize her!” they yelled, “No one can equal Caesar”
    'Caesar, the people pleaser’ yet I considered him a fecal leader
    Because he is an arrogant king and an evil deceiver
    But I was helpless as they carried Joanne away
    Watching from a distances as I begin to fade away
    My existence now like a ghost drifting in the wind
    Searching for Joanne, hoping she would be by my side again


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    If he shows, i need an extension lol
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  4. breathlesss

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    prides

    Trying to leave an impression on his father
    The young'un tends to end up bein' a bother
    Intentions to show manliness with fast swipes
    of clawed hands as soon as he sees his dad's hide
    It's a sad life to lead, the truth of the matter is
    you have to be more ruthless in order to prove you should come after him
    But bein' a boy cub under the reign of a beast
    is like seein' the joy in what has never came to be
    It's plain to see the anger in his eyes, and that's just sayin' the least
    His own son, seemingly a stranger in his mind, grown up
    From the manger to the lies, now he's laying there with no cuts
    Strangled to remind him what he raised gave those fucks
    which he didn't, but should've in such dangerous times, so suck
    it up old fella, we all have our own day to die
    Oh shucks, I'd be lion if I don't say it, but guys
    the mane moral of this story's that it's just the way of the prides
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  5. breathlesss

    breathlesss Registered Sex Offender

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  6. TheInkwell

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    shadow: what did you try that was different here? the rhymes? Actually, something does feel a bit different, but can't place my finger on it.. just a tiny bit though. there was one or two grammatical errors, but.. whatever. you rhymed "away" at the end twice in the end... c'mon man =.= The story presented was well told, but I'd encourage you to keep trying new things and branching out.

    breathless: this felt like a step back from whatever improvement you made last week. wait. oh snap! did you post a verse without first making excuses and telling us everything you did prior to posting? ... tears. of. joy. I think if you spent more time and put more thought into your verses, they'd be alot better. As always, I see hints of potential there, but it's always buried under a layer mediocrity..

    vote: shadow. see you in the champ match, you better not no show on me.
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  7. breathlesss

    breathlesss Registered Sex Offender

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    Improvement last week? Wtf I wrote that tight rope piece in like a half hour, I thought it was one of the lamest things I've ever wrote, with the most worthless rhyme schemes I've ever thought of
    I get it now... this league has nothing to do with the lyrical aspect of hip hop, I guess you guys don't care about how the story is told so much as what story is told.
    Next week ill include some gay ass character names with specifically defined personality traits and a pathetically straight forward plotline that you all can follow
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  8. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    Shadow wins
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